Will I have to add a god-awful tutorial to make people acknowledge the travel menu on the top right ?
Would be useful for everyone^^'. Got stuck there too at the beginning but I was able to find "the way out of it".
You just need to write one to three sentences about how the GUI works on your game. That is totally enough.
Just played your game recently and I need to say that I´m really impressed how good this game is developed right now.
Earning Money isnt hard in this game and especially it isnt boring or toilsome, like in some other games. I like the difference between the characters.
Keep it up! I'll have my eye on this game.
I have some suggestions where I think this could improve your game further:
1. Actually I dont see any reason, why we should use the option "Teach Class" in the classroom. It only gaves us 25$ per session. If you help to train Frankie you get 50$ at the beginning and after he transformed to hulk you get 100$ per train session. So actually there are no needs to teach the class. Maybe teaching the class will get you afeection points to every classmate. I dont know how I can say it properly but i think it will be a good addition to the game if you add this into the game: At the beginning to the game you NEED to teach the class some days to be able to speak with the girls. maybe some girls need some more lessons than others to be able to talk with them. I mean the main character is a complete "stranger" to these girls and currently he is able to invite every one of them to your house every day. So after you teach them all some time the first "barrier" is broken and they dont find it strange that you start talking to them. I hope this is a good idea for you to improve the "Teach Class" Option.
2. While playing your game i notice that the most actions are placed between evening and night. The only two progression Stories in the Morning and Midday are the first part of Lola and the latest parts of Kara's story around her house. So beside making money there are not much left to do in the first two parts of the day.
At around 50% of my playtime I've collected so much money that I've started to ignore every morning and Midday (by skipping with the clock symbol). There was no need to earn money anymore, the passive income from the Stripclub was more than enough. At the end of the current version i have 17k $.
So my suggestion is to make the Lab accessible at the Morning and Midday, so people dont have to "waste" the evening´s and night´s to produce the serums. there´s currently way to much to do on these two parts of the day. Also maybe change it, that procuring the materials for the serums also took one part of a day. With that we should be able to waste the first two parts of the day by producing serums while still having "fun" at the evening.
3. Please make a quicktravel to the Lab Office. It was kind of annoying to click twice on the Travel button everytime. (currently: travel -> lab ; travel -> Lab office)
4. I think in the game there are too less options for the use of the blue and the pink serum. Blue for example have only three uses right now if I remember correctly. I think the Blue serum should always be needed for every Girl at the beginning of the game/training. So you need the Blue Serum to make it able that the girls are comming to your house in the first place and/or make them more open to new "suggestions" (e.g.: After the undressing scenes you need to aply the Blue serum to make it able to touch them(to unlock the next options)) Especially Lola could use some blue serums at the beginning. (The first part where she helps you out at the gym)
5. I'm a huge fan of Breast Expansion and I'm glad to see much of it here in your game. Are you planning to add some more Green Serums "Events to Chrystal, Kara and Lola? Especially Lola is my favorite.
I'm pretty sure that you will add at least one green serum event to Lola and since all the other girls got an appearance change after the first to second dose of the green serum, I really want to tell you this:
I totally like the current look from Lola (after first Green Serum) and I really want to see on her another dosis of the Green Serum WITHOUT changing her look/appearance (Hair Style/colour, Make-up, etc) after the threatment (maybe just a liitle bit). This is my personal opinion so its totally up to you if you agree or disagree with me.
Since I think that you actually planning to change Lola with the next dosis i want to introduce you with my suggestion for her, to put this suggestion between her current state and your future plannings:
At the current state of the version i think she is in the end stage of phase two (Phase one:
; Phase two: "
)
So the only addition to Phase Two would be giving her the second dosis of the green serum (since she wants to be like "
")
She will only gain some more additions to her Assets (Boobs/Ass, Maybe gets a little bit taller too?(Also fan from a little bit height grow)) But no drastically change to her appearance (hairstyle/make-up, etc).
At Phase Three she will be at the House of the Maincharacter. There the Main Character and Lola can "know" each other better, since Lola dont like and trust the Main character currently (Will cost some Blue and Pink serums aswell?) Feel free to make whatever you have in mind for her there.
At the End of Phase Three, Lola will get another Dose of the Green Serum. With that Serum she will surpass every proportions from "
." Now you can change her appearance like you wanted to be and make the Fourth Stage also totally like you want.
Addition: After Lola surpasses
proportions,
will get jealous. She will go to the main character and want one green serum aswell (since she was interestet in that serum since the beginning). With that dosis, her assets will grow to the same proportions like Lola. So noone can get jealous again. (To end this for you) The Jealously-Event should start at the endphase of her current state of the latest version.
Sooo... long story long text... I hope I am able to help you somehow and give you some inspiration aswell. Sorry for taking so much time from you.
Keep up the good work!
Since it is so much, I would appreciate a response from you, if you have time for that aswell ^^'. (Again I'm sorry)
