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- Jun 30, 2018
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YES - its up to a conversation between MrDots and owner of rights at moment.
there was (is) a little issue about the songs Melody performs.
This will be checked and solved as soon as possible
The animations in the last episode were so bad and some scenes so repetetive from earlier episodes... very dissapointing. And for God's sake, when i see that disgusting pubic hair red beard of our character... scenes of close ups on his face are making me vomit. And so little of Elena which became my favorite character instead of our retarded daughter.
it's good to know, i don't normally listen to any music in those games so i didn't even notice but damn i hope it will get settled quickly
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im not sure if we played the same game but i didn't see any end screen buddy... im sure there will be definitely more in store for us
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Well after the congratulations screen i mentally shut down. I dont see anything that interests me in the story after having sex with the daughter. I dont need 12 different positions. Dad and daughter lived forever happy after.
Elena for one thing is annoying as hell and looks like a 12 year old child.
The Mother has no plot to hunt the MC in any way left.
The story in and of itself is not that well written to be interesting in any way from this point on.
Plot twists? Maybe but i think the dev will rather focus on Melody and maybe make one more update for DMD before it ends.
So for me the game is done.
I'm just in shock buddy because i would never waste so much time on a game or anything rl if it was such a shit like u described. u are very persistent and to endure so much its impressive, I'm in so much admiration for u right now. u are an incredible person that's for sure, to force yourself and ur mind to play this, this abomination of a game. how did u do it if u don't mind me asking?
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I’ll report it over. But to be fair...
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Be in shock all you want buddy. I wrote over 40 books in my life and keep doing so for a living so far and in terms of story or plot DMD is not that impressive. My standards for a well written story or characters are high.
I could fill half a book with the issues of the characters, the story elements or the plot as a whole but thats not my business nor my concern.
Apart from one game on this forum most stories are garbage or absolutely ridiculous.
And sex games are not going to impress you with a well written story but with sex. In this case fucking your daughter.
And that part is done.
So in terms of story Mr. Dots would have to impress me alot with a plot twist pull out of nowhere to save this story AFTER having sex with the daughter.
The ppl who play DMD for the story are in the minority as are most ppl in this forum (lets be realistic here its all about sex ) are here for exactly that. Sure a well developed story has its benefits but DMD has no such thing.
All the story elements are there to blue ball you not to advance a plot.
And before you ask.
The game with a well written story and believable characters and plot is
Acting Lessons
Believeable well written characters.
A simple but realistic plot to follow and most important a story twist that has nothing to do with the sexual encounters or blue balling the player. Tragic and comedy well written into the plot elements.
Thats on point for a good story. Is the game short? Yes. Is it well written. Yes.
Is DMD well written? Depends on the view.
For a sex game absolutely.
For anything else. No.
And before you ask or bombard me with sarcasm again.
I write in german language and no i wont tell you the names of my books as its non of your business and my publishing company would not be very fond of me if i would do that in such a kind of forum.
PS: So far i got asked from 6 devs in this forum for story writing expertise and i didnt even charge money for it. And i will keep doing so if devs want to. I do this in my free time and help devs improve their story writing which for beginners is a nightmare to deal with. But thanks for the sarcasm. I enjoyed reading it ^^
Acting Lessons is a well written game and I understand you don't want to give out names of your books or publisher name but which games have you written for so people can try those out for a good story line?
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I see that you’ve comentend on a lot of projects in f95, so your interest must be visual oriented as opposed to literary. Otherwise, why spend so much time and interest in this medium.
We differ, perhaps, in that visuals alone do not interest me. Every good erotic image for me hints at a story behind that image. So for me, and perhaps many others, the DMD VN does not loose its interest in the loss of virginity, but rather in what happens next. So for me, at least, the last release was a culmination of one part of the story, but I’m much more interested in the next threads.
Now I can understand if you write in a fictional capacity, you bring a much more critical eye to the writing, etc. I get that as I do the same for live theater and for the actions of other attorneys in court as well as any legal movie or television show. I have a short fuse in those areas. But since I am not bringing those predispositions to DMD, I am still emotionally invested in the outcome.
“Is DMD well written? Depends on the view.
For a sex game absolutely.
For anything else. No.”
I disagree. I find this better writing than 99.9% of the writing in actual porn. I find the writing combined with visuals more engaging than a lot of television (esp the WB and Hallmark). I find the combination more engaging than most regional theater. But then, I am looking at the product as a whole.
I have not yet had the time to play “Acting Lessons”, though I hear good things. I will look forward to it. Btw, my favorite story thread so far out of any not MDots product has to be from Teachers Pets and the thread around the student who goes with the MC to the college open house - the combination of art, character build and scripting was great (although I admit I only followed it to where they were at the college sitting on the bench across from the fountain). Nice piece.
As an also unpaid contributor, I differ in what I find important in this VN. First, for me, the art is the draw of me to this VN. I got involved in this project to help with the storyline and bring a theater and legal background. DMD as a first project was (for me) captivating visually and concept wise; Melody is better; and I hope the next project will be even better. (However, with I keep coming back to DMD as the most captivating for me).
I see that you’ve comentend on a lot of projects in f95, so your interest must be visual oriented as opposed to literary. Otherwise, why spend so much time and interest in this medium.
We differ, perhaps, in that visuals alone do not interest me. Every good erotic image for me hints at a story behind that image. So for me, and perhaps many others, the DMD VN does not loose its interest in the loss of virginity, but rather in what happens next. So for me, at least, the last release was a culmination of one part of the story, but I’m much more interested in the next threads.
Now I can understand if you write in a fictional capacity, you bring a much more critical eye to the writing, etc. I get that as I do the same for live theater and for the actions of other attorneys in court as well as any legal movie or television show. I have a short fuse in those areas. But since I am not bringing those predispositions to DMD, I am still emotionally invested in the outcome.
“Is DMD well written? Depends on the view.
For a sex game absolutely.
For anything else. No.”
I disagree. I find this better writing than 99.9% of the writing in actual porn. I find the writing combined with visuals more engaging than a lot of television (esp the WB and Hallmark). I find the combination more engaging than most regional theater. But then, I am looking at the product as a whole.
I have not yet had the time to play “Acting Lessons”, though I hear good things. I will look forward to it. Btw, my favorite story thread so far out of any not MDots product has to be from Teachers Pets and the thread around the student who goes with the MC to the college open house - the combination of art, character build and scripting was great (although I admit I only followed it to where they were at the college sitting on the bench across from the fountain). Nice piece.
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Well written kind of depends on the point of view of the reader.
Game of Thrones is a huge hit but for me it's mostly plots plagiarized from early English history (though the Red Wedding hearkens to the massacre of Saint Bartholomew's Day in France) with gratuitous sex used to fill poor writing. I am aware of the irony this being an adult game forum site.
So eye of the beholder.