juanel0

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I can't decide, so i'm going to ask all of you. The people who still visit this Treath and are still interested on this game and it's ending.

I want to make a "mod version/fan version" of the ending, from the ending of Uncle' Treatment", Where instead of dying, your Uncle survives and a new plan from your uncle for you, Amy, Chloe, Emily and Rachel, starts, maybe including Charlotte as well, but more like a "side girl" like Linda or Susan, Susan will always be part of Rachel's relationship, you just take your uncle's place in that.

But i can't decide if i should just add Rachel to endings, or try to add more... just have another trip to the yacht because the company will close a few months because of a "misterius virus", and in the yatch develop everything.

Including Chloe and Amy, to make choosing them a more "natural" option.

Right now, the only girls that is woth choosing is Emily, and don't get me wrong, i love Emily. But i think Chloe and Amy needed a little more, and i think there is a little of "Rachel/Susan" in "Emily/Linda" and try to explore that. Because Emily loves Linda, is not just sex, the spend way to much time together to never really adreess that.

And then get the ending, which will be kind of the same, with some minor dialog adjusments and maybe one or two more scenes.

Or i could just, add Rachel in episode 4, and then add Rachel as an option in episode 5, and just change the dialog a little in the rest of events.

NOTE: You uncle still dies at the end, you can't marry Rachel if your uncle lives, and you won't be forced to choose if he doesn't die. So it has to happend.

Right now, i can't really work on anything, because the equipment necesary for that, i'll be able to get in a few months, but i can write, and rewrite, and rewrite the story, until it's good enoght to be considered an "Alternative ending" and not just a "Mod/fan ending".

But that, will be decide by TheGary.
 
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During the 2nd island trip, Rachel began referring to the MC as her Master. In BDSM that term is usually (but not always) reserved for dominants who have a relationship with the sub/slave, so there was a hint there that the MC was getting into a relationship with her. Especially since he can also dominate Susan. So a relationship between MC and Rachel was definitely possible, the Dev chose not to go for that option, and that's OK, it is still a great game and the ending is fine.
 
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Here I have some full saves (nearly) of chapter 3 and 4 for anyone who needs, remember that you can (re)play the content of chapter 2 in chapter 3:

Note: even with everything done, you still need to read the walkthrough to revisit all the events. It's a sandbox game after all.

- Chapter 3 (on the yatch, 24-1-LT1.save )

- Chapter 3 (on the island, 24-2-LT1.save ): it's nearly full, you only need to complete a few more stars to wrap up the island

- Chapter 3 (in the office, 24-3-LT1.save )

- Chapter 4 ( ver 4-3-D, there're some one-time events so even with a full save you can still miss them, if you need a save for a specific event you only need to ask, I'll provide. This save is nearly full but I've done most of the events. 15-2-LT1.save )
 

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No Rachel ending, quoting the dev :
For me, Rachel had 3 endings. Rachel will always be there for the MC as you can see in the very last part of the game. I don't think a Rachel ending excluding Chloe, Emily, and Amy was needed.
But I understand people like you, who wanted to "end with Rachel"
 

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Oh well now can just copium. 2 years+ investment in Rachel paid off. Rachel seeing MC till the end what a really good way to end Rachel and then there's Amy who got her own ending good choice from dev.
 

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No Rachel ending, quoting the dev :
For me, Rachel had 3 endings. Rachel will always be there for the MC as you can see in the very last part of the game. I don't think a Rachel ending excluding Chloe, Emily, and Amy was needed.
But I understand people like you, who wanted to "end with Rachel"
Daken9 Naxos there you go Rachel got 3 endings just like what we wanted :poop:
 
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juanel0

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well, due to the response i had or the lack of it, i have decided to do both... in a way.

It's obvious that TheGary had some ideas for Rachel in episode 3 that were forgoten in episode 4 and 5, for many reasons.

But i want to know what his plan were, so i'll write my own version of this and a few more events until i'm able to become an almirant.
 

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Rachel has always been the MVP; undermining her in the second half was just weird and uncalled for. By reading the changelog; It's easy to notice how she didn't get any content in any of the latest chapters; this made me and many others lose all interest in continuing to play, what a letdown.
 

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Rachel has always been the MVP; undermining her in the second half was just weird and uncalled for. By reading the changelog; It's easy to notice how she didn't get any content in any of the latest chapters; this made me and many others lose all interest in continuing to play, what a letdown.
She did have content in the chapter 5 but yeah no ending with her ending is just she will always be there for MC a satisfying way for people who play for Rachel content:KEK:
 

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As of the end of chapter 3 at least, Amy is surprisingly the standout choice. Hated her when she showed up, but after a little training and coming to accept and enjoy her new role? Much better. As of the end of chapter 3 she's the only one who didn't just hint she loved the MC but outright said it. When she was excited about getting revenge on Chloe it just popped out.

Rachel is great and all, but she has Susan and won't really be 'yours'. Sure it could be written that she gave up Susan blah blah, but that wouldn't really fit.
 
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As of the end of chapter 3 at least, Amy is surprisingly the standout choice. Hated her when she showed up, but after a little training and coming to accept and enjoy her new role? Much better. As of the end of chapter 3 she's the only one who didn't just hint she loved the MC but outright said it. When she was excited about getting revenge on Chloe it just popped out.

Rachel is great and all, but she has Susan and won't really be 'yours'. Sure it could be written that she gave up Susan blah blah, but that wouldn't really fit.
Good to see that some people here see the rational in the storyline ;)
 
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As of the end of chapter 3 at least, Amy is surprisingly the standout choice. Hated her when she showed up, but after a little training and coming to accept and enjoy her new role? Much better. As of the end of chapter 3 she's the only one who didn't just hint she loved the MC but outright said it. When she was excited about getting revenge on Chloe it just popped out.

Rachel is great and all, but she has Susan and won't really be 'yours'. Sure it could be written that she gave up Susan blah blah, but that wouldn't really fit.
After what she did she just somehow love MC back hahahaha and accepting her role being as maid somehow make you ....She's just there more like a maid and a bitch that MC fuck every hole. Surely logical to love someone who make you a bitch instead of just sending her home so much love for that then you stil Besides it's not just about Rachel got no ending it just about how it just so sudden. Like so sudden she just step back to give chance to other. Uncle also suddenly die hahahaha hahaha. Imagine playing for years for dev just decided to just slap you in the face with that kind of choice. Not even that don't even bother with non canon ending with Rachel as if it's cannont be done with. Sure man a very satisfying feeling to see your favourite somehow got after playing around 2 years surely good decision for players who wanted her as ending. He can make ending with Amy but why not with Rachel. Some might even say Amy ending somehow weird to be in there truly he loves his fan by that decision. Some dev i know at least make a non canon ending to at least satisfy some people that has invested a lot of their time for the game and this dev isn't just slap you in the face with that choice and said Rachel with you in those 3 ending hahahahahahahahah top tier dev
 
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I would love to see a Rachel end. It is kinda odd to cut it out. We find out that she had Emily earlier in life so she would still have time to have more children. And it seemed uncle pushed hard to get MC to sleep with her. The whole submission island trip proves she was a perfect choice if you want. Plus an heir with Richard's wife would be a great end and would kinda make alot of sense
 
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juanel0

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It seems like a lot of people think like me.

This was an awesome game up to episode 3, then for no reason Rachel got cut out and your uncle die and out of nowhere there is an ending.

And just Emily's ending feel right, and it has room for improvement with the relationship with Linda that after episode 3 was just cut from the game too.

The ending for Chloe and Amy made no sense. Chloe likes getting spanked and there is barely any spanks for her in he ending, and for some reason she is a dominatrix that was something barely mention about her that was never develop.

Amy went from maid to dominatrix too, punishing constantly the maids that we meet one of them once and just for one little event. And she spank thing with her and Charlotte don't make any sense neither.

This is obviously not the ending TheGary wanted, is the ending he had to make because of the Patreon rules, that ban incest and the wishes of the almirants... Like giving the option so skip "hard spank" scenes, something that didn't happend in the first episodes.

Mark my word, after TheGary finish THE PATRIARCH... and maybe the next game, i will pay for him to develop the REAL version of CMA. The version that TheGary wanted to make, with the whole Master thing and a harem ending, because Fuck stupid rules that change the product of developers.
 
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It seems like a lot of people think like me.

This was an awesome game up to episode 3, then for no reason Rachel got cut out and your uncle die and out of nowhere there is an ending.

And just Emily's ending feel right, and it has room for improvement with the relationship with Linda that after episode 3 was just cut from the game too.

The ending for Chloe and Amy made no sense. Chloe likes getting spanked and there is barely any spanks for her in he ending, and for some reason she is a dominatrix that was something barely mention about her that was never develop.

Amy went from maid to dominatrix too, punishing constantly the maids that we meet one of them once and just for one little event. And she spank thing with her and Charlotte don't make any sense neither.

This is obviously not the ending TheGary wanted, is the ending he had to make because of the Patreon rules, that ban incest and the wishes of the almirants... Like giving the option so skip "hard spank" scenes, something that didn't happend in the first episodes.

Mark my word, after TheGary finish THE PATRIARCH... and maybe the next game, i will pay for him to develop the REAL version of CMA. The version that TheGary wanted to make, with the whole Master thing and a harem ending, because Fuck stupid rules that change the product of developers.
Weird thing to think about......their is no incest in the game to begin with.. everything in the game is non incest. Having the same last name isn't incest if no blood relations.... none of the character in the game share the same bloodline except Richard and MC. And that is 1 line removed since MC is only half blood related. Emily and Rachel are the only ones bound by blood again half...since two to tango. And it isn't like either wanted anything between them....it would have been easy to finish the game correctly. Honestly since Rachel is bound to Susan in a way could have done with a combined end...but the way it seemed Richard was a sub to Susan as well as Rachel...seems she was the dom in the 3 way relationship. Seeing MC doesn't have dick issues it might work more like the island event where Susan and MC dom Rachel and explore a switch relationship between themselves as well. This store has so much going for it....I loved the journey but the end seemed like it just didn't flow right. So much could have been expanded on. I dont for one second believe the Pateron excuse with limits because the game doesn't come close to breaking their rules and I refused that excuse...dev just couldn't bring themself to finish strong and just took the easy way out just to close the game off.....games that take too long lose money so I am sure they rushed to end and start a new project
 

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Weird thing to think about......their is no incest in the game to begin with.. everything in the game is non incest. Having the same last name isn't incest if no blood relations.... none of the character in the game share the same bloodline except Richard and MC. And that is 1 line removed since MC is only half blood related. Emily and Rachel are the only ones bound by blood again half...since two to tango. And it isn't like either wanted anything between them....it would have been easy to finish the game correctly. Honestly since Rachel is bound to Susan in a way could have done with a combined end...but the way it seemed Richard was a sub to Susan as well as Rachel...seems she was the dom in the 3 way relationship. Seeing MC doesn't have dick issues it might work more like the island event where Susan and MC dom Rachel and explore a switch relationship between themselves as well. This store has so much going for it....I loved the journey but the end seemed like it just didn't flow right. So much could have been expanded on. I dont for one second believe the Pateron excuse with limits because the game doesn't come close to breaking their rules and I refused that excuse...dev just couldn't bring themself to finish strong and just took the easy way out just to close the game off.....games that take too long lose money so I am sure they rushed to end and start a new project
There is no Rachel/Emily in the game, something that could have happened if you continue with the whole "Master thing" or in an "Harem ending", that "harem ending" is the thing that a lot of us wanted and something that couldn't happend because of Patreon.

And Rachel being "bound" to Susan... that's not a issue, since the MC started the relationship with Rachel, he has started to gain more and more autority and "push" Susan aside. Not cutting her of the relationship, but gaining autority over her and Rachel.

Besides, if you take your uncle's place in the company, you became Susan's boss... so you officialy have autority over her, so there is that.

But you are right about that, "games that take too long lose money so I am sure they rushed to end and start a new project", that's why i'm going to hire TheGary, and probably someone to help him to work in another version of CMA for as long as it takes...

That's not just a wish, that's a statement, if in 5 years TheGary is still working in games, i'm going to hire him to work in that and make the game as long as it needs to be.
 

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lol surprised to see this with a complete tag all of a sudden at any rate good job, having all those objectives like it was done works in one long game but having one for every action on each chapter was mildly amusing and frustrating at the same time since it was always new game each chapter lol

out of curiosity was there any resolution to the half baked plot that was going on?
 

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Depending on what you played for .. you get the gurl you choose,
You also get BFF and friends with benefits out of choosing your bethrothed.
You own everybody on the yacht, crowned the king of kinks
and the source of unlimmited pleasure and unquenched desire 4 all your babes.

Were you expecting some other resolution?
 

bongopt

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hey everyone

I'm still playing chapter one and this is a very long thread to search. I'm stuck and can't complete the first milestone because of these:

- rachel has to spank chloe with a paddle. if I hide her homework she gets spanked in the interior with emily watching, if I distract her I wait in the hall and peek her room every hour after and nothing happens. previosly rachel went to her roomto spank her but now nothing, how do Imake this happen?

- watch emily and linda together. it says there's an event at emily's room at 23pm, I have to knock on the dooraccording to the WT, I've done this every single say for 2 weeks and nothing happens. any help here?

I've tried the above actions in multiple days because I know they don't trigger every day, but it's too much, so there must be something I'm missing.

the in-game WT and tips kinda suck, but I'm enjoying the game and don't want to give up just yet

thanks in advance
 
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