Some things i noticed, at the hotdog stand and back at the house, dropped is spelt 'droped'
When she is talking about shaving under her arms, 'atleast' neads a space between the words
'likes rice most anyways' , anyway
'starting cooking the fry chicken' - start cooking the fried chicken or start frying the chicken
in her thoughts Frank never has a capital F
'heard the school your going to' - you are or you're
another atleast when talking about skirt size
'this is going to be your first time' - This is going
'There for to help' - Therefore
'anything shorter then what i have on well show my behide almost and people will be able to see almost' - anything shorter than what i have on will almost show my behind and people will be able to see it
few ones later there is another behide and not behind
Lily isnt capitalised when Frank talks to her
'things ima need from the' - I am
'everything is writted' - written
'is like what frank said' - It is like what Frank said,