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GNVE

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This is the cover for the renpy VN I am currently working on. Thoughts?
It is not a bad render but it doesn't grip my attention either (which is what you want for a cover.) These girls (nice models by the way) look like 3 models on the a photoshoot or walking the catwalk.
Some things you could do to improve the render for me:
  • Use bold background colours (doesn't really matter what colour per say als long as it is a strong colour).
  • Fill up the render area with your characters. There is a lot of white space. if you made a thumbnail of this the characters are nearly indistinguishable.
  • I'd focus more on the faces of the characters. The bodies are relatively standard (no bimbo boobs, no missing limbs or whatever) so the bodies are less important for the coverscreen.
  • I'd like to see some interaction between these characters. Are they friends? Enemies? Lovers? Vying for your adoration? show what they are to each other. Try to draw me in so I want to know more.
  • I don't know if swimwear is important to the story (if story important keep it) or just eye candy. but it is easier to convey the personality of the girls by dressing them in street clothes. (there is a reason why goth is quite popular as a character in these types of games).
Hope this helps. I hope it didn't sound to critical, that was not my intention. again the base render is quite decent. Maybe just not what you want for the cover of your VN.
 

MG-Gaming

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The full line-up of the characters from a game i will hopefully one day make.
From left to right: 3 crew members of a ship (Engineer, Captain and Navigator), 3 teachers (Oceanology, PE and Astronomy) plus the Vice Principal (sitting), and 3 students.
Full cast line-up.png
I still need to tweak them, especially the captain.. i'm not that happy with how she looks, but the main template is there for all of them. The heights of the girls is generally the base height, so i still need to change that.
I tried to make them look unique enough, hoping you won't recognize them from 20 other games.
Thoughts?
 
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The full line-up of the characters from a game i will hopefully one day make.
From left to right: 3 crew members of a ship (Engineer, Captain and Navigator), 3 teachers (Oceanology, PE and Astronomy) plus the Vice Principal (sitting), and 3 students.
View attachment 671226
I still need to tweak them, especially the captain.. i'm not that happy with how she looks, but the main template is there for all of them. The heights of the girls is generally the base height, so i still need to change that.
I tried to make them look unique enough, hoping you won't recognize them from 20 other games.
Thoughts?
Is it going to be the Lesbian Loveboat or XO in Pussy Paradise?
 
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