HTML Abandoned Demitransference [v0.2.0] [UnrulyDogBoy]

[Deleted member 2666402]

Oh! I just read something in another topic. And I think your mother might not be happy with you. Bad Boy! Yes, yes.
But I like it. What a hot and se... sensitive mind

So I shouldn't require proficiency in Word Perfect? I don't know how you pick husbands but I have standards!

Unruly

 

[greenray]

What is the consumer attitude? I don't know, maybe you inhaled too much spice, Muad'Dib? And where are the feelings, romance, blah-blah-blah... Oh, come on... Word Perfect)))

 

[greenray]

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[Deleted member 2666402]

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unruly

 

[viktorbb]

So I shouldn't require proficiency in Word Perfect? I don't know how you pick husbands but I have standards!

Unruly

I thought you only had time for a new pup? Are you saying there's potential upward mobility with this position?!

My last dom's PPP loan just ran out, so he's shutting down his kennel and I'm only a few days away from being officially "stray" THANKS COVID!

On LinkedIn, "Unruly" is just returning a bunch of hair salons, but if I add "Dogboy" they seem to... immediately ban my IP address :/

 

[Deleted member 2666402]

I thought you only had time for a new pup? Are you saying there's potential upward mobility with this position?!

My last dom's PPP loan just ran out, so he's shutting down his kennel and I'm only a few days away from being officially "stray" THANKS COVID!

On LinkedIn, "Unruly" is just returning a bunch of hair salons, but if I add "Dogboy" they seem to... immediately ban my IP address :/

Oops you caught me an inconsistency. Sorry, no possibility of advancement.

(Thank you for the laugh... really hoping you aren’t actually going stray)

Unruly

 

[basicgarlic]

I think BasicGarlic's idea is great.

THE GREAT SEX SCENE CONTEST #1​

I am looking to add quick random sexual encounters for when the player selects :

1. Attend Class
2. Go for a Run
3. Study in the Lounge
4. Workout at the Gym

These encounters consist of 1 to 3 images and a short 3 to 4 paragraph description I have several ready for the next update but more and greater variety would go a long way toward improving the game. So I am sponsoring a contest:

RULES OF CONTEST:

• Submit your entry
  • Between now and Feb 1st submit images (1 to 3) and a few sentences describing the kink and what you envision for the scene (if you are extremely motivated you could write the entire scene).
  • JPG, GIF, WEBP are preferred formats for images/video
  • You can post your entry in the F95 forum or in a private conversation.
  • Your entry should relate (in some way) to school (class), being in a park (run), dorm rooms (study lounge), or a gym (umm gym)
  • Individuals appearing in images must clearly be over 18. Any entries that are questionable will not be accepted.
• From Feb 1 to Feb 15, voting will take place
  • You can vote on F95, TFGame.com, or itch.io
  • The top submissions will be added to the game
• Prize!
  • Your name on the scene you inspired.
  • My gratitude

Any thoughts you have on improving the contest are welcome!

Well since a small idea turned into a contest that only needs a hunk male stewardess (someone add one or two please) i am going to add a few things that i had in mind, for future scenes:
-another option. if you liked one situation but not the outcome, add a different option to choose from.
-part two. Go with another great time with someone again (it's probably easier saying that it was the same surfer or taxi driver instead of putting a different new one)
-play with everything, from ethnicity (black, asian, latam, arabic, nordic, to even different countries like british or some land down under guy), age (from fellow student to "fellow kid"),body type (bear, otter, muscular,lean to name a few), profession (doctor, boxer, cop, waiter, fireman, athlete, lawyer, soldier, plumber, mechanic and more like cosplayer or even "famous" using fake pics) and a fetish that doesn't need to be so rare, like more romantic (kisses, petting), more hard (chains, whips), threesome ,watersports or whatever floats your boat.
Just mix a few and done.

 

[Deleted member 2666402]

contest is still a go but I am pushing back the deadlines by one week:
Feb 8 deadline to submit and Feb 25 will end voting.

I think BasicGarlic's idea is great.

THE GREAT SEX SCENE CONTEST #1​

I am looking to add quick random sexual encounters for when the player selects :

1. Attend Class
2. Go for a Run
3. Study in the Lounge
4. Workout at the Gym

These encounters consist of 1 to 3 images and a short 3 to 4 paragraph description I have several ready for the next update but more and greater variety would go a long way toward improving the game. So I am sponsoring a contest:

RULES OF CONTEST:

• Submit your entry
  • Between now and Feb 8th submit images (1 to 3) and a few sentences describing the kink and what you envision for the scene (if you are extremely motivated you could write the entire scene).
  • JPG, GIF, WEBP are preferred formats for images/video
  • You can post your entry in the F95 forum or in a private conversation.
  • Your entry should relate (in some way) to school (class), being in a park (run), dorm rooms (study lounge), or a gym (umm gym)
  • Individuals appearing in images must clearly be over 18. Any entries that are questionable will not be accepted.
• From Feb 8 to Feb 25,voting will take place
  • You can vote on F95, TFGame.com, or itch.io
  • The top submissions will be added to the game
• Prize!
  • Your name on the scene you inspired.
  • My gratitude

Any thoughts you have on improving the contest are welcome!

 

[xxx_chris2018]

contest is still a go but I am pushing back the deadlines by one week:
Feb 8 deadline to submit and Feb 25 will end voting.

I'm working on my idea. I know you said one scene, but it kinda built up so that there's one scene at each of the four activities, haha. They are connected. But you could likely do them independently, so I'll just submit what I have and you can do what you want with it.

 

[Deleted member 2666402]

I'm working on my idea. I know you said one scene, but it kinda built up so that there's one scene at each of the four activities, haha. They are connected. But you could likely do them independently, so I'll just submit what I have and you can do what you want with it.

Sounds great!

 

[GS523523]

If everytime we click the button we get a sex scene, it might become a bit repetetive.
Have you considered making it more dynamic, like:
33% chance:
Class was boring.
Nothing happened.
33% chance:
Someone in class made a funny joke.
Insert joke from list of joke scenes.
33% chance:
The proffessor's cleavage is getting you horny.
Insert porn from list of sex scenes.

 

[Deleted member 2666402]

If everytime we click the button we get a sex scene, it might become a bit repetetive.
Have you considered making it more dynamic, like:
33% chance:
Class was boring.
Nothing happened.
33% chance:
Someone in class made a funny joke.
Insert joke from list of joke scenes.
33% chance:
The proffessor's cleavage is getting you horny.
Insert porn from list of sex scenes.

I love the joke idea. My plan is a lot like what you list. I currently have it at 30% nothing special. 20% minor silly thing, 30% short sex scene, and 20% mini side story. I will definitely use your joke idea! Thanks for making the game better. (not I need to get some jokes).

Oh wait, I got one:

A pony walks into a bar, sits at the bar, and in a quiet, scratchy voice says, "May I have a glass of water?"

The bartender doesn't hear.

The pony asks again, a little louder, "May I have a glass of water?"

The bartender brings the pony a glass of water and asks, "What's wrong with your voice?"

The pony responds, "I'm a little hoarse"​

 

[ForestMagi]

Oh dear, is the request now for jokes? Because, uh, if you don't mind some mild plagiarism, I know A TON of of stand-up comedy quotes you could probably use.

If you want quick one-liners, I highly recommend Mitch Hedberg, who sadly passed away a few years ago. "When I was a little kid, I laid in my twin-sized bed and wondered where my brother was." is one of his more well-known quips.

Rodney Dangerfield is really good for self-deprecating humor. "My girlfriend called me up, she said, 'Come over, nobody is home." I went over. Nobody was home."

If you want longer bits, Rita Rudner and Kathleen Madigan are good. Rita is much more about the foibles of being a woman ("Men loves cars, women love clothes. I only like cars because they take me to clothes."), Kathleen is great for just random stuff ("They say kids ask a thousand questions every day. A thousand questions. You know why? Because you were dumb enough to answer the first one! 'Hey, Aunt Kat, how come that dog's allowed to play in the yard, but ours isn't?' 'Fuck if I know.'").

 

[basicgarlic]

I love the joke idea. My plan is a lot like what you list. I currently have it at 30% nothing special. 20% minor silly thing, 30% short sex scene, and 20% mini side story.

I don't want to be that guy(no one likes that guy), so i'll say what is the problem with that and then i'll add a small change to make it work, because is a good idea, but not so sure if it works for this game.
The problem is that the classes, run, etc are kinda like a part of the game that, at the moment, i see it just like something to make the time run when i don't have anything to do with training and transformations.
This idea works good for games like young marcus, because you go to school every working day, but here, using it just in a casual way i have my doubts.
As i said the idea is good, but maybe then you should add more times during the day, to run, study and more(even if is only one). And to make this really work,(and using unruly's idea about swim class), maybe the game needs some stats like grades for clases, stress for run,social for lounge and body for gym (probably better names but you get the idea?).
This way it makes sense to go there more times, because the way it is right now i see this like a short sex scene between moving the plot.

Ps: we know someone that isn't cool for his jokes.

 

[GS523523]

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I disagree with the stats idea. We already have enough stats regarding the transformations, adding these stats you suggest will make the game incredibly grindy (like most html games). Especially if content ends up being gated behind taking 10 runs in the park.
Like you said, these events are just there to pass the time. IMO we shouldn't be forced to click on them to advance the plot.

 

[basicgarlic]

I disagree with the stats idea. We already have enough stats regarding the transformations, adding these stats you suggest will make the game incredibly grindy (like most html games). Especially if content ends up being gated behind taking 10 runs in the park.
Like you said, these events are just there to pass the time. IMO we shouldn't be forced to click on them to advance the plot.

That's not want i said. the stats would mean nothing right now.Unruly talked about making one for swim practice,so in the future you get some more scenes the more you go to practice.
What i said is that these study, run, lounge, gym to me are just something that i'll click when i don't have any plot scenes available,so if i click on these to get nothing or just a joke to me that is pointless.
These scenes were based on whoremaker, and they just repeat one after the other,and yeah with time they get boring, but in that game you mainly have just those.Here this are just a small part. So no,the stats means no grind at all.it just a way to in the future put something with that, if you want. You don't need them, but i can say the same about a joke in a porn game.

 

[Deleted member 2666402]

That's not want i said. the stats would mean nothing right now.Unruly talked about making one for swim practice,so in the future you get some more scenes the more you go to practice.
What i said is that these study, run, lounge, gym to me are just something that i'll click when i don't have any plot scenes available,so if i click on these to get nothing or just a joke to me that is pointless.
These scenes were based on whoremaker, and they just repeat one after the other,and yeah with time they get boring, but in that game you mainly have just those.Here this are just a small part. So no,the stats means no grind at all.it just a way to in the future put something with that, if you want. You don't need them, but i can say the same about a joke in a porn game.

Ok I understand. Let me think on this. RIGHT NOW. No stats.

I may want tweak the % to get the porn more frequently. And the jokes wouldn't be the pony joke (though that is an amazing joke...LITTLE HOARSE) but rather would be sexy image and then a funny statement that relates to the image.

But in the future, once we build up the number of quick porn scenes, we might want to tier them. You only get A, B, C, events randomly at first but after enough times deciding to go for a run, D and E open up. And then finally you can see F, G, H, and I.

Good thoughts. I really don't know what I'd do without you guys. This input is very helpful.

Unruly

But just checking....it's really a NO on the pony joke?

 

[alexxxx000]

Ok I understand. Let me think on this. RIGHT NOW. No stats.

I may want tweak the % to get the porn more frequently. And the jokes wouldn't be the pony joke (though that is an amazing joke...LITTLE HOARSE) but rather would be sexy image and then a funny statement that relates to the image.

But in the future, once we build up the number of quick porn scenes, we might want to tier them. You only get A, B, C, events randomly at first but after enough times deciding to go for a run, D and E open up. And then finally you can see F, G, H, and I.

Good thoughts. I really don't know what I'd do without you guys. This input is very helpful.

Unruly

But just checking....it's really a NO on the pony joke?

It's only to be expected that a dog boy also likes pony play jokes

Ba dum tss

I am very sorry

 

[ForestMagi]

I like the pony joke, but it might better fit the game if he's just a guy in a horse suit... a "baloney pony", if you will.

 

[basicgarlic]

But just checking....it's really a NO on the pony joke?

Yeah. It's too good to improve, just peak comedy, so leave it on this level. Don't need to try more.
On a little more serious note i can see Ryder telling it while kidnap..., i mean, driving companions.
And one question, is there a limit of scenes to submit for the contest?
For future editions, sure with resub/modificated scenes a limit is needed, but for this one...?