So, I did like the little additions included in the revised version. I wish it would have been included in the initial release so the story could have progressed, but I understand setbacks happen.
I do have one major gripe, narrative-wise. I have 2 straightforward playthroughs (alpha and beta), but I also like experimenting and mixing things up. Like, an alpha/confident playthrough with Sunny dating Marcus, or a beta-ish playthrough with Sunny dating MC. I liked that in my alpha and Sunny/Marcus playthrough, there are little changes made in the dialog showing that Sunny is dating Marcus, while MC still acts alpha (and Sunny is finding herself more attracted toward MC). But the beta and Sunny/MC playthrough is lacking.
While fluctuating between -1 and 1 confidence, I'm able to have MC and Sunny dating, but still get the beta scene at the party (with Emma and Marcus). Doing that, Sunny indicates that she's not dating Marcus, and at Liza's house, Sunny kisses MC and everything. However, when she starts retelling the story of the party, it reverts to the dialog as if Sunny and Marcus are dating. And that is capped off by the sex scene with Sunny and Marcus.
The big issue with that, is if Sunny and MC are dating, she would have no reason to have sex with Marcus. That's not even mentioning the fact that Sunny is still a virgin if she's dating MC. So, it was a little disappointing that the scene stills happens, even if she's dating MC.
King of Lust, maybe I'm experimenting too much, and you guys never considered the possibility of a beta MC dating Sunny. But it does feel like an opportunity was missed there, like a variable where the scene doesn't happen if she's dating MC. Or if she does have sex with Marcus, some dialog indicating how she's betraying MC, with MC being heartbroken that she did it.
I don't know, I'm probably making things too complicated, but narratively, it doesn't really make sense as is. Just wanted to give my two cents.
