That's because the writing got worse with every chapter.
IMHO the best one is still chapter one if we talk about writing.
Thats because MrDots outsourced his writing during/after Ch1
It used to be concise then went to ESL hell . Take this example of masterpiece erotic writing from the main DMD writer :
"As for your knives set,I'd recommend the Mercenary Culmination Genesis 6 piece, forged knife set.
Aside from having a lifetime warranty, it has an ergonomic Santoprene handle that offers superior comfort and a non-slip grip even with wet hands.These knives will also not break down from exposure to kitchen oils and are able to withstand hot and cold temperature.Another great thing about these knives is they they resist rust,corrosion, or discolouration."
You tell me who would think this appropriate in an adult erotic game? (75+ words wasted on a description taken from a Huber knives ad of a knife set, which even wasnt used to kill anyone)