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Evil13

Evil13

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Thank you both for your tips and advice, greatly appreciate them and the fact that you took the time to offer them. Once again, thanks.

So I've reworked her, put the eyes further back into the head, tightened the face a little more and used the Subtle Asymmetrical Face plugin to bring some asymmetry. And dropped her onto what I can only assume is a velvet rug.
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Techn0magier said:
- The tears are probably the most obvious one, while they maybe start to flow in the visible direction, when she lays on her bed for herself, the probably change their direction when she tilts her head towards the camera. Then there is the dried up makeup within the tears, thanks to the til of her head the paths should be more spread out.
- The Hair and their point of contact with the teddy. I'm not sure if that is clipping or just an unhappy camera angle.
- The crop of her head looks weird, given how much space the image gives her on the left side.
- I love the lighting:love:
- While you have the lovely micro compression between her arm and the mattress, I'm missing the same on the teddy.
- Sweet usage of DoF, but only as a personal preference I would make it a little bit more shallow, to move the bright vase even further in the background and enhance the focus on her.
- most of the other stuff I have in mind would be also more on personal preferences, and wouldn't help you in any way, I guess.
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Great observations, thank you. Yes there is a bit of clipping of the hair and the teddy that needs to be resolved. I'll have a look some more at the crops too to see if I can figure something out, plus I'll mess around with DOF some more and probably some angles to make it more shallow but keeping the character in focus.
Thanks again, greatly appreciated.
 
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Techn0magier said:
Ready for your daily dose of Glamour?

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I tried smth different with the background today, I guess I will go back to shadow play or try different backgrounds in future portraits.
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You should take a look at the Studio Harcourt's works. Maybe it will give you ideas.

Two other potential LIs.
Alicia Makaba, MC's "cousin", masseuse-physiotherapist, and Shannen Walsh, psychologist and social worker.

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SummmerP said:
Dude, that hair.. which one is it?
I sorely need that.


No, not yet. Maybe in a week or two.. idk
Where should that go anyway? General discussions?

They are the same characters (but the girl mc is wearing make-up on the night club scenes).
Wait.. you mean on that early first picture? The one I added later? Nope, the man next to the girl mc is her father.. I mean, her "legal guardian" or something

They are in a long term relationship, moving back to the city after a few years living abroad. Nothing queer about it (though they're not married).
I don't want to spoil things yet, cause it may change.
But there'll be no strange stuff going on, no lustful entity running and ruining(?) their lives or anything like that. Just that good old weary but true relationship.. and those casual ntr and/or incestual events that ordinary life has in store for us.
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Yeah the girl MC looks good in the early picture i guess. Ooh "legal guardian" good... Look forward to progress with the game!
 
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