VN Ren'Py Abandoned Devin's Life [3-31-20] [Taboo]

[beijing999]

Well not need to go into hardcore things to make embarrassing situation sometimes, we just need to make our imagination work to see the pretty Devins into funny situations but exciting in same time.

A bit like Combin-ation did for Alona where he found the good middle between humiliation and stay into "strong and badass women" .

My fault, I forget the -YOU- in text (beginning) to @kingscard and talk about him and his judgement over Devine.

 

[User_66221]

I know don't worry, i just give my mind just like that

 

[kingscard]

I like to put in a camp without money no laguage a pervert director ( as gay) and 20 hard core gay`s arround you and ask you how is your life. You call her stupid to walk home with this ball in her pussy. She can go to Hostipal ( closed ) and ask the pervert Doc to removed it. You ever try to pull a small ball out of your pussy - no you are male-. She get blackmail by Schooldirector, clothes shop and as well by Jen. The only person is naive is you.

Mmm ... ok I guess ? That's a lot of hate. Just to clarify, I'm not a troll and I post only when something took my interest. So I'm not here because I didn't like the game, but to express how I felt when played it.

For example, I tried Mobster Queen, didn't liked it and will not post a comment saying it's not good enough. Here, there is potential, I played it from the start til the end.

Back to your post.

So I don't know how I would react in the camp you mentionned, apparently you were there and didn't liked the experience. But I'm sure you can wash your clothes, say no, be mature, etc. OR .... be ok with it and discover a new aspect of your personnality. But Enduring it passively, hoping it gets better while not asking questions when you are being clearly manipulated, photographed or humiliated ... well I don't know how you call it.

As I said, I liked Devin as a character, so I'm not enjoying to see her helpless. Every morning she wishes nothing badder than the day before will happen. That's the path of depression. Maybe you enjoy it, not me, and I guess not her.

But if a revenge is planned, I guess it will add some balance between the evil and pure characters.

A final thought : I'm not a storyteller so I may be wrong, but if you insert too many nonsenses in a story, it will have a bad reflection overall. So you have to polish your story to make it plausible.

But it's just a game, so I guess there is nothing worth fighting about .

 

[User_66221]

Mmm ... ok I guess ? That's a lot of hate. Just to clarify, I'm not a troll and I post only when something took my interest. So I'm not here because I didn't like the game, but to express how I felt when played it.

For example, I tried Mobster Queen, didn't liked it and will not post a comment saying it's not good enough. Here, there is potential, I played it from the start til the end.

Back to your post.

So I don't know how I would react in the camp you mentionned, apparently you were there and didn't liked the experience. But I'm sure you can wash your clothes, say no, be mature, etc. OR .... be ok with it and discover a new aspect of your personnality. But Enduring it passively, hoping it gets better while not asking questions when you are being clearly manipulated, photographed or humiliated ... well I don't know how you call it.

As I said, I liked Devin as a character, so I'm not enjoying to see her helpless. Every morning she wishes nothing badder than the day before will happen. That's the path of depression. Maybe you enjoy it, not me, and I guess not her.

But if a revenge is planned, I guess it will add some balance between the evil and pure characters.

A final thought : I'm not a storyteller so I may be wrong, but if you insert too many nonsenses in a story, it will have a bad reflection overall. So you have to polish your story to make it plausible.

But it's just a game, so I guess there is nothing worth fighting about .

This is just a game each person have differents tastes and it stay in "fantasy" world

 

[blastwave2k]

Mmm ... ok I guess ? That's a lot of hate. Just to clarify, I'm not a troll and I post only when something took my interest. So I'm not here because I didn't like the game, but to express how I felt when played it.

For example, I tried Mobster Queen, didn't liked it and will not post a comment saying it's not good enough. Here, there is potential, I played it from the start til the end.

Back to your post.

So I don't know how I would react in the camp you mentionned, apparently you were there and didn't liked the experience. But I'm sure you can wash your clothes, say no, be mature, etc. OR .... be ok with it and discover a new aspect of your personnality. But Enduring it passively, hoping it gets better while not asking questions when you are being clearly manipulated, photographed or humiliated ... well I don't know how you call it.

As I said, I liked Devin as a character, so I'm not enjoying to see her helpless. Every morning she wishes nothing badder than the day before will happen. That's the path of depression. Maybe you enjoy it, not me, and I guess not her.

But if a revenge is planned, I guess it will add some balance between the evil and pure characters.

A final thought : I'm not a storyteller so I may be wrong, but if you insert too many nonsenses in a story, it will have a bad reflection overall. So you have to polish your story to make it plausible.

But it's just a game, so I guess there is nothing worth fighting about .

i can understand where you're coming from on this. it is harder when you actually have a character you like. it would be so much easier (and to me even more enjoyable) if Devin was a bitch who needed to be taken down a peg or two. however, as I am a sick puppy who gets off on this kind of stuff, i can't wait for next update. is it bad that i was almost a little disappointed when Jen wasn't like "that's not the position" at the toilet? XD

so far this game has had some of the funniest, most ridiculous, and best (to me) scenes of any games i've played on this site and to date. really looking forward to next round. XD i LOVE the idea of different reactions to the cheerleader outfit tho. hmmm

 

[beijing999]

Mmm ... ok I guess ? That's a lot of hate. Just to clarify, I'm not a troll and I post only when something took my interest. So I'm not here because I didn't like the game, but to express how I felt when played it.

For example, I tried Mobster Queen, didn't liked it and will not post a comment saying it's not good enough. Here, there is potential, I played it from the start til the end.

But it's just a game, so I guess there is nothing worth fighting about .

Smart words, about the camp: I prefer to have experience and adventure with my family. I had experience in my life the result. The biggest adventure in these days is to learn more and more from your partner, because there change as you does. I don’t want offend you and your second comment about her is ok. She is helpless from the first day, and run under pressure with the old man and fucking Director. Police no hope either.
I just get angry as we discuss before the revenge for last update. If nothing change and the Police still have no effort in her case. Either you find a smart solution or shoot them all down and go to jail. You can read what I say.

 

[beijing999]

This is just a game each person have differents tastes and it stay in "fantasy" world

We are not enemies and discuss the position of Devine with some rhetoric in between. We will not lost our focus for her fantasy.

 

[User_66221]

We are not enemies and discuss the position of Devine with some rhetoric in between. We will not lost our focus for her fantasy.

I'm totally agree.

 

[taboo22]

@kingscard
I want to hear the feedback. This is my first time making anything like this and am having fun so far. As long as everything continues to go well these will be many more updates and possibly more games. So please let me know what you think, without feedback from you guys, the game can't improve.

I also partially agree about your thought that the game went a little to hard to fast. I want to have a few different story lines all going at the same time. Some of the other girls will start to have a larger roll and Devin will focus more on being humiliated and shamed (often publicly).

And Devin will get her revenge.

 

[beijing999]

@kingscard
I want to hear the feedback. This is my first time making anything like this and am having fun so far. As long as everything continues to go well these will be many more updates and possibly more games. So please let me know what you think, without feedback from you guys, the game can't improve.

I also partially agree about your thought that the game went a little to hard to fast. I want to have a few different story lines all going at the same time. Some of the other girls will start to have a larger roll and Devin will focus more on being humiliated and shamed (often publicly).

And Devin will get her revenge.

Agree and I hope we are very far away from revenge. I´ll give you my fantasy again as I done with beach. I´m busy now but come back on Sunday under @vloungeone ok

 

[Asuminoya]

@taboo22
Do you have any lesbian content planned for this game? :3

 

[taboo22]

@YuriNeko
Yes, there will be... Gosh I hadn't thought about it, but we really haven't had much of any yet have we? Short answer is yes there will be.

 

[blastwave2k]

@YuriNeko
Yes, there will be... Gosh I hadn't thought about it, but we really haven't had much of any yet have we? Short answer is yes there will be.

a few hints at it with Val maybe but oh yes, would fully approve of seeing more xD

also. might've said this somewhere before, but love that you made a little spot/homage with her. i was so sad when DynamiteRed pulled the plug on Valentina's Story. game had potential

 

[taboo22]

Agreed Valentina's Story was great. I was sad to see it never become more.

 

[User_66221]

Fortunately, we've Astrid to comfort us and to enjoy. Just the first scene of mage in town in Astrid when she must go back in her native town to get her new main outfit is already epic(no spoilers).

 

[beijing999]

@YuriNeko
Yes, there will be... Gosh I hadn't thought about it, but we really haven't had much of any yet have we? Short answer is yes there will be.

Now be back before as @beijing999 after the CNY, witch gives me a lot of time to create some great and tough fantasy about Devine public humiliations.
After @kingscard completely dressed off the story and Devine’s life and you agree to some points, I´m surprised that he not come up with some good suggestion as you ask. To be fair I send 5 high events direct to you. If the old man is gone @kingscard mention and some other complains will change in this game, then not all will work.

 

[kingscard]

Hey @beijing999 there is not much to add on my part. The dev need some feedback, not ideas. If I want my ideas in a game ... well I'll have to create it.

Honestly though, I forgot to reply to @taboo22 as I somteimes get lazy. But I just wanted to add that for a first game, it's pretty damn good, and I know how hard it is to make one. That's why I don't want to influence. I'm sure @taboo22 has still plenty ideas in stock, and my main interest in games/movies/books is to be surprised .

And as for the old man, I said it was my favorite character (biggest cock in the porn industry ), so I don't want him to be gone .

 

[User_66221]

As long we enjoy to see Devins get ashamed and humiliated to better see her take her revenge later all is alright for me.

 

[beijing999]

Hey @beijing999 there is not much to add on my part. The dev need some feedback, not ideas. If I want my ideas in a game ... well I'll have to create it.

Honestly though, I forgot to reply to @taboo22 as I somteimes get lazy. But I just wanted to add that for a first game, it's pretty damn good, and I know how hard it is to make one. That's why I don't want to influence. I'm sure @taboo22 has still plenty ideas in stock, and my main interest in games/movies/books is to be surprised .

And as for the old man, I said it was my favorite character (biggest cock in the porn industry ), so I don't want him to be gone .

Thank you Sir, I´m lazy too, over the CNY I try to get some suggestions to @taboo22 and send to her in the direct converstion. You can do this as well just klick her card.
I’m not a game maker to create events, just write some new public humiliations how there can work what’s in the game now. I like her helpless we can help her later, for now no money and luggage and surrounded by pervert person.
We can do this in a privat conversation from now on you can post me under @vloungeone send a short card behind.

 

[vloungeone]

Hey @beijing999 there is not much to add on my part. The dev need some feedback, not ideas. If I want my ideas in a game ... well I'll have to create it.

Honestly though, I forgot to reply to @taboo22 as I somteimes get lazy. But I just wanted to add that for a first game, it's pretty damn good, and I know how hard it is to make one. That's why I don't want to influence. I'm sure @taboo22 has still plenty ideas in stock, and my main interest in games/movies/books is to be surprised .

And as for the old man, I said it was my favorite character (biggest cock in the porn industry ), so I don't want him to be gone .

Here we can start to chair some idea. I send you 3 events what I send @taboo22 today. Tell me what do you thing