Ok, yea, the pupils/iris thing looks way to big... looks a bit unnatural
Ok, if the story is made from the beginning just for that then it might work
Btw what did you think of mrdots new game Melody? I think it was not bad but felt a bit mundane and boring to be a music teacher, not interesting to me, plus less choices and the main girl Melody is cute but very bitchy and unpleasant, I know they needed to make the game super vanilla for Patreon, removing petite girls and incest, but yea, I'm a bit dissapointed personally.