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rrxlewd

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Feb 26, 2019
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Everyone has a view, and that's fair enough, as well as natural enough.
I am reserving my criticism as possibly as I can until I've played until the end. I was just expressing my lament on how the second half unraveled so far, beating my head and making presumptuous theories for closure. I initially came for a quick fap and was allured by the story so much that ch12 onward felt like a slow stab to the core

it's not altogether implausible Amanda could have her mind seriously poisoned by manipulators like the aunt - GIVEN the existence of what looks like damning, incontrovertible proof of the MC's theft from his dying partner
Thats unfortunately undeniable yes. I theorized how Amanda has her own endgame and how you treated her from the beginning will be the deciding factor. While still hoping its the case I'm keeping my expectations in check

but loathing another character's guts to the back teeth
don't be too hard on 'Manda The Panda; or even if your heart is colder even than the aunt's ....
I worded my previous post too harsh. I don't loath her as much as many of the players here, I thought I was sensible enough in my contempt. In fact I've been doing a oneitis run with Amanda holding out for the whole picture (assuming thats a private flight in the ch19 preview pics I guess ripping off Cecilia was her endgame all along)

say thanks to Palmer Z/LJ & team for even moving you to fury! ;)
Nothing against Palmer & everyone involved, I've sang my praises in several pages before. I understand the time-constraint, limited resources, and Patreon possibly putting a tight grip over the direction. Sorry if I came off furious, and thanks for the reasoning
 

PPE2RedDucks

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Oct 3, 2018
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Well, "fury" was a sort of hyperbole ...

All in all, I think if a game taps into people's interest(s), thoughts and feelings as far as this one clearly does with many, then whatever its flaws - most things are not perfect (not sure we could live with perfection, but that's another story) - it's a pretty good game :)
 

ANUBIS969

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Dec 9, 2017
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Not sure what you're saying.

Is it that you actually get Ch.18, but can't play it, because the game doesn't recognize you as having already played Ch.17?
Well i figured all downloads for chapter 18 are 17. Mean i download 18 and it tell me its chapter 17 not 18. Only download they did work is the Online Version but sadly i dont have a save for the chap 18 online Version i mean a backup from 17. Sorry for my bad english again >.< oh and ty for your help ^.^
 

RustyV

Conversation Conqueror
Game Developer
Dec 30, 2017
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Any good creator has to know the direction their story is going to take before they begin to create. It seems like any planning was thrown into disarray by Patreon's changing guidelines.

Amanda seduces her father and then decides he's untrustworthy on the opinion of a person she has only recently met? If the MC had seduced her this might be more plausible. Amanda would have reason to doubt the MC's character.
Amanda being angry that the MC moved on with a socially acceptable relationship after she betrayed his trust is twisted logic at best on her part.
Really the girl needs an entire team of psychologists working around the clock to analyze her psyche.
 

Ed B

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Sep 24, 2017
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Not really much in this update but dialogue. Let's hope 19 ends with greatness :) lol lol
 

midx

Member
Dec 27, 2017
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i got an error. " we've detected you have not previously played chapter 1 of this game ..... " i played all chapters of this game except ch 18. how i solve this problem ?
 

JoeSte91

Member
Apr 12, 2018
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And then, the permanent dramatic suspense, to have that sword of Damocles of criminal and - worse - morally repellent activity hanging over the MC's head, means some prising-away of trust is perhaps necessary for plot? If so, we can set demands of skyscraping, three-level concrete-foundation plausibility above anything previously required in the history of drama ... but who was it said about a "willing suspension of disbelief"? If you're not willing, that's okay. But errrr, have a heart, or something? ;)
Again, it's about context. How much the reader is willing to suspend their disbelief lies largely in what has already been established. Amanda was obsessed with her father then took a rather striking swerve towards treating him like a leper, based on the word of someone she didn't know. Then she says she trust him completely? Either Palmer doesn't understand the word 'trust' or he's changing the character based on episodic whims, which as stated is bad writing and will strain disbelief.

I didn't directly address your other points because I felt they were encompassed in the statement 'she's badly written'.

That's not even getting into how ludicrous this 'case' is.
 

Pizzapockets

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Jan 13, 2019
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Again, it's about context. How much the reader is willing to suspend their disbelief lies largely in what has already been established. Amanda was obsessed with her father then took a rather striking swerve towards treating him like a leper, based on the word of someone she didn't know. Then she says she trust him completely? Either Palmer doesn't understand the word 'trust' or he's changing the character based on episodic whims, which as stated is bad writing and will strain disbelief.

I didn't directly address your other points because I felt they were encompassed in the statement 'she's badly written'.

That's not even getting into how ludicrous this 'case' is.
It's a porn game so I think you're expectations of what the writing should be are to high.
 
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Rozhok

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Jun 29, 2017
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Hey guys I'm sure this has been asked and answered a hundred times and I apologise in advance if so:

- Is there a way to use a save backup for the offline version or is the only option to start from the beginning (chapter 1)

The reason I ask is because I stopped playing around chapter 8 or 9 a while ago (cracked versions) and want to continue playing using the offline versions that are released here on f95
 

Hinatsukino

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Jul 15, 2018
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I was able to play Ch 1 and Ch 2, but trying to go to 3 won't work. And there is NOT an option to create a back up. I downloaded the Ch 1 - Ch 17 file. Can I get some help, here?
 

Saiaxs

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Oct 12, 2018
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using the customization menu to set everything to be real incest only works for a few screens, i have it set so that im Amanda's Father but it keeps switching to Step Father. Im playing the offline version
 
3.50 star(s) 128 Votes