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There were a few game breaking bugs in the distributable in my last post. Here's a version without them.

Plus, I’ve added a finished day. (Day 4)

Windows/Linux:
(File removed. Newer file below.)

File is 1.43 GB.

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Again, I am not associated with the original game or creator in any way.

Edit: There is a minor script bug in day 4, concerning a name as well as a continuity error. It will be addressed in the following update.
 
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Here is the rewrite up to Day 5. I had a complaint about a bug. Next update will be after Day 8 is completed, unless this version also has a game breaking bug.

Changelog:
- Added an additional jerkoff shower scene with fanart (permission given)
- Fixed various bugs and continuity errors
- Added a 'watch porn' option to computer - It's light on content for now.
- Script updated to Day 5. All previous days edited for flow.

Major Script Changes:
- Stepsister romance can start in Day 5 - (Can’t have good NTR without a relationship.)
- Stepmother can now be directly shamed after date with Lucas - (Tentative plan is to have a branching domination style - More Governess vs Gentle Mommy Domme.)

Windows/Linux:
(Download removed. Rewrite now has it's own thread.)

File is 1.50 GB.

I am not associated with the developer or the original game in anyway.
 
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Palos69

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I’m really busting these out. But I realized I might be spamming the thread. Should I just make my own?

Not sure on the protocol because the game isn’t abandoned. And the original creator never responds to any of my messages with bug fixes. I did get a thank you once, when I initially asked if I could fix his script.
 
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I’m really busting these out. But I realized I might be spamming the thread. Should I just make my own?

Not sure on the protocol because the game isn’t abandoned. And the original creator never responds to any of my messages (even ones where I fixed bugs in his game). I did get a thank you when I asked if I could fix his script.
I'm eagerly waiting for the work to be completed, then I'll download it and play it.
 

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I’m really busting these out. But I realized I might be spamming the thread. Should I just make my own?

Not sure on the protocol because the game isn’t abandoned. And the original creator never responds to any of my messages (even ones where I fixed bugs in his game). I did get a thank you when I asked if I could fix his script.
Just keep doing the good work and hone your skills. If you do have a notion to start your own project you will have a head start.
 
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Palos69

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Just keep doing the good work and hone your skills. If you do have a notion to start your own project you will have a head start.
I meant make my own thread, not my own game. I have no idea when people comment if they’re talking about my modded version or the original.

It doesn’t have official approval like the guy who did the Tyrant mod, so I’m not sure what I’m allowed to do.

And to reiterate, I’m never going to paywall the project, or write an ending until the original game is done.
 

NewTricks

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I meant make my own thread, not my own game. I have no idea when people comment if they’re talking about my modded version or the original.

It doesn’t have official approval like the guy who did the Tyrant mod, so I’m not sure what I’m allowed to do.

And to reiterate, I’m never going to paywall the project, or write an ending until the original game is done.
Starting a thread of your own is a good idea. Most of the modders do it whether they have a Patreon or not. It will also streamline your turnaround for feedback knowing that they are talking about your own work and not the game in general.
 

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I’m really busting these out. But I realized I might be spamming the thread. Should I just make my own?

Not sure on the protocol because the game isn’t abandoned. And the original creator never responds to any of my messages (even ones where I sent bug fixes for his game). I did get a thank you once, when I initially asked if I could fix his script.
up to you, some mods make own thread and then update it and some make post on thread and then update that post when there's something to update. if unsure ask from mods.
 

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After reaching out to the mods, it was decided my rewrite should be in its own thread.

I created the request here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/vn-renpy-cultural-replay-a-culture-shock-story-0-2-palos69.195033/

It includes an update that adds a rewritten Day 6. It also adds the groundwork for some major structural changes to the story, including a switch from using "Day" to "Week" to progress time within the story. This will prevent everything from happening within a month.

A new "Relationship Event" system was also added, which allows dating the main girls in the story to not be restricted by a hardcoded script. For example, instead of missing a scene on Day 6 because you didn't have a high enough relationship score, you will get the scene at a later date when you do. This prevents rushing to "focus" dialogue choices on one character to get content. Hopefully, it will allow the story to feel more organic. I also felt like there needed to be generic events that just showed the main girls being affectionate with the MC.
 
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19Castiel23

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He got hospitalized/slept now, so won't happen in next update 99%
In the Animation Preview, King shared the visual of Marcus getting a Handjob in the hospital. Also, in the NTR dislike route, Marcus is not in the hospital but at home.
 
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