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Interesting version to say the least. More drama coming on the next version I bet.
That guy with the binoculars now I see why I had to break or not break them.
Are we gonna see him again or is that it? Hopefully that's it for that annoying character.
I cant believe they ran into that Richard again thats another annoying character.
When Lucas gets out of jail he'll go see Richard first and then he'll spill the beans.
He'll probably tell him where he saw them last and then the drama will begin again.
Wish there was a permanent way to get rid of him. Hes the ultimate bad guy.
And then theres Martin I wonder why do we have him spend the night.
Hope the MC can keep his hands to himself for 1 night. Also wheres he gonna sleep?
And then theres Rachel. Why not just let D talk to her mother and get it over with?
Seaside is not that big and she already knows she has look for D near the beach.
If in the next version I get an option to talk to Rachel I will.
2 wrongs dont make a right. The MC is doing exactly what she did to him.
And then theres D This girl is way too naive and a slow work in progress where the harem is concerned.
It reminds me of Sisterly Lust except it didnt take 3 chapters to to make this progress.
It went beyond that and he ended up proposing marrieage to 7 girls so far.
I hope the harem progress in DMD develops into something big.
The girls just seem to be in standby mode. Though big in numbers they are
scattered all over the place. He needs a big and I mean a big house in oder for that to happen. If it does maybe this game will turnn into a sand box or open world game in the end. Hope we dont have to wait too long for the next version.
That guy with the binoculars now I see why I had to break or not break them.
Are we gonna see him again or is that it? Hopefully that's it for that annoying character.
I cant believe they ran into that Richard again thats another annoying character.
When Lucas gets out of jail he'll go see Richard first and then he'll spill the beans.
He'll probably tell him where he saw them last and then the drama will begin again.
Wish there was a permanent way to get rid of him. Hes the ultimate bad guy.
And then theres Martin I wonder why do we have him spend the night.
Hope the MC can keep his hands to himself for 1 night. Also wheres he gonna sleep?
And then theres Rachel. Why not just let D talk to her mother and get it over with?
Seaside is not that big and she already knows she has look for D near the beach.
If in the next version I get an option to talk to Rachel I will.
2 wrongs dont make a right. The MC is doing exactly what she did to him.
And then theres D This girl is way too naive and a slow work in progress where the harem is concerned.
It reminds me of Sisterly Lust except it didnt take 3 chapters to to make this progress.
It went beyond that and he ended up proposing marrieage to 7 girls so far.
I hope the harem progress in DMD develops into something big.
The girls just seem to be in standby mode. Though big in numbers they are
scattered all over the place. He needs a big and I mean a big house in oder for that to happen. If it does maybe this game will turnn into a sand box or open world game in the end. Hope we dont have to wait too long for the next version.
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