- Oct 9, 2017
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Yup, Day 14 felt like some long term plans for chapter 2 were finished but the original plan was to have some events with Rachel at their current location so it looks like some hasty tries to somehow build a bridge to those new plans. I was also confused why the Daughter just leaves without any note where she went and when to meet again just the day after(!) she nearly got raped by Lucas and never wanted to leave her Dad's side.I get that it maybe needed to happen in the long run but my god was it done poorly. I think you'd have to add events in to previous days and not just day 14 to make it more believable. I guess the problem is for Mr Dots is he wrote himself into a corner. I'm not sure getting D to go back with Rachel can be done believably at this point. There's no way F, given their history, would go along with anything Rachel said if she did contact him. Rachel couldn't force it and if Elena and D had even an ounce of brain power between them they wouldn't believe Rachel either, at least not without fact checking the visa thing or contacting F. Maybe that's just a failure of imagination on my part though. Still love DmD on the whole
Also as a side note the Dad is supposed to go to work again on Day 14, but that obviously would be a huge conflict with the events in the morning. Dunno if that is also a part of those new plans but I have my doubts about that. :coldsweat: