Hello.
I like the game but it was very hard to make a review because for me it's more a story than a game.
So, in order to share my thoughts, I wanted to try every possibilities but after 17 attempts with only Jake and Trent, I think I've seen enough to have a global idea of the game.
I've also paid more attention to the narration, especially the introduction and I still don't understand the reactions of Tiffany, Jake and Trent, and how they could go to such length to drag you down and how other's people believing it so easily. Maybe we'll learn more about it later on.
At this point, we transform Jake 3 times, Trent 2 times and Tiffany 1 time.
Jake seems to be more affected, like an empty shell. Tiffany doesn't seem mature at all at the festival. And Trent, I don't know what to think about him : he's supposed to be in love with Adam but I don't feel it. I only feel obsession and possessiveness. The "Princess" naming during the training came out of nowhere for me.
The variety of characters is well thought, though I don't know why I have difficulties to differentiate Vadim and Victor.
The trainings :
I feel the length of each path is way too different, especially between Coach Joel training (he's not invited to Ryder's picnic like the others) and Trent training with Grey (since there is a night session).
If you choose training with Paul and Liam and decide to have sex with the tweens transformed, the images of the threesome is confusing since Lia is blonde in the image of sex while you describe her with brown/dark hair at first.
The preview for Grey's training with you dominant is tempting.
I'm confused with the beer pong : does it change anything to the tranformation to loose, cheat or play fair? I feel like it's the same result.
The visits :
It's easy to have coach Joel or Deshawn, and you understand what you have to do for Derrick's visit. But for Vadim, it took me some time to unlock him since I usually prefer training with coach Joel and avoid Grey's training because it's too much for me.
The side stories :
Fratboy in trouble, Mismatched couple and Victor's picnic are all pleasant. Though, if you didn't choose the good transformations, nothing happens or you can't do anything. In that case, I think they shouldn't appear.
The transformations for mismatched couple are kept for the second part?
The second part for Victor, An Event with Victor A pool Party, is only an exchange of dicks pics?
The mini events :
Rhett and Tank are 2 jerks at first but they are kind of cute if you choose the right path.
Rhett could continue to appear after the school event because the chemistry works well between them. What happens to Michael, Rhett's stalker, after the transformation?
It's hard to win against Tank. I think I can only win when I steal Trent strength 2 times.
The artist is cool. I like reversible content (that's what I choose for Deshawn).
The divine underwear shouldh't appear after the second time since it's the same thing (or we should alternate between the 2 parts).
There should be something with Tyrone after Campus Hypnosis. And I found it too easy for Adam to be hypnotized since he is a demigod.
In Dream Transference, Dr Duran's dialog is in pink, the same color as Adam's thoughts, it's confusing. The same, if we choose the friendship option, when we have to choose between top/bottom later on, Ryan continues to call Adam bro. It's really strange since we're not in the friendship zone anymore.
Cayden is my favorite event. Though if you choose to workout only the first time, you won't be able to encounter Torro. I think a sexy workout without sex with Torro should be possible.
There should be some content for Blake alone, outside of Issac's event.
And I think we should go further with Isaiah in the study lounge since it's clear he's interested.
Take a Nap/Go to Bed Early/Go Back to Bed :
There should be a possibility to be joined when you sleep.
I like the reference you made for young Marcus - Expanded and Campus Magnum.
You're realy good at choosing pics : Denis Vega when you run is my favorite, the Big Bad Wolf isn't bad either, Daimhin avatar is great (too bad, Daimhin is no more).
There should be more content for the Slam/Dom couple. They were pretty cute.
Some precisions that would be useful :
What is the difference for HC between trust and believe. It's vague.
What is Tink background to understand Grey reaction?
We need more Alex's story, not the sad ones only.
I understand Nym's anger but I can't grasp why it happened at that time.
I think I found a dead end. When you choose Workout in the Gym, it can lead you to Training the Trainer Later Visits without any link.
So, to conclude, I like the game because you can choose what you want do with every character you encounter, though I don't know where it's leading. And you can continue to play outside the main story.
Whoo! Mateo is being manipulated by a supernatural entity. Redemption might still be possible (depending on how you treated Mateo in the past).
Maybe all he needs is your love. and Cock or just cock or friendship (and cock)
Cool. I felt bad when the entity took control over Mateo.
While I'm at it, I remember in an older version, the event with Drew was more violent (Adam nearly lost consciouness) and 2 people were needed to stop him. Did you rewrite it or I didn't choose the right actions to lead there?
Waiting for the end of act 1.