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That's because the writing got worse with every chapter.
IMHO the best one is still chapter one if we talk about writing.
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well yes and no, it's group of games (zeppelin tits and asses size of balloons mostly).Is that even a real game?
I know chapter 3 is done but is this the final version or are there still going to be an update for bug fixes/grammar, extra cg's...etc? I'm waiting on the final version of chapter 3 to play.
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Thats because MrDots outsourced his writing during/after Ch1
It used to be concise then went to ESL hell . Take this example of masterpiece erotic writing from the main DMD writer :
"As for your knives set,I'd recommend the Mercenary Culmination Genesis 6 piece, forged knife set.
Aside from having a lifetime warranty, it has an ergonomic Santoprene handle that offers superior comfort and a non-slip grip even with wet hands.These knives will also not break down from exposure to kitchen oils and are able to withstand hot and cold temperature.Another great thing about these knives is they they resist rust,corrosion, or discolouration."
You tell me who would think this appropriate in an adult erotic game? (75+ words wasted on a description taken from a Huber knives ad of a knife set, which even wasnt used to kill anyone)
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That explains a lot. I remember hitting that scene and thinking "whoa, they copy/pasted that from an advertisement. Who the fuck talks that way?" Although in fairness, about 40% of the dialogue makes me think wonder that same thing, this was just particularly egregious. The ch1 dialogue was less cringey, although it was still not exactly a threat to win the Pulitzer.
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Shakespeare couldn't have written a better knife advertisement.
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Is this a dagger which I see before me,Shakespeare couldn't have written a better knife advertisement.
The handle toward my hand? Come, let me clutch thee!
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it doesn't actually exist (afaik), i just use it to describe tits which in rl would hang below waist but in game they don't.
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well in mnf games it works weirdly, women can't stand still at all and during sex tits standup usually.
As I said when this got out, this is a badly disguised ad for the Mercer Culinary Genesis line of knives, and I was also surprised to see this in that kind of game...
As for nobody being killed with it, this was Vicky speaking, so we never know what his father will do when he discovers MC is screwing his girl...
Did you work your way through Chapter 1 or 2 first? You should carry over your stats from the previous chapters when you start a new one.
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I played an hour or so of this game a long time ago, but am getting ready to do a start to (current) finish playthrough. I just have a question about Friendship and Love Points. Is there any reason to manage them? As in having Low Friendship but High Love or vis versa to unlock different scenes or anything? Or do I want to just try and get both as high as possible? Also I see "CL" included in my saves, but am not sure if I'm supposed to know what that is yet or not.