peekayy

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This is a great VN, but Im not sure if the story is being told properly. I was with Katherine in the bar, just about to open the sharing options, they mayor comes on the TV and then next thing I know, Im in the gym working out.
What happened to the rest of the night?
The same thing happened in Charles house. We were sitting down at the table talking about masturbating in the car, and next thing I know, Katherine is walking around the house commenting on how nice it is?
Its the same with a few other parts of the story too, Im not sure when or where I am, and I feel like Ive missed about 5 or 6 screens, as the story is moving too fast for me to comprehend.
Am I clicking too fast on the pictures, or is the story jumping place to place? 1Thousand
 
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Jubz

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Nov 17, 2017
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For the sharing with Kat. She wanted to do it, it was her in the first place that asked about spicing up their sex life. She likes playing as a slutty exhibitionist, it doesn't make sense if she had to be eased into it. The dev has already said she'll never cheat on MC, so he isn't going to be cucked or NTR'ed. She acts the same way on the Kat only route, just without the sharing stuff.

I don't think the other girls should have sharing paths. My one complaint about this game is the 3 main LI's all act the same way; slutty exhibitionists. They don't need all the same routes too.
She wanted to spice up, not a word about fucking with someone else (only choice's description hinted about sharing path). And in the street it was mc, who suggested to suck stranger's cock, but she thought about anal at first and wasn't sure about sharing (couple of seconds, tho), she's new to it. Funnier were only mc's words about stranger's cock.
 

Yougiblack

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So basically right now 1Thousand people are cheering if we could share Sarah also,as she's MC's Lover and colleague and the guys enjoys such ideas,so why not let everyone enjoy the beautiful trio ? Sharing is Caring
 
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Sharper

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Sep 6, 2017
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Who said something about anti-ntr? And second ntr(optional) threads. Try to read properly next time, my engrish not that bad.
If you discuss the vanilla part of the games that you call ntr(optional), I respect that. But in your posts the most used word could be ntr :) you write comments in ntr optional threads and discuss only the ntr option, but defend yourself as, "dont care the ntr, these threads that I wrote are not ntr threads, they're ntr(optional)." :):):) you clearly write in these threads to provoke the people who play the optional path, or provoke the dev to reduce the optinal paths content. Maybe you don't say this way, but your words are meaning this. I can see all of your comments in your profile, try to read your own old posts next time, it's your english, you can read it easily.
 

Jubz

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If you discuss the vanilla part of the games that you call ntr(optional), I respect that. But in your posts the most used word could be ntr :) you write comments in ntr optional threads and discuss only the ntr option, but defend yourself as, "dont care the ntr, these threads that I wrote are not ntr threads, they're ntr(optional)." :):):) you clearly write in these threads to provoke the people who play the optional path, or provoke the dev to reduce the optinal paths content. Maybe you don't say this way, but your words are meaning this. I can see all of your comments in your profile, try to read your own old posts next time, it's your english, you can read it easily.
Or no, i didn't now it. Want to talk about my comments and what do they mean - start conversation. Only provocation was to you, tho.
 

Aristos

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Those jumps in the scenes really spoil what's otherwise a great story.

I tried the game like 3 months ago and found that really annoying, but gave it some time since it was a recent game and I thought some things would be polished. The same thing keeps happening.

You shouldn't rush erotic scenes like that. Take your time showing them undressing, spicing up the action, varying it, making it richer.
It requires more renders but I'd rather have more meaningful renders that one of these low-quality animations. In my humble opinion, the dev should remove these animations which add no value to the game and focus on producing more amazing renders (he or she is very good at that). If at some point in the future he/she is able to produce better personalized animations, that would be perfect, but there's no need to include them now at any cost in order to make a good game.

Also, be careful with the pace and length of every scene. Put logical transitions between scenes that happen in different settings. Sometimes it feels like the story advances in fits and starts; that we are bouncing from one camera angle to another, from one location to a different one.

I write this because I like the game and think the story is great and has a lot of potential. However, all I read is either unconditional flattering or complaints about NTR/sharing or whatever kink anyone whines about. I think that criticism dealing with aspects that could be improved is much more important than that.
 
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Great update! Katherine remains one of the sexiest girls in porn/erotic VNs. Hope to see some story and action around new redhead girl from the village, Dhalia. She looks gorgeous.

The only thing I would want to see in Deliverance — option to leave the dresses on Katherine and other girls during sex scenes.

UPD: I agree with Aristos above, the game looks better w/o animations, besides they lags on tablet.
 

Moricano

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Jan 30, 2019
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Developer: 1Thousand
Hey friend 1Thousand all right, can I give you an idea?
There are several games that have a button on the screen to view the progress statistics of the player or characters.
It would be really cool if you could increase the game with a Status button is just a guess, because it is difficult to know if the main character is doing good deeds or bad deeds, to find out if he is doing well or bad just by accessing the rescue page with some rescue. cheating and watching over everyone's life. :)
The story is very interesting congratulations and success. (y)
 

Moricano

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I agree with Aristos above, the game looks better w/o animations, besides they lags on table
Game without animation please, it is enough a game world that has out there, without music, without animation only that horrible still sex image, a good game like this has to go with developments not with this type of thing.(n)
 

aqd

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I hope the dev makes a scene of MC and Kat on a playground literally on the swings to troll people complaining about the tag 'swinging'.

Great game. As many people have said, it's got great story and characters and the renders are high quality.
 
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Zoey Raven

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Sorry if this has been addressed but is there a way to turn off the quick menu, It's the only part about playing this that I really don't like?
 

Jadon Sancho

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Great update! But why not create animation for scene Trevor spank Katherine?:ROFLMAO:
Sondheim did not appear in this episode and instead was his slave, whether the town the MC was in had anything to do with the source of the power of the MC or Sondheim. I think Trevor or even Rose might be related to Sondheim :eek: and the MC team is getting into his game.:unsure:
 
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Paapi

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I first played with hero root. Only one villain point lest at end. Secondly i played with villain root. More options available in that way. I hope mc will not screwed up in future for choosing villain way.
 
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