RPGM Domina [v10.0] [Dekarous]

[Deleted member 3830137]

Good point. We could definitely combine the idea of a flat-chested domina with the athletic/military-based Domina idea and it'd be a perfect fit. For what she would lack in chest, she would definitely compensate in thighs. And don't worry, nobody would think a flat-chested Succubus or demon would be idea. Seems like people are actually quite loving them since Lilith from Darkstalkers and Etna from Disgaea are fan-favorite characters.

Yeah! Good idea!
Perhaps this military Domina can have Prussian features because the Prussians were known for being one hell of a tough monarchy.
It'd be fun to play with a German accent too.
"Aha, vat do ve have hier?~"
Ik we have Mary being a dictator and a Queen as Prussia was a monarchy
But our military domina wouldn't be a queen
She shall be referred to as a General uwu
And I think she'd be way harsher than Mary.
Plus imagine her in an elegant military tunic, tight military pants and tall boots. Perhaps add a Prussian pickelhaube that she can peg Edgar with lmao
I think she could have more ass than tits because soldiers do a lot of physical training including the butt and thigh muscles. And who doesn't like a good ass?

 

[Metalkick]

Yeah! Good idea!
Perhaps this military Domina can have Prussian features because the Prussians were known for being one hell of a tough monarchy.
It'd be fun to play with a German accent too.
"Aha, vat do ve have hier?~"
Ik we have Mary being a dictator and a Queen as Prussia was a monarchy
But our military domina wouldn't be a queen
She shall be referred to as a General uwu
And I think she'd be way harsher than Mary.
Plus imagine her in an elegant military tunic, tight military pants and tall boots. Perhaps add a Prussian pickelhaube that she can peg Edgar with lmao
I think she could have more ass than tits because soldiers do a lot of physical training including the butt and thigh muscles. And who doesn't like a good ass?

That's some decent ideas there. And yeah, I can confirm my appreciation for asses on that.

 

[Succubus Hunter]

who did you quote there cause I never called her best girl XD

My mistake, I made a typo in my last post.

That's some decent ideas there. And yeah, I can confirm my appreciation for asses on that.

Big plus 1 for appreciation for asses. Imo Rosita should have been much bigger, especially back there.


As for a small breasted domina, I would suggest a tomboy amazon one. This way her small chest would serve a purpose in that it would make her better at sports such as bow hunting and wrestling. She could play upon that by hunting MC with a bow (Like Cupid) but every-time she shoots him in his subby ass he gets filled with lust. She could also be a bare knuckle brawler who specializes in gladiatorial-style fighting. She could even punch MC every few times he disrespects her in her realm.

 

[Razeluxe]

Is there supposed to be text after you beat the first domina? It just makes me mash Z, pick an option, then mash z again. I've tried reloading, redoing the fight, starting over. Just nothing.
side note: The term "ass juices" should never ever be used. ever.

 

[Metalkick]

side note: The term "ass juices" should never ever be used. ever.

That I completely agree. Along with many terms Deka uses, this one is not just cringeworthy but also overused to the point it just numbs my brain. I guess it's one of Deka's favorite terms. I expect those terms to be used for Raa as well.

 

[Deleted member 3830137]

That I completely agree. Along with many terms Deka uses, this one is not just cringeworthy but also overused to the point it just numbs my brain. I guess it's one of Deka's favorite terms. I expect those terms to be used for Raa as well.

Yeah same-
Sounds very... Eehh..
It sounds like a high schooler writing their first "extreme smut" fanfic.

 

[Metalkick]

Yeah same-
Sounds very... Eehh..
It sounds like a high schooler writing their first "extreme smut" fanfic.

Perhaps it is? Who knows how long he's been thinking about this story.
But yes, "Ass juices", "Sewer pipe mouth/throat" and probably oh so many terms as well as his constant usage of caps lock for a pissed off domina having texts so long that it overlaps in the text box making it unreadable, especially with the font he uses not being made for this, being a massive eyesore. Those are all things that immediately needs to go and be re-written. Wanting to add multiple common fetishes to different dominas is fine and all, but basically copy/pasting the most cringeworthy terms over and over again thinking it's a job well done is just... Ugh. If he finds it hard to write and not incorporate these terms, or how to write things differently, then perhaps just don't add that particular fetish as it's probably been overdone at this point or wait until creativity actually strikes and save it for a future update?

 

[Metalkick]

Is there supposed to be text after you beat the first domina? It just makes me mash Z, pick an option, then mash z again. I've tried reloading, redoing the fight, starting over. Just nothing.

I'm sorry for being impolite and kinda deriving from your initial question. But yes, there is supposed to be text after beating Katrina. I'm not quite sure what would be the cause of your issue, perhaps someone could answer. Could you provide a screenshot of said problem on here? Let's see if we can help you out with that.

 

[Succubus Hunter]

Is there supposed to be text after you beat the first domina? It just makes me mash Z, pick an option, then mash z again. I've tried reloading, redoing the fight, starting over. Just nothing.
side note: The term "ass juices" should never ever be used. ever.

Agreed with hating the term "Ass juices" being cringe.

Perhaps it is? Who knows how long he's been thinking about this story.
But yes, "Ass juices", "Sewer pipe mouth/throat" and probably oh so many terms as well as his constant usage of caps lock for a pissed off domina having texts so long that it overlaps in the text box making it unreadable, especially with the font he uses not being made for this, being a massive eyesore. Those are all things that immediately needs to go and be re-written. Wanting to add multiple common fetishes to different dominas is fine and all, but basically copy/pasting the most cringeworthy terms over and over again thinking it's a job well done is just... Ugh. If he finds it hard to write and not incorporate these terms, or how to write things differently, then perhaps just don't add that particular fetish as it's probably been overdone at this point or wait until creativity actually strikes and save it for a future update?

"Sewerpipe mouth/throat" is also cringe. As for the writing issues, before I killed my pc, I had at least 2 dozen screenshots of font running togeter/ off screen, typos, and a few other issues.

 

[tony_redgrave]

The caps and font have bothered me for a while. It makes Narcissa's dialogue in particular a chore to read through. I'm glad to see the next Domina has a bit more variety in her outfit. Always thought it was a bit samey prior with a few exceptions like the twins, Franziska and Narcissa (who... doesnt wear clothes). Always thought Mary should be wearing something more... regal I guess? Given how she sees herself as a Queen or ruler. Maybe like a dress that has a degree of modesty instead of just lingerie, which she can still wear in loss/submission scenes.

 

[Deleted member 3830137]

The caps and font have bothered me for a while. It makes Narcissa's dialogue in particular a chore to read through. I'm glad to see the next Domina has a bit more variety in her outfit. Always thought it was a bit samey prior with a few exceptions like the twins, Franziska and Narcissa (who... doesnt wear clothes). Always thought Mary should be wearing something more... regal I guess. Like a dress that has a degree of modesty instead of just lingerie, which she can still wear in scenes.

I found very pretty and regal lingerie that have a see through skirt and a long train in the back. I think that would work for Mary

 

[Metalkick]

Agreed with hating the term "Ass juices" being cringe.

"Sewerpipe mouth/throat" is also cringe. As for the writing issues, before I killed my pc, I had at least 2 dozen screenshots of font running togeter/ off screen, typos, and a few other issues.

If Deka loves these terms so much, as cringe as they are, only keep them for Narcissa as she's basically the only character that those terms would fit. But enough of that for now, I guess.

 

[Deleted member 3830137]

If Deka loves these terms so much, as cringe as they are, only keep them for Narcissa as she's basically the only character that those terms would fit. But enough of that for now, I guess.

I will c R y if Raa has "ass juices". :')

 

[Metalkick]

I will c R y if Raa has "ass juices". :')

Well, get your lacrimal glands ready.

 

[Deleted member 3830137]

Well, get your lacrimal glands ready.

They already are :'D

 

[Succubus Hunter]

I found very pretty and regal lingerie that have a see through skirt and a long train in the back. I think that would work for Mary

I (And I am sure the rest of the thread) would be very curious to see the lingerie you have in mind for her.

If Deka loves these terms so much, as cringe as they are, only keep them for Narcissa as she's basically the only character that those terms would fit. But enough of that for now, I guess.

I'd prefer he move away from "Ass juices" altogether and remember that back there is an entry, not an exit (Hint: include more buttsechs).

I will c R y if Raa has "ass juices". :')

At least those tears will be "Eye juices" lol

 

[XBrad93X]

I'm surprised there's not a Domina with a castration theme out of 7 dominas already released ... that's a shame

 

[kekeryuken]

Hi guys
When the next update comes? Already this month or next?

 

[Deleted member 3830137]

Hi guys
When the next update comes? Already this month or next?

We can't be so sure cuz it usually takes a long time. :/
Let's be patient though.

 

[Deleted member 3830137]

I (And I am sure the rest of the thread) would be very curious to see the lingerie you have in mind for her.


I'd prefer he move away from "Ass juices" altogether and remember that back there is an entry, not an exit (Hint: include more buttsechs).


At least those tears will be "Eye juices" lol

Found one that can be used for Mary!
It's not too modest, which is perfect because Mary is a succubus, but it's not too skimpy so she can give off royal vibes
Maybe have some more emerald green and it's perfect