VN Ren'Py Abandoned Devilish Business [v0.71] [Bawdy Baron]

[Hartigan]

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emma bikini
emma bikini cover
emma bikini topless smile
emma bikini topless shocked
emma bikini back
emma bikini butt

hannah

a topless
a behind1
a behind2

 

[WhiskeyJack_98]

i dont know if its just me but are there really no images for the sex scenes? I just finished the part where I fingered jessica while on the way to the charity event. and all I got were the text dialogue. is it like this all throughout the game?

 

[BawdyBaron]

Really ? I doubt it man, I don't trigger any scene no matter how much I grind , even the show boob thing with Ashley and kiss won't show any renders . All of it just dialog and the the only images that I see is their Bust . I checked the Image folder, there really is no renders except their Bust in the dialog . The game's content is more on TALKS

i dont know if its just me but are there really no images for the sex scenes? I just finished the part where I fingered jessica while on the way to the charity event. and all I got were the text dialogue. is it like this all throughout the game?

V0.45b added a few nudes, but art is expensive so I can only add more art periodically. More supporters on Patreon means more art for the game.

For now it's mostly a text-based game.

Thanks for trying it out though!

several Pictures Missing

emma bikini
emma bikini cover
emma bikini topless smile
emma bikini topless shocked
emma bikini back
emma bikini butt

hannah

a topless
a behind1
a behind2

Yeah, there isn't much art yet. The code for them is in the game but the art just hasn't been made yet.

I was not impressed. I found it lacking in these areas.
1. Not letting the MC have choices. This refers to how the interview questions raised my suspicions and failed to let the MC read the fine print. Then were suppose to trust the father, a lair, and devil to honestly tells us the truth of fine print. The MC himself still doesn't read it. This raised my dislike for the story.
2. The father encounters made him unlikable. No options to avoid him or not to ask questions.
2 A. The father slapping his daughters ass is the same as if he raped her. Based on my POV.
2 B. The father ignoring his children for 18 plus years. Another reason to dislike him.

These are the two main reasons I came to dislike the story and the game.

I appreciate the feedback! It sounds like this just might not be the game for you. Thanks for trying it!

 

[HeavyEavy]

I take the same approach to VN's as I do to RPG's

Well there's your problem... a Visual Novel is NOT a Role Playing Game.

The father slapping his daughters ass

Not his daughter!(and he knows it)

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The father ignoring his children for 18 plus years

Not the father's choice, but Mothers wish/choice

The father is much more trustworthy that you may think. All contracts he writes are simple, and absolutely no strings or tricks or small print. The small print contract was done by Jessica not the father, he doesn't have a contract with the father.
The MC gets sent on a job. Contact doesn't want to sign contract, so you can choose to use your 'magic' to force signature, If you do, then the father will chastise you for it, he doesn't want someone tricked into a contract. The only "evil/corruption" in the game comes from the MC, so you're in control.

 

[HeavyEavy]

I thought I was done with this thread.


I know, but you missed CHOICES. Why give us CHOICES if your not going to play by them? Why don't we get CHOICES to play the game by those CHOICES?


Again not my point. Did he get her PERMISSION to do what he did? NO, so he ASSAULTED her. Where was the CHOICE to call law enforcement?

Again my point is the story/game gives us choices and failed to follow through with our choices. Good luck with this game that lacks CHOICES.

Wow, you need to calm down, you're going to blow a vein or something. You also should know this, but I'm going to say it just in case. You are in the WRONG Genre of games. Or you don't understand the Tags the game has. I'm leaning towards too immature to be here... Now post your response so you can have the last word, then just ignore us.

 

[HeavyEavy]

Sorry for mistaking the VN tag for Visual Novel.

You don't understand the Tags... VN is not a Tag
These are 2 of the tags: Groping, Mind Control

Sorry for not being a person that thinks white lies are acceptable.

See Tag: Mind Control

Sorry for being a person that considers any form of assault to be a crime.

See Tag: Groping

If you don't like something and it's in the Tags, then Don't Play It!
What do you expect when you complain about something that is Clearly Labeled!?

 

[wep]

Ok, guys. I suppose that we can stop the discussion here. The positions are more than clear.

Thanks a lot

 

[Demon Jhim]

Can we even fuck the Mom come please say yes.

 

[Baharomont]

mmmm... what? version 0.4.5 and only now we have nude? and waht it mean endinfs? you serios? i ma not get it... it porno game or not??? ((((

 

[Deathdawg]

I will have to say that though to some the story is not all there or there is a few holes in the logistics of it, aka the not reading the fine print and so on as well as not much in the way of art and it being strictly text at the moment. There is hope that this game can become something and i saw only one bug, though dummy me did not copy the message before deleting the game files. It was easily ignored I will look for more from this game later in development and hope that we can corrupt the mom and sis as well as the other girls more with nice visuals

 

[TeflonNinja]

Which day does the game end? Are the endings accessible yet?

 

[BawdyBaron]

Which day does the game end? Are the endings accessible yet?

The game ends on day 60.

Some of the endings are accessible in the current public version.

I just released the "early access" version to my Patrons yesterday that has all 65 currently planned endings. That will go public next week.

 

[Avaren]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
KeyError: u"boss's"

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "boss_scenes.rpyc", line 708, in script
  File "/data/user/0/com.bawdybaron.dbusiness/files/renpy/ast.py", line 652, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, interact=self.interact, *args, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/com.bawdybaron.dbusiness/files/renpy/exports.py", line 1180, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/com.bawdybaron.dbusiness/files/renpy/character.py", line 1003, in __call__
    what = what_pattern.replace("[what]", sub(what, translate=translate))
  File "/data/user/0/com.bawdybaron.dbusiness/files/renpy/character.py", line 985, in sub
    return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]
  File "/data/user/0/com.bawdybaron.dbusiness/files/renpy/substitutions.py", line 242, in substitute
    s = formatter.vformat(s, (), kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/com.bawdybaron.dbusiness/files/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 549, in vformat
    result = self._vformat(format_string, args, kwargs, used_args, 2)
  File "/data/user/0/com.bawdybaron.dbusiness/files/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 571, in _vformat
    obj, arg_used = self.get_field(field_name, args, kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/com.bawdybaron.dbusiness/files/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 632, in get_field
    obj = self.get_value(first, args, kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/com.bawdybaron.dbusiness/files/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 591, in get_value
    return kwargs[key]
KeyError: u"boss's"

 

[BawdyBaron]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
...

Thanks. That bug is fixed in the next update (which is going public on Thursday).

 

[BawdyBaron]

Update: Devilish Business v0.47b

The public release of v0.47b is here!

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All 65 currently planned endings are now available!

Patch notes:

• Completed writing all endings.
• Added background music track.
• Fixed a bug in the Ashley/Jessica threesome (thanks HeavyEavy)
• Fixed some spelling errors.
• Updated the credits.

Let me know what you think!

Also, for those of you who can't/won't use Patreon, you can now make a one-time contribution with BuyMeACoffee:

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[N7]

updated op

 

[Theookta]

65 planned endings, so does this mean 65 ways to get the ending or is it really 65 ending.

 

[BawdyBaron]

65 planned endings, so does this mean 65 ways to get the ending or is it really 65 ending.

Depending on your influence over the characters, and the choices you make in the game, you will be rewarded with one of 65 endings. For example, there are two endings that contain all 5 women, 10 endings that contain 4/5 women, 20 endings with 3/5, etc.

Obviously they aren't all dramatically different from each other, but they are all unique. Plus, I have plans for making them even more distinct in the future, once I've completed other parts of the story.

 

[Retro]

For some reason the preview screenshots are seriously weirding my out because they have normal proprotioned bodies but big anime faces.

 

[ThunderRob]

as a fan of dating sims i'm enjoying this...hope the dev gets funding so he can add more graphics..would enhance the boinking greatly will any of this lead to marriage or pregnancy?..is it purely sex without consequence?