Amazing update. I actually like the inclusion of Lucas into the plot, every story needs an intrigue and once he's "defeated" the D and F will grow closer as a result. As long as the story doesn't take a darker turn (e.g. rape or Lucas succeding in blackmailing D into sexual favours) I don't mind. The pacing is great, if it's too slow for you go watch porn.
One thing that felt weird and out of place was the quick fingering in the evening scene. That required a greater build up and clearer consent in my opinion.
One thing that felt weird and out of place was the quick fingering in the evening scene. That required a greater build up and clearer consent in my opinion.