BoltonGuy35
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Hmmm yeah she does but she's still an ass-ache and comes across the way I see it lol... Noticed another thing in ch3 after the date night at the bowling alley with both Ryan and Margo, D tells Ryan about her and F's relationship but the next morning D tells F that she was careful in what she said even after F tells D about what Margo wanted to do. Is this a story thing or just needs rewriting as there seems to be no reason for her not to tell F about it as she tells F all the time she is not attracted to Ryan and he is the only one for her... I hope there isn't going to be a forced cheating with Ryan storyline in the future??Elena becomes more of an asset in the later chapters.
But yeah that part you highlighted could use a rewrite.