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Oh, I think I know what should happen next: Leviathan appears from the ocean, destroys half of the city, kills half of heroes and willians and retreats to the ocean... (yes, I`m readingmom you fly too fast for me
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Great observations, thank you. Yes there is a bit of clipping of the hair and the teddy that needs to be resolved. I'll have a look some more at the crops too to see if I can figure something out, plus I'll mess around with DOF some more and probably some angles to make it more shallow but keeping the character in focus.- The tears are probably the most obvious one, while they maybe start to flow in the visible direction, when she lays on her bed for herself, the probably change their direction when she tilts her head towards the camera. Then there is the dried up makeup within the tears, thanks to the til of her head the paths should be more spread out.
- The Hair and their point of contact with the teddy. I'm not sure if that is clipping or just an unhappy camera angle.
- The crop of her head looks weird, given how much space the image gives her on the left side.
- I love the lighting
- While you have the lovely micro compression between her arm and the mattress, I'm missing the same on the teddy.
- Sweet usage of DoF, but only as a personal preference I would make it a little bit more shallow, to move the bright vase even further in the background and enhance the focus on her.
- most of the other stuff I have in mind would be also more on personal preferences, and wouldn't help you in any way, I guess.
You should take a look at the Studio Harcourt's works. Maybe it will give you ideas.Ready for your daily dose of Glamour?
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I tried smth different with the background today, I guess I will go back to shadow play or try different backgrounds in future portraits.
I'm not a fan of parody art, but I love Layla's Ahegao faces, great job!
Yeah the girl MC looks good in the early picture i guess. Ooh "legal guardian" good... Look forward to progress with the game!Dude, that hair.. which one is it?
I sorely need that.
No, not yet. Maybe in a week or two.. idk
Where should that go anyway? General discussions?
They are the same characters (but the girl mc is wearing make-up on the night club scenes).
Wait.. you mean on that early first picture? The one I added later? Nope, the man next to the girl mc is her father.. I mean, her "legal guardian" or something
They are in a long term relationship, moving back to the city after a few years living abroad. Nothing queer about it (though they're not married).
I don't want to spoil things yet, cause it may change.
But there'll be no strange stuff going on, no lustful entity running and ruining(?) their lives or anything like that. Just that good old weary but true relationship.. and those casual ntr and/or incestual events that ordinary life has in store for us.
Thank you for this pointer. At least, now I have an excuse to polish my French. xDYou should take a look at the Studio Harcourt's works. Maybe it will give you ideas.
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