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I don't know if this has been mentioned yet but...
While I overall liked this update I do have a few nits to pick.
There seems this update seems to be plagued with more than the usual amount of typos (not meaning non-American English) and render gaffs.
The scene where Olivia is teaching D CPR felt more like a public service announcement. I get that was a vehicle for Olivia to slip D her tongue but I just felt going into CPR detail was a waste of time and effort on the part of the dev team. Time and effort that could have been used to animate the "Jennifer fucking Elena with her strap-on" scene instead of the stills that actually took away some of the lewdness of that interaction.
The college tour while a way for the MC to sneak off to ring shop did not need to be given that much coverage, again time that could have been used to improve or add other scenes.
In some ways too many cameos.
Jennifer seems to be going Fatal Attraction, not so much sexier as scary.
Unlike many here I liked the story development pace. D was eased into her first forays having lesbian and group sex. I do wish the D would have taken another shower with Elena and "reciprocated" her friend's attention.
The MC and D had a frank discussion about extra sex partners that opened the door to greater activity down the road. D nearly openly admitted to herself and the MC she is very sexually attracted to women. I hope we will soon see D flirting with other girls, maybe even initiating instead of always only reacting.
D's high school dilemma was addressed. Still want to see her seduce a cheerleader, but c'est le jeu.
IMO this felt like a future development update, which was needed. Unfortunately with updates happening only once every three months I can see why some fans are irked by what may have been an acceptable pace to many of them in a VN with monthly updates.
The father not seeking a job is getting worrying, is this foreshadowing of him relying on D?
Overall I think this was a good update, good but not great kind of like a Joey heavy Friends episode.
Anyway Happy 3rd Anniversary DMD!
While I overall liked this update I do have a few nits to pick.
There seems this update seems to be plagued with more than the usual amount of typos (not meaning non-American English) and render gaffs.
The scene where Olivia is teaching D CPR felt more like a public service announcement. I get that was a vehicle for Olivia to slip D her tongue but I just felt going into CPR detail was a waste of time and effort on the part of the dev team. Time and effort that could have been used to animate the "Jennifer fucking Elena with her strap-on" scene instead of the stills that actually took away some of the lewdness of that interaction.
The college tour while a way for the MC to sneak off to ring shop did not need to be given that much coverage, again time that could have been used to improve or add other scenes.
In some ways too many cameos.
Jennifer seems to be going Fatal Attraction, not so much sexier as scary.
Unlike many here I liked the story development pace. D was eased into her first forays having lesbian and group sex. I do wish the D would have taken another shower with Elena and "reciprocated" her friend's attention.
The MC and D had a frank discussion about extra sex partners that opened the door to greater activity down the road. D nearly openly admitted to herself and the MC she is very sexually attracted to women. I hope we will soon see D flirting with other girls, maybe even initiating instead of always only reacting.
D's high school dilemma was addressed. Still want to see her seduce a cheerleader, but c'est le jeu.
IMO this felt like a future development update, which was needed. Unfortunately with updates happening only once every three months I can see why some fans are irked by what may have been an acceptable pace to many of them in a VN with monthly updates.
The father not seeking a job is getting worrying, is this foreshadowing of him relying on D?
Overall I think this was a good update, good but not great kind of like a Joey heavy Friends episode.
Anyway Happy 3rd Anniversary DMD!
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