VN Ren'Py Desire of Fate [Ep.3 v1] [KKpotato]

[Ozygator]

Like the premise of the story. But dialogues needs some polishing. Often time comes as forced and cringe. Too many internal monologue and information dump.

Do you have specific examples? I found very little to be cringe worthy. I found a lot of the dialogue well done and refrreshing. One of the better written games i have played in the last few months. The only real text/info dense parts were the entire backstory about the revolutions and some of the conference backstory info, but there were even two versions of the history lesson for those who wanted the TL;DR version.

 

[Bahamut Zero]

wow I've been waiting for a while the update on this title! I really like this game.

Just an advice if i can... have you think about put in also an x-ray vision? Its really excites to see the internal cumshot
Anyway this update was really good. The last sex scene was really hot! Cant wait to se a sex scene like this with the MC's mother or any of his family
Thank you for the update

 

[Martyr Mcjones]

The models are really hot, good update.

 

[wiseold6996]

I agree with your statement. I will do some polishing given the opportunity.

need a stat screen for girls

 

[Jimskeleton]

A fairly short but good update, decided to pledge on Patreon, looking forward to more.

 

[KKpotato]

need a stat screen for girls

I will make it in the next update.

 

[Kinky Bully]

Good job, on the update. A bit small, but good. The later parts have good improvements.

 

[Allan Trumbull]

bad game. Wasted data & time

 

[DarkXDaemon]

I've noticed two spelling errors myself didnt pay to much attention for it but found them so decided to help by posting them First is they say 'Wemen' instead of 'Women' and second is 'we ust met' instead of 'we just met'.

 

[KKpotato]

I've noticed two spelling errors myself didnt pay to much attention for it but found them so decided to help by posting them First is they say 'Wemen' instead of 'Women' and second is 'we ust met' instead of 'we just met'.

View attachment 1972330 View attachment 1972329

The first one is not a mistake, it is supposed to be a joke and it was misspelled on purpose.
Thanks for pointing out the second one.

 

[DiK.......]

Hi, will there be a 32-bit version of the game ?

 

[KKpotato]

Hi, will there be a 32-bit version of the game ?

No, I don't think so. The latest version of Renpy has removed the 32-bit version. 32bit version users are fewer and it always throws a false positive for many antiviruses. This was their reasoning. And, I use the latest version.

Sorry.

 

[DiK.......]

No, I don't think so. The latest version of Renpy has removed the 32-bit version. 32bit version users are fewer and it always throws a false positive for many antiviruses. This was their reasoning. And, I use the latest version.

Sorry.

Tnx for quick reply, good luck with the game, loved the start

 

[salty_croissant]

Good game, short updates with long delay though ....

 

[KKpotato]

Good game, short updates with long delay though ....

Sorry, But I had graduation finals. I hope you understand.

 

[artofwar]

KKpotato Not sure if it's been mentioned yet but you overwrote the players lust stat at the end of the episode, you have it set to $lust=+2 instead of $lust+=2 which sets the variable to 2 instead of adding 2 to the existing number.

It's under "menu ep1v1_lily_bath2:" in the ep1v1.rpy file.

 

[KKpotato]

KKpotato Not sure if it's been mentioned yet but you overwrote the players lust stat at the end of the episode, you have it set to $lust=+2 instead of $lust+=2 which sets the variable to 2 instead of adding 2 to the existing number.

It's under "menu ep1v1_lily_bath2:" in the ep1v1.rpy file.

Yeah, I have noticed that. But I am not gonna bother making a bug fix for it for now. As I plan to rework the codes and dialogues and, even some renders for the next update. So, old saves won't work.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

So, old saves won't work.

not even Jesus was betrayed like this ç_ç

 

[JenusKudo]

Let's say that I don't like one of the girls... She could be a side girl or a family member... Are you saying that I am going to get a bad ending because I don't have a good relationship with her?(if so, then that's a bad design for any game.)

 

[KKpotato]

Let's say that I don't like one of the girls... She could be a side girl or a family member... Are you saying that I am going to get a bad ending because I don't have a good relationship with her?(if so, then that's a bad design for any game.)

You don't have to be in a relationship with them. But having a bad or toxic relationship may or may not have conciquences.