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Whoa, man! Put stuff like that under a spoiler tag.((( Pssst .... Amanda doesn't ... really exist ...)))
Whoa, man! Put stuff like that under a spoiler tag.((( Pssst .... Amanda doesn't ... really exist ...)))
I am reserving my criticism as possibly as I can until I've played until the end. I was just expressing my lament on how the second half unraveled so far, beating my head and making presumptuous theories for closure. I initially came for a quick fap and was allured by the story so much that ch12 onward felt like a slow stab to the coreEveryone has a view, and that's fair enough, as well as natural enough.
Thats unfortunately undeniable yes. I theorized how Amanda has her own endgame and how you treated her from the beginning will be the deciding factor. While still hoping its the case I'm keeping my expectations in checkit's not altogether implausible Amanda could have her mind seriously poisoned by manipulators like the aunt - GIVEN the existence of what looks like damning, incontrovertible proof of the MC's theft from his dying partner
but loathing another character's guts to the back teeth
I worded my previous post too harsh. I don't loath her as much as many of the players here, I thought I was sensible enough in my contempt. In fact I've been doing a oneitis run with Amanda holding out for the whole picture (assuming thats a private flight in the ch19 preview pics I guess ripping off Cecilia was her endgame all along)don't be too hard on 'Manda The Panda; or even if your heart is colder even than the aunt's ....
Nothing against Palmer & everyone involved, I've sang my praises in several pages before. I understand the time-constraint, limited resources, and Patreon possibly putting a tight grip over the direction. Sorry if I came off furious, and thanks for the reasoningsay thanks to Palmer Z/LJ & team for even moving you to fury!
Well i figured all downloads for chapter 18 are 17. Mean i download 18 and it tell me its chapter 17 not 18. Only download they did work is the Online Version but sadly i dont have a save for the chap 18 online Version i mean a backup from 17. Sorry for my bad english again >.< oh and ty for your help ^.^Not sure what you're saying.
Is it that you actually get Ch.18, but can't play it, because the game doesn't recognize you as having already played Ch.17?
Download the Walktrough in the Opening post , in the second part you will find all cheat codes for all chapters ( till 18 )is there a cheat code ?
Again, it's about context. How much the reader is willing to suspend their disbelief lies largely in what has already been established. Amanda was obsessed with her father then took a rather striking swerve towards treating him like a leper, based on the word of someone she didn't know. Then she says she trust him completely? Either Palmer doesn't understand the word 'trust' or he's changing the character based on episodic whims, which as stated is bad writing and will strain disbelief.And then, the permanent dramatic suspense, to have that sword of Damocles of criminal and - worse - morally repellent activity hanging over the MC's head, means some prising-away of trust is perhaps necessary for plot? If so, we can set demands of skyscraping, three-level concrete-foundation plausibility above anything previously required in the history of drama ... but who was it said about a "willing suspension of disbelief"? If you're not willing, that's okay. But errrr, have a heart, or something?
It's a porn game so I think you're expectations of what the writing should be are to high.Again, it's about context. How much the reader is willing to suspend their disbelief lies largely in what has already been established. Amanda was obsessed with her father then took a rather striking swerve towards treating him like a leper, based on the word of someone she didn't know. Then she says she trust him completely? Either Palmer doesn't understand the word 'trust' or he's changing the character based on episodic whims, which as stated is bad writing and will strain disbelief.
I didn't directly address your other points because I felt they were encompassed in the statement 'she's badly written'.
That's not even getting into how ludicrous this 'case' is.
It fucks with the rules of the game. I don't get it, why do people think porn games don't need to be decent games.It's a porn game so I think you're expectations of what the writing should be are to high.