I don't try to talk to much on these threads, but you ask for criticism, so here goes. There isn't much I can say that hasn't already been said as the content goes. The best I have to say is I'm a fan of this artstyle/renderstyle. The other point is, I hope you know what you're doing with respect to NTR. I don't like it, but it's cool that other people do. However, I've seen other devs suffer because they misunderstood both the appeal and hatred that comes with it. So I make you know what you're doing. My two cents, if you are trying to make a Harem/Incest story, NTR is basically a non-starter. Most people jump into Harem because there is only one person/guy doing the fucking. If you're interested in doing NTR you should go all in. Focus a story about it and work on that niche. If you want a more hardcore NTR, or a lighter more involved one. It's up to you, but mixing Harem/Incest and NTR almost always ends in hurt for the dev and for the quality of the product. People end up making too many different routes and it smokes out before the V.05
Anyway, I wish you luck on your game. I'll check out the next version, i hope it only continues to improve!