VN Ren'Py Abandoned Doll House [v0.02] [46n2]

[RockyBalboa1985]

Good luck with your game
But it's obvious that this game is ntr only as you don't answer a very simple question

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

It might be that the DEV is not answering the BIG question because making NTR avoidable adds a lot of dialogue and renders to the game. Being new, he is probably trying to create a game that he can complete, so he can go on to create a more involved game.

 

[drfronkonstinmd]

Ok. My only complaint here is the green text without a dialog box. It's very distracting, specially when it's the only thing trying to explain what the fuck is going on.

Now, it took 2 full playthroughs to really get what the game is about and I truly love that. Most games try to establish sort of a balance between porn logic and realistic situations where all the characters are simply hornier and easier to corrupt than real people, which is great, but this game really feels different from all that. The fact that everything is happening inside MC's brain takes a little off from the whole fantasy, but the rest is so much fun I don't really care.

So, essentially, whatever you want to do with this game, please, keep doing it. Don't turn this into another NTR yes/no battle, because no matter what you do, some people will be pissed about it and the idea behind this is much more interesting than that. Just keep following your instinct. I can't wait to play the next update!

 

[Naxos]

What I can reasonably promise is that I want to Empower the User to make their own determinations on things as the story continues. I’m not entirely sure how far I can take that congruently. But I’ll want to try. I’m also a bit undecided on where outright surprises might be appreciated so defining the Choice too specifically on the screen is… not exactly where I lean.

I’ll work it out though. Your concerns have been heard.

Well if this game dev thing doesn't work out for you, you can try your hand a politics, because you sure do use a lot of words to say nothing of value and certainly nothing that can hold you to one stance or the other.

Good luck with whatever the future holds.

 

[Deybigson]

Don't have an Android version?

 

[Deybigson]

I don't have Windows, only Android . Could anyone record a video? I really want to see how this is going.

 

[46n2]

Having now absorbed a bit more of this “NTR discussion”, I think I can safely verify if that is NOT your bag then there’s nothing to worry about. Surely there are numerous scenarios where a little jealousy (or potential for it) might enter the picture. As is human nature. And we might want to explore that here to some degree. But when that might arise?

You’ll have the choice/avenue to avoid any Ball-busting (in either direction). I ain’t here to put baby in a corner, eh. Not about it.

-And I’m not attempting to be vague for shits n' giggles, btw. I’m just not interested in painting mySELF into a corner either. Ain’t no chance of that.

From my perspective I did in fact ANSWER THE QUESTION on pg2/post #26.

And that will be all from my end on this issue. You can bitch slap each other about it to your hearts content however. Whatever floats yer boat, eh.

-peace

 

[46n2]

One other comment here was made that I had not include a TAG for “Real Porn”. And I had, actually. Was removed somewhere along the line, not by me.

 

[46n2]

Ok. My only complaint here is the green text without a dialog box. It's very distracting, specially when it's the only thing trying to explain what the fuck is going on.

Now, it took 2 full playthroughs to really get what the game is about and I truly love that. Most games try to establish sort of a balance between porn logic and realistic situations where all the characters are simply hornier and easier to corrupt than real people, which is great, but this game really feels different from all that. The fact that everything is happening inside MC's brain takes a little off from the whole fantasy, but the rest is so much fun I don't really care.

So, essentially, whatever you want to do with this game, please, keep doing it. Don't turn this into another NTR yes/no battle, because no matter what you do, some people will be pissed about it and the idea behind this is much more interesting than that. Just keep following your instinct. I can't wait to play the next update!

Fantastic. What a tremendously valuable and enjoyable reaction you afford me there.

-cheers!

(Your point about the green text w/no dialogue box is totally valid. I had another option I couldn't quite get right and hoped to kinda cheat my way past it but... yeah, you're definitely not wrong about that.)

 

[Vousetesconnard]

The moment I saw animations made from screen shots of the working scene+ UI in Daz then topped off with video editor effects I'm not exactly a fan. its always possible they are place holders but if they are you can't even use the "was lazy" excuse when they were edited out into animations. we'll see what comes down the road for this but as is not holding my breath.

 

[MorganFreemansToe]

I don't have Windows, only Android . Could anyone record a video? I really want to see how this is going.

Download joiplay and try that. Should work.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

This is some weird acid-trip level shit...

 

[Gardan]

Incest and NTR Why?

 

[Larry2000]

Having now absorbed a bit more of this “NTR discussion”, I think I can safely verify if that is NOT your bag then there’s nothing to worry about. Surely there are numerous scenarios where a little jealousy (or potential for it) might enter the picture. As is human nature. And we might want to explore that here to some degree. But when that might arise?

You’ll have the choice/avenue to avoid any Ball-busting (in either direction). I ain’t here to put baby in a corner, eh. Not about it.

-And I’m not attempting to be vague for shits n' giggles, btw. I’m just not interested in painting mySELF into a corner either. Ain’t no chance of that.

From my perspective I did in fact ANSWER THE QUESTION on pg2/post #26.

And that will be all from my end on this issue. You can bitch slap each other about it to your hearts content however. Whatever floats yer boat, eh.

-peace

GOT it! So there is not true NTR, it's just jealousy and blue balling? Like the threat of it? That makes me and other people feel MUCH better! Thanks for the answer.

As far as painting yourself into a corner, I think you'd paint yourself into a corner NOT answering

Good luck 46n2

 

[nimsen]

Still hoping Mac version also..

 

[1Teddy1]

Welcome to DOLL HOUSE. Where imagination has a lot less limits than whatever “normal” might prescribe. You are not exactly Master of your Domain, just yet. And certainly not much in control of your own persistent reality (nor pecker, for that matter). But with a little bit of massaging from your subconscious. And perhaps some compassion and particularly permissible understanding and allowance from those among you. Very good (or even GREAT) has gotta be gettable.​

Can someone give me a much simpler run down about the game because my dumbass can't seem to understand what this is trying to say.

 

[Larry2000]

Can someone give me a much simpler run down about the game because my dumbass can't seem to understand what this is trying to say.

I mean, it's mostly gibberish. I say that as a Native Speaker. It's got a lot dependent clauses and modifiers that cloud what it's trying to say.
It basically says: "Welcome to DOLL HOUSE! Where weird shit can happen. You aren't in full control, but you might be if you put some effort into it"
I haven't played the game so i can only translate the synopsis.

 

[Meaning Less]

Interesting concept, just an fyi to the dev, you should not use tags until such content is present in the game, right now there are a few tags that shouldn't be there.

And some are missing like real porn and futa.

 

[Sir Anal]

The idea is not bad, of course, the images are ok, but the text...
Why did you choose such a weird sabir ...I think it's worse than Engrish... Even if I'm not really an English speaker (it's been 50 years since I lived and spoke fluent English) I understand the text but it's very tedious and maybe even more so for many other non-English speakers. If I were to say "cré vingt guieu, pitchoune, ta reum est bonnasse mais je pige que dalle à ce qu'elle baragouinnne" or something like that. Just try understanding if you're not used to the variations of French.
Of course English is the world's language, but it must be kept in a more or less universal form, like Latin in another era. True English speakers, like true Romans in another era, are a minority here.
Otherwise, if the text was faster (what a pity not allowing it to be put in instant) and more "standard" english.
It could be a good thing, but, in my opinion, there is a lot to change, starting with all the dialogue
In my opinion, it's a game that could have been good but is mostly a pain in the ass.

 

[Chrathrard]

Saw a butt bigger than the standard "not" that 99% of games do, the friendly breakfast touch, and smiley gril. Tried the 0.01. Read the thread so far. Really wanted this to be an underdog story.
But yes, the "English" is written like what one might imagine a drunk Cambodian doing an impression of a Texan would do. A lot of it is utterly incomprehensible, and then we go full weeb in the middle for no reason. Then her head asplodes and she was Smiley Gril the whole time? Is the MC psychotic? Then we have loud real porn shooped onto the TV before the "Thanks for playing!" card.
It's just that it's particularly more aimless than most first releases.