Looks really good, I'd change the light to a bit be a more indirect and softer, right now it looks a bit too artifical and makes the shadows on her body too harsh.
I've got a question of my own: I'm still not sure whether to keep the white hair this character has right now. It was a trend a little while ago for young women to die their hair white/grey. And she would be the perfect age (28) to hop on that bandwagon but very few girls look good with that hair colour and I'm unsure if it works for her (input is welcome).
This is probably the first time I've seen a model here that looks older than she's supposed to be xD
But yeah, I agree with everyone else, the hair is okay, but she looks too old.
getting very hot here
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really well composed, nice angle, great scene. The only thing that destroys the overall "goodness" is the gen hair, it looks fake because the hairs are too thick (not the overall hair, but the single hairs) if you know what I mean, but again, great scene.
10 minute render, still some grain, but meh... this was just to test a slightly different lighting scheme.
This is probably more naturalistic, so I'll re-render the other shot to look like this.
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Let me be honest, the bloom was waaaay to much before, even here I think it's still disturbing the overall image.
Your render look quite good though, posing, light, overall mood are well done. I'd swap the chair texture though^^
Btw your ...uh... dad? looks a little bit like a thug xD
but that is just me.
