VN Ren'Py Abandoned Derealization [v0.0.5.0] [Greenish Purple]

[HogRocket]

There's a guy on YouTube named Dave Knop (goes by Knoptop) that does videos about film/camera/sound stuff. When I saw the MC I thought it was him
Knoptop, is a funny, laid back kind of guy. Basically the exact opposite of the MC. It throws me off (in a humorous way) to see him acting depressed, angry and creepy. I, of course, named my MC - Dave

 

[YRS™]

Whats laptop password ?

 

[m4pII]

Whats laptop password ?

Nobody knows this except Ash)

 

[Boehser Onkel]

it´s a kinetic novel , isnt it ?
because no "choice" has a variable,value - means fake choices

 

[Penfold Mole]

SWEET JESUS WHAT IS WITH THAT EVIL-I-FIED DOUBLE FREAKIN' STANK EYE?????

No need to call an exorcist for this one yet.

It's a lot freakier when someone's head is turned 90 or more degrees left or right in some games or fan art that I've seen and quite a lot. That's when you might want to think "who ya gonna call" when "there's somethin' weird and it don't look good"

 

[Boehser Onkel]

should be somehow the name we gave the mc , right ? @ Greenish Purple

 

[Penfold Mole]

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should be somehow the name we gave the mc , right ? @ Greenish Purple

Of course some random Jake and the MC (whatever you called him) are completely different people. Aren't they?

 

[omegaX]

What do you mean ?

i cant play the game , it wont load up as its the new version of renpy

 

[Boehser Onkel]

soooo....

this game has many flaws - from poor writing to half-hearted renders(at some points)
the story makes no sense (i am at the first office day ) till now
and still i wanted to give it a try - untill this she-hulk boss appeared ...
i mean w t f .....
the "choices" are fake ones (no variables or values in the code) -
you may get 1 or 2 different sentences but that is all about those "choices"

im out

 

[Boehser Onkel]

Of course some random Jake and the MC (whatever you called him) are completely different people. Aren't they?

nope
the mc´s given name is Jake , the mc (jake) was 1 year in treatment with his shrink ...

 

[Orichan]

Wait so even if they not related its still an issue? That's just fucked up... Well let's hope the dev can find a way to work around that without getting into any shit..that's if he plans on making her a potential love interest

To be honest it seems like a façade, because you can easily go around that rule by letting the player name the relationship they have with the other characters, like many games already do, and since they're still not banned or suspended I guess Patreon accept that solution.

 

[maninx]

Nice update it's getting there like the MC's mature assertive character and the serious dark humor goes really well with it
The characters are peculiar with most of them being psychologically unstable goes well to showcase the fact that there are people worse off than MC himself props to whoever wrote the plot for the characters and designed them.

It's an irony that the MC of your VN works as a proofreader but you guys actually need one in real life.

The story telling could use some improvements sometimes it doesn't make sense that is going on there are some incoherences there.

Good renders, Interesting plot with an interesting story to tell, Great characters all the recipe you need for a success but with a bit of better presentation and writing it can finally reap its full potentials.

 

[Gleemer]

Here is the Italian translation

of Derealization [v0.0.1]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Derealization [v0.0.1]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.



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Here is the Italian translation

of Derealization [v0.0.1]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Derealization [v0.0.1]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

Italian translation

Updated: 2021-09-16
Version: 0.0.2

 

[Penfold Mole]

nope
the mc´s given name is Jake , the mc (jake) was 1 year in treatment with his shrink ...

I was joking , since technically, the sentence isn't false.

i cant play the game , it wont load up as its the new version of renpy

You could try to disable model based rendering and try to play the game. No guarantees it will work, though

 

[Boehser Onkel]

I was joking , since technically, the sentence isn't false.

oh well ... didnt got it then ... a bit tired today -- sry

 

[Penfold Mole]

oh well ... didnt got it then ... a bit tired today -- sry

No need, it wasn't that good of a joke

 

[Alex5280]

So far, this one is looking pretty good. Renders look good and the story seems interesting. Translations are a bit off at times, so could use a native english speaker to proofread, but it isn't terrible.

I did run into a bug. If you choose to not call Sydney at night it can't find "donotcall" or something like that. Not sure what it was exactly, but it was something like that.

Anyway, looking forward to the next update.

 

[diolo]

It's an irony that the MC of your VN works as a proofreader but you guys actually need one in real life.

he is not. he can't work without the password for the computer. insidergag? mc can't work, therefore bad translation in the game?

 

[Deleted member 1263072]

It could have BI route, you have to value the MC

 

[Thotfodder]

Planned: Lesbian
Never: Gay

Question: Doesn't that contradict the definition of "Lesbian"?
You DO realize "Lesbian" means "Gay woman" right?
For the sake of argument you COULD mean "no Gay MEN" but if you're having it labeled as "Never: Gay" then that would imply no gay content in GENERAL.