VN Ren'Py Completed Dating My Daughter [Ch. 1-4 v1.01] [MrDots Games]

[Endrju]

Reading posts that you have done in other games as well and I have to be honest with you...I think you are just someone that likes to spout off pretending to be something and you actually aren't. Look back above at your post. For a writer there wouldn't be the spelling mistakes and poor grammar that you wrote. Writing 40 books is no small task either. From writing, editing, rewrites, approvals and cover design...You look at approx. 1 book a year, which would place you in the mid to high 60's age bracket in which don't you think playing games involving younger 18yr old girls seems a bit odd as well?

and there i was thinking im to harsh with my post

Have you looked at Daughter for Dessert?

dude that's the only game i have problem with when it comes to support. there is a lot of things that piss me of about it but all and all after 3,4 episodes let's say I'm a fan. there is one thing though that cock-block me from putting money where my mouth is....security measures if you can belive it, why? its redicilus right?
I understand completely the fact that you want protect your work and I'm fine with it but because I'm a gamer for very long time now I'm as well all over every fucking news when it comes to all big and small developers who... really are in this business just for money, and i must say i hate it. so with DfD i get the vibe squeezing everything there is and that's sadly pushed me away.

I don’t know. The spell check and wonkiness of responding on an iPad to this forum screws with my spelling all the time - and I think hemsaidmhemwasmGerman. (See, mfer!). As for age, I’ve said it before, that I expect to be playing video games by the time I’m in a rest home and instead of bingo, I hope a bunch of us are playing PvP battles. Finally, since my novel output is one every 30 years, that would make him 1,200 years old under my calculation, lol.

...to be fair, since I have nothing published in the novel side ... let’s double that calculation...

Just finished season 2 of The Marvelous Mrs Maisel - damn good stuff. Now, how to bottle a fraction of the character driven interaction and dialogue in that show into an adult game - that’s my new goal. It’s obvious why The MMM won the Emmy for best comedy.

im finishing second season of The Sinner, damn good stuff. Im sucker for that kind of mystery..
Mindhunter, stranger things, dark i love it all. u need ti try it im telling you.

 

[Falcon6]

LMAO! What on earth is the purpose of this "debate" about how well the storylines in these VN's are written?

Without the included graphics which are ultimately there to depict explicit sex scenes (or at least lead up to them), ALL the storylines as written would be "junk" if they were intended to be sold as a word-only novel. You will find the same kinds of discrepancies on text-only erotic sites like Literotica between various authors there. Some authors are skilled at developing characters, some aren't, and the dialogs used by characters (if it is even included in the story) can range from outstanding to "NOBODY talks like this in real life!" criticism.

I'm reminded of storylines and the accompanying character development and narratives included in things like the Star Trek and Star Wars TV and movie episodes. The authors of these epics used the storylines to describe an analogy of the Human Condition. Every episode of the original Star Trek series was an analogy of something like racism, prejudice, discrimination, fanaticism, religious beliefs, and a plethora of others. Star Wars was not about flying through space with Wookies...it was about the historical facism that happened in humanity. The authors of these stories were outstanding at what they represented and how they did it.

But it was all lost on MANY (most?) of the viewers of these stories. They watched a weekly "science fiction" story and got so wrapped up in the "fiction" that they started attending conventions dressed as the characters they wished they could be. There's no accounting for some people's human nature.

The "games" we come here for...adult oriented sexual fantasies...are never going to win Pulitzer prizes for their "literary content" or writing skills. No one the quality of William Shakespeare is authoring them. I don't expect to find anything in these VN's that would be world record award quality for writing or authoring. Anybody who is capable of authoring a successful written story like something that would end up on the New York Times Best Seller List could tear ALL of these VN's apart with realistic criticism about the writing content of them.

C'mon. The people like me who are here as CONSUMERS of these games aren't here because we are looking for a Shakespeare quality product. And I'm over 60-years old, so if that makes me "perverted" because I read DMD (not to mention looking at the graphics content of it too...shame on me!!! ), it's no more perverted than watching Game of Thrones for the sex scenes in it (admit it...that's why many of us DO watch GOT...and why HBO keeps showing it...it SELLS).

To me, this whole "debate" here is like going to a Star Trek or Star Wars convention and trying to convince someone dressed up as Captain Kirk or Mr. Spock or the Wookie to try to "better understand" the storyline and what it is REALLY trying to say. It ain't gonna work. They won't care. They aren't there because they think the story writing and charachter dialog is Award Winning quality. You'd have more success selling them a Captain Kirk figurine and poster for $50. Throw in a Light Sabre for $50 more and they'll be ecstatic.

And if you could get Princess Leia to show up naked, you'd be golden. Heck, I might even go then.

 

[IPkiss]

Did anyone else notice that the swimwear descriptions for the photoshoot didn't match up to the actual swimwear? The 'pink one-piece' was actually a blue and gold patterned suit and the 'black two-piece bikini' is actually a red textured one-piece?

I also noticed a few mentions from Elena about doing things with her and our 'relationship', even though I'm on a pure daughter route and rejected all but D.

Sorry I didn't notice the swimwear cos I couldn't take my eyes off her tits, ass and pussy, not to mention her hair and her legs and her lips and her............you can fill in the dots

 

[Jeff Steel]

LMAO! What on earth is the purpose of this "debate" about how well the storylines in these VN's are written?

Without the included graphics which are ultimately there to depict explicit sex scenes (or at least lead up to them), ALL the storylines as written would be "junk" if they were intended to be sold as a word-only novel. You will find the same kinds of discrepancies on text-only erotic sites like Literotica between various authors there. Some authors are skilled at developing characters, some aren't, and the dialogs used by characters (if it is even included in the story) can range from outstanding to "NOBODY talks like this in real life!" criticism.

I'm reminded of storylines and the accompanying character development and narratives included in things like the Star Trek and Star Wars TV and movie episodes. The authors of these epics used the storylines to describe an analogy of the Human Condition. Every episode of the original Star Trek series was an analogy of something like racism, prejudice, discrimination, fanaticism, religious beliefs, and a plethora of others. Star Wars was not about flying through space with Wookies...it was about the historical facism that happened in humanity. The authors of these stories were outstanding at what they represented and how they did it.

But it was all lost on MANY (most?) of the viewers of these stories. They watched a weekly "science fiction" story and got so wrapped up in the "fiction" that they started attending conventions dressed as the characters they wished they could be. There's no accounting for some people's human nature.

The "games" we come here for...adult oriented sexual fantasies...are never going to win Pulitzer prizes for their "literary content" or writing skills. No one the quality of William Shakespeare is authoring them. I don't expect to find anything in these VN's that would be world record award quality for writing or authoring. Anybody who is capable of authoring a successful written story like something that would end up on the New York Times Best Seller List could tear ALL of these VN's apart with realistic criticism about the writing content of them.

C'mon. The people like me who are here as CONSUMERS of these games aren't here because we are looking for a Shakespeare quality product. And I'm over 60-years old, so if that makes me "perverted" because I read DMD (not to mention looking at the graphics content of it too...shame on me!!! ), it's no more perverted than watching Game of Thrones for the sex scenes in it (admit it...that's why many of us DO watch GOT...and why HBO keeps showing it...it SELLS).

To me, this whole "debate" here is like going to a Star Trek or Star Wars convention and trying to convince someone dressed up as Captain Kirk or Mr. Spock or the Wookie to try to "better understand" the storyline and what it is REALLY trying to say. It ain't gonna work. They won't care. They aren't there because they think the story writing and charachter dialog is Award Winning quality. You'd have more success selling them a Captain Kirk figurine and poster for $50. Throw in a Light Sabre for $50 more and they'll be ecstatic.

And if you could get Princess Leia to show up naked, you'd be golden. Heck, I might even go then.

I don’t disagree with your analysis - but I do agree with a debate on writing that makes you care about the characters and care about the outcome of the plot behind any showing of sex. There are a lot of f95 games that I just don’t care about due to the writing; and others that, but for the writing, I wouldn’t be all that interested in the renders (or nonrender art).

 

[itsjasey]

Last night i had a horrible nightmare, that in chapter 3, father makes D pregnant and story ends. Then Mr.dots created another story where D is dead and her daughter shows up on her 18th birthday at her grand father house.

 

[Ed B]

Last night i had a horrible nightmare, that in chapter 3, father makes D pregnant and story ends. Then Mr.dots created another story where D is dead and her daughter shows up on her 18th birthday at her grand father house.

But if D was impregnated by F then it would be full circle again Could call it...DMD-The Sequel - The Viagra Years

 

[Creeping Death]

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Taking A Break In January

Hi guys,

We hope that you are looking forward to the upcoming release of Melody v0.0.7
My team and I also thank you for your patience after we spent all of November working on and releasing our other game.
But today's post is to talk about something else…

I have personally been working on these games for just over two years, pretty much every single day, without a proper break. Before I signed up to Patreon I worked a normal job, and when it came to decide to quit to chase my dream of being a full-time game creator, even then I didn’t take any time off - I started working the very first day that I signed up!
The last time I took more than a week off was nearly three years ago.
Even HearszAM, my chief writer for both games confessed that he hasn’t taken any more than four days off in a row since March of 2016!

So, as you could gather from this post so far, we wanted to let you know that once v0.0.7 of Melody is posted on December 23, my team and I will be taking four weeks off.

The break we're having is to give us a chance to recharge our batteries (so to speak) and to freshen ourselves up for when we begin working on the games again at the end of January next year. Just like with last month's update of DMD, we want to go out on a high with Melody, and we intend to put as much detail and quality into this update as humanly possible!

As I’ve said several times before, we make these games for you guys, those that support us with your comments, feedback and your kind continual donations/pledges. 2018 has been a tough year, but ultimately it has turned out to be a really rewarding one too.

So that’s it for now guys.

We’ll be looking to start working on Melody v.0.08 around mid to late January with the release in late February. I'll be pausing the pledges in January so you don't get charged during that month.

Wishing you all the best, and thanks for your encouragement and understanding.

MrDots.

 

[Endrju]

Thats a very good choice, i didnt know how hard they were pushing them self. Hope the break will really help them relax and come back stronger! GL

 

[Orignaltk]

Last night i had a horrible nightmare, that in chapter 3, father makes D pregnant and story ends. Then Mr.dots created another story where D is dead and her daughter shows up on her 18th birthday at her grand father house.

Dude, what were you smoking and where can I get some?

 

[cxx]

grandfather seducing granddaughter would be same story again so it'd feel like milking same cow again.

 

[Jonah Arkon]

Greeting all, I downloaded CH 1 from the NOPY link and in extracting it I go the following:
data error 14.5-pc\game\day_A05_1.rpa
data error 14.5-pc\game\extras.rpa
Plus it only extracts to 97%
I looked throw the forum in hopes of finding something but I might have passed it if this was a prior problem. I thank you all for any help.
I unzipped with 7zip just fyi

 

[Jonah Arkon]

I tried running it and got the following. please see attached. I thought maybe more information might be helpful of those whom are more adverse to dealing with these kinds of issues. Thanks again.

 

[RustyV]

grandfather seducing granddaughter would be same story again so it'd feel like milking same cow again.

What farmer doesn't milk the same cow?
You milk a cow once and send to McDonalds processing plant?

Alternatively D can't handle having a child with her dad so she runs off and then 19 years later has a relationship with her daughter.

 

[Creeping Death]

What farmer doesn't milk the same cow?
You milk a cow once and send to McDonalds processing plant?

Alternatively D can't handle having a child with her dad so she runs off and then 19 years later has a relationship with her daughter.

That's all of the same too, over and over again! It always ends with putting your dick inside the girl. Why not try something really unique. Something like a microwave heated up honeydew melon with a painted on seductive smile? Games like "Honeydew Melon Harem", "Big Brother's Honeydew Melon", "Anna - The Exciting Honeydew Melon", "Astrid The Warrior Honeydew Melon" ... Oh I see. This can also be reduced to simply three adjectives, warm, wet and tight.

 

[LeturLefr]

Greeting all, I downloaded CH 1 from the NOPY link and in extracting it I go the following:
data error 14.5-pc\game\day_A05_1.rpa
data error 14.5-pc\game\extras.rpa
Plus it only extracts to 97%
I looked throw the forum in hopes of finding something but I might have passed it if this was a prior problem. I thank you all for any help.
I unzipped with 7zip just fyi

redownload it? file might get corrupted or such

 

[LeturLefr]

cant wait for moar Jennifer, flat tiddy is my biggest weakness lmoa.
Elena is the best grill so far though, dem teasing at the casino is just hngg

 

[Lotbsis]

i keep getting 'unsupported image format' errors in ch2.. can you guys help me out?

 

[Wellthisisinteresting]

cant wait for moar Jennifer, flat tiddy is my biggest weakness lmoa.
Elena is the best grill so far though, dem teasing at the casino is just hngg

Yes more Jen please.... and Elena too....

 

[Wellthisisinteresting]

I really wonder how the daughter will take the MC being with Jen and Elena... since we always get a game over when that is "revealed" before, it doesn't feel very positive... Now it feels like she will go crazy.... Maybe that won't even come up and it will only be like, "Oh now we can also let your friends join the fun because eh, they like me too!" and we won't tell her about the other stuff.... Thats something i've been thinking about the whole game so really want to see the solution..

 

[Jeff Steel]

I really wonder how the daughter will take the MC being with Jen and Elena... since we always get a game over when that is "revealed" before, it doesn't feel very positive... Now it feels like she will go crazy.... Maybe that won't even come up and it will only be like, "Oh now we can also let your friends join the fun because eh, they like me too!" and we won't tell her about the other stuff.... Thats something i've been thinking about the whole game so really want to see the solution..

One possibility revolves around D’s sweetness for others - and less on a sexual issue. Easiest to see this is Elena. On the Elena route, Elena has shown hints of growing profoundly sad. After, MC, D has more affection for Elena than anyone else in her world. Focusing on the affection and the sadness, it can be seen how D would want to reach out as a couple and include Elena into their family.

Then, to get to a co-sexual relationship, imo you have to use polyamory concepts.

Here are some things articles say about polyamory:
(1) it is very difficult and often fails due to jealousy and/or the amount of emotional work it needs for the persons involved in order to succeed - and the TIME required;
(2) being a person who likes the serenity of alone time is not helpful, obviously;
(3) it does not favor those who dislike discussing or processing their feelings with others;
(4) it is much less common than the other “non-monogamist” practice of swinging (which is more of a Margo thing) - however, one US study found that 21% of respondents were or had been in a polyamorous relationship of some form at sometime during their life (which I, JS, imagine includes dating two people at one time...maybe...as the article did not give the definition of “polyamorous relationship”)
(5) it favors those who relish social interaction;
(6) it favors those who crave sexual variety or have a high sex drive;
(7) and apparently given statistics, it helps to be a little geeky, into sci-fi, having a tech career, having financial freedom and flexibility, being into kinky sex (obviously); and being either not religious or in an uncommon religion such as Paganism, Buddhism, or Unitarian Universalism.
(8) polyamorous relationships tend to get a hierarchy in that there will be a primary and secondary ranking within the relationship;
(9) the ability to experience compersion is obviously a huge plus - which is where you experience joy and pleasure from the joy and pleasure your partner is experiencing. This could be joymofmyour partner in sex, in career, in sports, etc. (imo, parents can often exhibit greater compersion with their children than with their spouse - and, in DMD, Rachel has a very low compersion appreciation, and D/Georgina exhibit a greater compersion appreciation than Elena).

As a “happily ever after” until “death do you part” paradigm, polyamorous relationships don’t last that length of time. However, divorce rates in the US, UK, Australia and Canada run from 46% to 38% respectively, and on a carafe last 11-14 years - other nations have a much lower divorce rate and seem dependent on culture and legal issues regarding divorce (India has a mind boggling 1% divorce rate).

The polyamorous relations that seem to last longer would tend to:
- emphasize emotional intimacy;
- favor mutual reliance and commitment (you get a wider support group )
- and be willing to work through conflict by flexing with life transitions as key elements that help their families work

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At any rate, there you go. How to mix D into a multiple partner relationship while still staying D.