Tauro Thurius
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- Jul 17, 2021
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You are a very talented artist. Liza's scene on day 14 ought to be one of the hottest scenes I've ever seen in an adult video game, but I have some criticisms on how you deliver your amazing work. Here are a couple of stuff that you should consider before going further with the title in my humble opinion.
- Find yourself a proofreader. Some sayings and expressions from your native language can't be fully translated in English.
- The Secret of the House should have its seperate thread. It will give it more exposure as I'm almost 100% sure many people don't view this thread just because they think the "Game Collection" contains mini games that have no storyline or length whatsoever.
- You don't have to give folks blueballs by adding tiresome, illogical and time consuming tasks. ( e.g. There is no explanation why someone would need shears to clean some papers in a room. )
- You should fix all the bugs before they get out of control as you devotedly ( which is appreciated ) keep on updating the game.
I really want to see you in a much better spot. You are the only artist who can create this type of art in our little community. I wish you the best of luck.
p.s. Where the fuck is thermostat?
Edit: Nevermind. It was in the refrigerator in the lake.
- Find yourself a proofreader. Some sayings and expressions from your native language can't be fully translated in English.
- The Secret of the House should have its seperate thread. It will give it more exposure as I'm almost 100% sure many people don't view this thread just because they think the "Game Collection" contains mini games that have no storyline or length whatsoever.
- You don't have to give folks blueballs by adding tiresome, illogical and time consuming tasks. ( e.g. There is no explanation why someone would need shears to clean some papers in a room. )
- You should fix all the bugs before they get out of control as you devotedly ( which is appreciated ) keep on updating the game.
I really want to see you in a much better spot. You are the only artist who can create this type of art in our little community. I wish you the best of luck.
p.s. Where the fuck is thermostat?
Edit: Nevermind. It was in the refrigerator in the lake.
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