@PingPanda hey, I just thought I'd let you know some of your triggers aren't working correctly. For the day_tick dependent events, I don't think "x or y" is proper syntax for ren'py. Not 100% sure because I've never coded in Python, but none of those events ever actually fall through to the else statement. Instead, I think you should just use != z, as in if the variable is not equal to the value needed for the fall through, then trigger the if statement. I tried doing it that way and it worked fine.
Also it kinda sucks that you got rid of the mall scene and the peeping on the Mom scene for now. I could see the mall scene fitting in maybe later with a bit of a rework given the direction you took the Mom in this update, but maybe you could work in the peeping scene as a prerequisite for the escalated lounge scenes or something? Great work, and thanks for taking feedback here!
EDIT: Also does anyone have the version with the stuff with the older sister fucking before it got removed? PM it to me if you can please. Thanks.