- May 29, 2017
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LOL, yes, a thousand times yes. That nasty ass high-school-kid scruff looks like shit, and makes it hard to believe every woman he meets falls head over heels for him on first sight. It's so ugly it's actually distracting.it is a bit affected in this case. We get shots of the MC's scraggly chin whiskers, for instance, which always mystifies me. Not just why we get those shots, but why anyone would think that's a good look.... The only other time I've had a problem with it is in earlier chapters when they give us the MC's disembodied tongue waggling in the air to note some oral sex act. The fuck is that, man?
The waving disembodied tentacle tongue bugs me too. Either show the dude or don't, in a scene like that.