- Oct 1, 2021
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Ok, just downloaded and played the game and I have a few observations/suggestions to make:Thread updated!
-Baal
Does that include the succubus finger blasting your slave or is that unavoidable?Sharing scenes are really minor (just 1 for the moment) and completly optional, Non-sharing is the focus of the story.
We are really thankful for this really indepth input! We are pleased to see such a good reception to this version, and yes, we agree that the grammar could be improved on, english is not our main lenguage so we are still searching how to improve the writing and the syntax so the story can flow more freely, currently is me, the artist, doing the proofreading but yeah, my english is definitely not the best either haha, but we will be improving upon the writing and scenes of the previous versions as we go on further.Ok, just downloaded and played the game and I have a few observations/suggestions to make:
1. The good parts:
- the basic story setting has been done before but it is good (I especially like the paladin hypocrisy angle).
- multiple choices and freedom of movement.
- sandbox.
- sex actions are repeatable.
2. The bad parts:
- grammar mistakes and phrase construction. It is clear that you think in a different language and then translate.
Maybe you could get someone to proofread? or run the sentences through a text processor / translation software?
It is perfectly playable as it is, but could be improved.
3. Things that could be better (just my opinion):
- more pictures/frames per action. As it is, the action relies heavily on text and storytelling. Visual support would be good,
specially in the sex scenes.
- I don't know who does the art for the game, but maybe you could diversify? Or go full 3D? Of course, depending on your
access to 3D software, experience, etc.
All in all, enjoyable game. Keep giving choices to players and keep the game sandbox, and you'll do good.
Thank you.
Do you mean the threesome of the fingering specifically? the threesome is fully optional, even tho it opens a different story path if you do so, the fingering... No that's not optional if I recall correctly, but, you are still there watching if unfold, as it is a part of the threesomeDoes that include the succubus finger blasting your slave or is that unavoidable?
Damn! That shouldn't be there, those are game files, do not pay attention to them, as soon as we can we will update the links so it doesn't have the files. The ver 0.2 and 0.2.1 are the same, we just had a last minute change and decided to get this one out as 0.2.1 instead of 0.2, to play the game just open the file "Dominum.exe" We are really sorry for the confusion!what's the "game.rar" inside the game archive? Is this the 0.2.1 version and the full upload the 0.2? A quick diff seems to highlight few differences in files, apart from the save folder.
Should I merge them?
In this version not necessarily a succubus but you can transform a girl into something... else. Let's put it that way,so, can you take village girls and turn them into sexy succubus and stuff like that ??
because that's my fetish :O
Your art is fine. I wouldn't go 3D, especially if you have no experience in it. The only decent 3D around is from models people already purchased - I also presume some people pirate them when they shouldn't - or games like Honey Select or Koikatsu -- which has dubious legal uses in terms of seeking profit. Either way 3D in general can be very uncanny, especially with the inexperienced. Plus those particular games start to blend into each other. Your art makes it unique and your own, it gives the game its identity.We are really thankful for this really indepth input! We are pleased to see such a good reception to this version, and yes, we agree that the grammar could be improved on, english is not our main lenguage so we are still searching how to improve the writing and the syntax so the story can flow more freely, currently is me, the artist, doing the proofreading but yeah, my english is definitely not the best either haha, but we will be improving upon the writing and scenes of the previous versions as we go on further.
Now, to your suggestion, I fully agree with the idea of having more transitional scenes and more variety in general, we tried to build a little over the stablished in the 0.1 so we could give the story a better flow visual wise. Now, diversify? I hadn't thought about it before. I have no experience with 3D but I am always willing to learn, do you say diversify as having a mix of 3D and 2D scenes? I am kind of attached to my art but I can't deny that dont having to colour a bunch of scenes sound tempting haha. This is my first incursion into NSFW art in general, so I don't have a lot of idea of what would kind of "throw the public off". Maybe more simpler, not as detailed scenes for the storytelling part? or more variations to give the scenes a bit of "movement"? Sorry for the long text.
Thank you so much for your nice words!
-Asera
*TolerateThank you so much for this gem. I love it ! 10 of 10 point. or 9/10 because there is at the moment no loli in game... because f95 friends love lolis.
Wow thanks for the quick reply!Damn! That shouldn't be there, those are game files, do not pay attention to them, as soon as we can we will update the links so it doesn't have the files. The ver 0.2 and 0.2.1 are the same, we just had a last minute change and decided to get this one out as 0.2.1 instead of 0.2, to play the game just open the file "Dominum.exe" We are really sorry for the confusion!
The game series or the Novel/Anime?Overlord vibes... Must... Take off pants...