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chapter 2
one event is constructed completely illogically.
event "enough is enough!" I'll explain now.
The MC must do daily cleaning.
the game does not take into account cleaning time. I usually make the MC do the cleaning as soon as he wakes up. that is, I woke up at 6 in the morning - which means cleaning begins at 6 in the morning.
now some logic. in real life, the day after the morning cleaning, the floors slowly become dirty. So? and when someone walks from the pool along the terrace, he cannot bring dirt to the floors that were dirty during the day, which were washed in the morning and not in the evening.
and the fact that the MC scolds to Linda is highly illogical and unfair.
and if you think about it, this is a violation of subordination, since Linda is not a subordinate of the MC, because she is subordinate to Rachel and Susan, who should decide on her punishment or encouragement.
it would be possible to introduce a check on when the cleaning was done - if after dinner, then the abuse of the MC at Linda because of the water dripping from her can be logically justified.
but when more than half a day has passed since the cleaning - there comes a moment of cognitive dissonance, it begins to seem that the MC is just a tyrant who loves to bully Linda simply because there is simply no one to stand up for Linda.
after all, if the MC makes a mistake in his actions regarding Emily or Chloe, Rachel will tear off not only his head, but also his balls, and Susan will swim away from the place where the corpse of the MC was thrown into the water. and her husband's money is enough to pay off both the parents of the MC and the law.
and only Linda - alone without any protection.
or DEV deliberately did this, lifting the veil over the character of the MC? well, he did a great job of it.
Now I consider MC - asshole-tyrant.
I repeat - potentially the event "enough is enough!" is avoidable without consequences for Linda.
and the fact that the event was made imposed, that is, activated without taking into account the style of playing the game, introduces a bit of illogicality and unjustified cruelty.
contractual cruelty in sexual games is one thing, and domestic cruelty is completely different.
if the first is tolerable, then the second is absolutely unacceptable.
one event is constructed completely illogically.
event "enough is enough!" I'll explain now.
The MC must do daily cleaning.
the game does not take into account cleaning time. I usually make the MC do the cleaning as soon as he wakes up. that is, I woke up at 6 in the morning - which means cleaning begins at 6 in the morning.
now some logic. in real life, the day after the morning cleaning, the floors slowly become dirty. So? and when someone walks from the pool along the terrace, he cannot bring dirt to the floors that were dirty during the day, which were washed in the morning and not in the evening.
and the fact that the MC scolds to Linda is highly illogical and unfair.
and if you think about it, this is a violation of subordination, since Linda is not a subordinate of the MC, because she is subordinate to Rachel and Susan, who should decide on her punishment or encouragement.
it would be possible to introduce a check on when the cleaning was done - if after dinner, then the abuse of the MC at Linda because of the water dripping from her can be logically justified.
but when more than half a day has passed since the cleaning - there comes a moment of cognitive dissonance, it begins to seem that the MC is just a tyrant who loves to bully Linda simply because there is simply no one to stand up for Linda.
after all, if the MC makes a mistake in his actions regarding Emily or Chloe, Rachel will tear off not only his head, but also his balls, and Susan will swim away from the place where the corpse of the MC was thrown into the water. and her husband's money is enough to pay off both the parents of the MC and the law.
and only Linda - alone without any protection.
or DEV deliberately did this, lifting the veil over the character of the MC? well, he did a great job of it.
Now I consider MC - asshole-tyrant.
I repeat - potentially the event "enough is enough!" is avoidable without consequences for Linda.
and the fact that the event was made imposed, that is, activated without taking into account the style of playing the game, introduces a bit of illogicality and unjustified cruelty.
contractual cruelty in sexual games is one thing, and domestic cruelty is completely different.
if the first is tolerable, then the second is absolutely unacceptable.