VN Ren'Py Desire for Freedom [v0.1.2] [GNK]

[AshramAscendant]

I enjoy the game but it could really use a proof reader GNK games.
If you are going to define names with letters (ie. define i = Character(_('[name]'), color="#7022ec") then you should use that letter in all cases and not write out their names in the script. It saves time and reduces mistyped names ("Good morning Samanta. It's good to see you. How are you feeling today?"). Also if you ever feel you want to change the names in the future you only have to edit the name definition line instead of the full script. Mike refers to the MC as Pete at one point (not my MC's name) and MC calls him Micke.
Overall enjoyable story.

 

[no_name_742]

is the public version missing text or is this a bug

 

[xanthras]

how much $$ does one have to give to unlock the full version? what level of patreon will get you there?

 

[Kaos_Theory]

is the public version missing text or is this a bug
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It's not a bug, it's an 'unfinished' version for non-Patreons.

 

[Daxter250]

Is this full version or public?

sry, didnt get the notification it seems. its the public version. ima write the word "full" in the title if it is indeed the full version.

 

[JokerLeader]

Desire for Freedom [v0.08 PATREON] [Compressed]

Original Size Win/Linux: 790 MB

Compressed Size Win/Linux: 96 MB:

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Compressing process reduces image/audio/video quality and can break the game, be aware of that.

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[skyteam]

which version has more content, as of now? the v0.08 full, or v0.08.5 public?

 

[Ramagar]

which version has more content, as of now? the v0.08 full, or v0.08.5 public?

Full has more. Public is a highly edited version

 

[Joe Steel]

so its her story and not the boss?

That's one of the problems with the belief that there are "multiple protagonist" games and stories. "Multiple protagonist" means no protagonist, but a bunch of POV characters instead. Tat works in epics, but not in interpersonal games like this. You can't show both sides of a relationship and maintain any dramatic tension at all.

I'd advise the dev to just pick a protagonist and tell the story through their eyes and decisions.

 

[Trasher2018]

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For a game with a paywall I dont see that reflected in the quality of the game. Even besides the poor translation/writing there are other issues with it.

 

[Sir Ice]

Shittiest translation job I have ever seen.

 

[jackfriday001]

android?

 

[Sadowdark]

Why do I have the female name Alice first and then change my name to GNK when she walks in on her husband ?

 

[Jokr_]

so like you have to pay to see sex

 

[Sadowdark]

is the public version missing text or is this a bug
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I have the same

 

[Kame-Sennin]

That's one of the problems with the belief that there are "multiple protagonist" games and stories. "Multiple protagonist" means no protagonist, but a bunch of POV characters instead. Tat works in epics, but not in interpersonal games like this. You can't show both sides of a relationship and maintain any dramatic tension at all.

I'd advise the dev to just pick a protagonist and tell the story through their eyes and decisions.

Let the developer make his own game, make his game , his own taste , you'll see that games created with passion is much better than games built by several peoples's preference because of developer's greed for money. You are not even paying him in the first place

 

[msleomac]

Desire for Freedom [v0.08.8 PUBLIC] [Compressed]

Original Size Win/Linux: 790 MB

Compressed Size Win/Linux: 96 MB:

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Compressed Size Mac: 62 MB:

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Is this patreon or public version?

 

[Sadowdark]

Is this patreon or public version?

In the public version, there are no dialogues and there is little animation of scenes

 

[msleomac]

In the public version, there are no dialogues and there is little animation of scenes

Haven't started playing yet

 

[BRaider2020]

how much time is normally need for the patron version catch up with the public one?