VN Ren'Py Culture Shock [Ch. 3 v0.1] [King of lust]

[Unselfish_Lover]

All of the grammar and syntax errors are kicking my OCD into overdrive.

 

[itsreallyme]

compressed version of first two chapters?

 

[stiltoboglovian412]

I didn't remember the English being so dreadful

 

[Nemesiz691]

So no tracy and marcus scenes.

 

[robrize2169]

no Marcus..makes the game so much better.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

If I was a supporter of "King of Lust," I'd ask for a refund. The grammar and punctuation is so Damn Bad it's laughable. It's like listening to Mozart on a toy piano played by a 3-year-old. For the number of supporters this dev has, it seems like they could put out some dough to fix the horrendous dialogue. The art and even the story are very good to amazing. I suggest supporters start asking for a better game in terms of dialogue. You're paying for it.

A couple examples.



It may be that it's only on day 35 because that's what I've been playing.

 

[Almighty]

So no tracy and marcus scenes.

I'm shocked since this is a NTR game first with non-ntr being the after thought.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

If I was a supporter of "King of Lust," I'd ask for a refund. The grammar and punctuation is so Damn Bad it's laughable. It's like listening to Mozart on a toy piano played by a 3-year-old. For the number of supporters this dev has, it seems like they could put out some dough to fix the horrendous dialogue. The art and even the story are very good to amazing. I suggest supporters start asking for a better game in terms of dialogue. You're paying for it.

A couple examples.

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It may be that it's only on day 35 because that's what I've been playing.

The dev is the furthest thing from a native English speaker, and basically everyone they work with.

I mean this is them talking about the last release and complaints about said grammer.

Talking about last update and some complains

Many people have been complaining about the grammars and dialogues mistakes from last couple of updates i understand this and work on proofreading has been going on

(This mistake was made by me as I used to edit dialogues in the image sequence and send it to the coder for making builds) . In a couple of days I will upload a new update that should fix all the language errors in the game.

 

[Cryptist]

What is the sixth sense? I don't see an ingame menu....

 

[nukatexaswolf]

Is there a android update download for this game

 

[Kuracnabicikli]

TF is this,just downloaded it and extracted

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Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 8.1.3.23091805
Wed Jul 24 07:40:26 2024

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

TF is this,just downloaded it and extracted

I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
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Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 8.1.3.23091805
Wed Jul 24 07:40:26 2024

Nah, you are using the mod which isn't for this version of the game...

 

[BaasB]

Zemax Engrish clan is spreading.

You must be registered to see the links

 

[MikeOG]

great update
just wished there was more Liza NTR

 

[itachi221997]

nice novel visual

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

The dev is the furthest thing from a native English speaker and basically everyone they work with.

I understand that better than many here.
I understand that not reading English well is a big hurdle from his point of view. I guess my point is that at this stage, with 600 pages of comments and easily 200+ supporters, he should have dealt with this Engrish issue. His supporters deserve that.

I'm not trying to demean him. Between art and dialogue, art is always going to be the strong suit. It's universal, and language isn't.

 

[kanekidom]

seems like damn near half the update was playing volleyball what a waste. I guess see you guys next year.

 

[THE KILLER 13]

If these dialogues (grammatical errors) are already bad in English, imagine when they are translated into Portuguese, my native language, bizarre errors, but other than that I like this game (with the incest patch of course).

 

[parqueo]

Could you give me chapter 1, 2 and 3 again, please compressed?

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

compressed version of first two chapters?

Could you give me chapter 1, 2 and 3 again, please compressed?

Search seems to work and they come up just fine.