DavDR
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The ideas I put up aren't meant for Dot's, he's already indicated where he wants to go. This is for a fan remake of Ch 3&4 and I wouldn't really call D cheating on F NTR, although I'm sure many would. I don't consider it NTR unless the one being cheated on is actually there in the scene witnessing it, so I guess with all the sharing scene's it's kinda NTR already.You could combine all of the Chapters into one chapter with heavy editing.
D being molested by Grand Pa Joe in her soundproof room seems like something that may have been in the cards but was ditched when DMD went softer.
NTR is not part of this VN.
D is still not a total adult. She clings to F for support and needs his approval. F having to be around whenever D has sex is annoying as fuck. It has made the sex events so predictable as to be minor variations of each other.
If D has sex with Ruby good'ol F will be either already be there or show up to have a threeway with them. No solo sex for D.
DMD seems to be suffering an identity crisis is it corrupting D or a romance novel? Trying to please both camps has left neither pleased.
I agree with you that Dot's can't seem to make up his mind as to this being a corruption or romance story, what I propose with multiple endings would leave both path's open. I also agree that Dot's left a lot of ideas dangling like the sound proof room, Tyra coveting D's necklace, the job with Jen's Uncle, and D's HS education
For anyone who thinks that F is a good loving father to D I would just like to point out that by CH4 D is a high school dropout, possibly a single mother, and is fucking her deadbeat Dad who's also pimping her out as a model.