So I played the game in the 0.59 version an I had some mixed reactions.
The main story is not creative but it is ok. Classic boy comes home after losing everything. It's a very "millennial" story. The main story core are composed by Kaira, Nicole and Amanda are very cliché but very solid. A good story. Characters like Camile and Caroline make it even more interesting! These two characters even have a much more interesting narrative than the core girls of the game.
Camille story starts very well, it is not develloped yet, but if the MC acept her and go back and try to continue things where they left off he practically violates her! Even Camille didn't get what happened! It goes from nice e smooth to "I accept you so I will rape you to show we are ok"... too fast paced. Did they hug each other? And the MC just runs away after. Too fast paced. Maybe you shoud consider to go more slow at the beginning, or after that. The player already have Nicole as "anxiety pill". For example Caroline route and Kaira, wich are completly different vibes but are well slow peaced. And that is nice to, the author know how to do it. Caroline is very well writen so far.
There is some mystery by a mysterious character which did not show the real nature of itself to the point i stopped playing. Maybe is a good surprise.
The MC behaves completely randomly. With some characters he has a friendly and even shy behavior and with others he is a complete asshole. He changes so much as he behaves with certain characters that it even looks like he has some bipolar disorder. Maybe he does.
The art in the game is smooth. Maybe work more the anal scenes, they are almost hiding what they are doing.
For me there was a big turn down point on the game was Olivia route. The "blackmail/corruption" of Olivia goes too far. I know that most of games with corruption use blackmail as a safe plotline. It is even an overused resource. Some writers manage to use better (and is already a cliché when the blackmail backfires... but is ok to use). But this one goes from "you can lose your job" to "I almost killed you by accident in public to show who's boss". What? If you play the Nicole route they even make a "safe word" to do a not even near dangerous thing as what MC put Olivia throug. Maybe set some warning here for this route if the author want it stay like this. But for me here is where I drew the line and stoped to play. I do not want to come to something similar on the others routes.
