VN Ren'Py Abandoned Dr. Amana, Sexual Therapist [v2.0.0P] [Ianvs]

[RC-1138 Boss]

My favorite is when I get told I 'waste' too much time on trying to improve the quality of renders because I'm 'just making a porn game'.

I was shocked to learn that "Porn Game" and "Quality" are apparently mutually exclusive and since I'm making a porn game I should just focus on slamming out sub-par work.

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I would also add "story". Because a porn game can't have focus on story according to them.

By the way.
Just got into a discussion with a guy who swears his gut feeling is telling him the devs (Futadom) are milking their patrons because they don't show how much they get on patreon. Despite the fact that they post monthly status updates, WIPs and have been releasing a new updated version every month.

 

[Dragon59]

My favorite is when I get told I 'waste' too much time on trying to improve the quality of renders because I'm 'just making a porn game'.

I was shocked to learn that "Porn Game" and "Quality" are apparently mutually exclusive and since I'm making a porn game I should just focus on slamming out sub-par work.

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Obviously someone who grew up in the "straight to video/DVD/Streaming" age. (Yeah, I'm old!)

 

[Cartageno]

My favorite is when I get told I 'waste' too much time on trying to improve the quality of renders because I'm 'just making a porn game'.

I would also add "story". Because a porn game can't have focus on story according to them.

I have seen too many of these. "Who cares why a character does that? It's only fictional." is the more general variant, "it's only for a fap" the more special one. Although the very same people are most likely to drop 1 star reviews due to "grainy images".

 

[quorkboy]

Why move on to a game that meets your kinks when you can complain on forums about games that don't?

Because every game must be tailored exactly to my tastes. Variety is the mind-killer.

- "This post brought to you by the Sarcasm Society."

Seriously, though ... I do think that's the attitude (whether known to the perpetrator or not) that is behind many of the requests. The idea that a game may not be for them, and that variety is good because we're not all into the same things, doesn't compute.

You can add pregnancy to the list of things that is asked for almost constantly. Rare is the game that I've followed where it isn't asked for (and in some cases I may just not have read the whole thread.)

 

[Cartageno]

Because every game must be tailored exactly to my tastes. Variety is the mind-killer.

- "This post brought to you by the Sarcasm Society."

Seriously, though ... I do think that's the attitude (whether known to the perpetrator or not) that is behind many of the requests. The idea that a game may not be for them, and that variety is good because we're not all into the same things, doesn't compute.

You can add pregnancy to the list of things that is asked for almost constantly. Rare is the game that I've followed where it isn't asked for (and in some cases I may just not have read the whole thread.)

I remember a complaint to a computer games review site (I think it was IGN, and you can certainly have complaints there) about a game rating along the lines of "how can this game get a good score, it isn't even a shooter?".

 

[Dragon59]

I remember a complaint to a computer games review site (I think it was IGN, and you can certainly have complaints there) about a game rating along the lines of "how can this game get a good score, it isn't even a shooter?".

You'd think wearing blinders would be a hindrance in shooters.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

My favorite is when I get told I 'waste' too much time on trying to improve the quality of renders because I'm 'just making a porn game'.

I was shocked to learn that "Porn Game" and "Quality" are apparently mutually exclusive and since I'm making a porn game I should just focus on slamming out sub-par work.

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We appreciate it. I've quit all but ten porn VNs in the first half-hour due to shit art, shit writing or both. The majority are so damn bad. Yours is one of only 4-5 I've played through to the end of content and only one of three I genuinely look forward to updates on. This has the potential to be the best porn VN out there IMO, as far as both the writing and art are concerned. As of now, you've got the best writing of the bunch and the best art of the Daz 3d ones if judging from the latest chapter alone. Though I know there's a lot of game left to develop.

Glad you're not listening to the "U shuld make tehm fux more and teh bobs biger" tools who give some absolute crap 5 stars on here.

Basically, keep up the great work. You're doing an amazing job.

 

[femaleform17]

Just want to say that Cassie sex sequence was hot as fuck. I quite enjoy the writing too, which I guess is one thing that adds to the scene being hot lol.

 

[Throwawayxyz]

Because every game must be tailored exactly to my tastes. Variety is the mind-killer.

- "This post brought to you by the Sarcasm Society."

Seriously, though ... I do think that's the attitude (whether known to the perpetrator or not) that is behind many of the requests. The idea that a game may not be for them, and that variety is good because we're not all into the same things, doesn't compute.

You can add pregnancy to the list of things that is asked for almost constantly. Rare is the game that I've followed where it isn't asked for (and in some cases I may just not have read the whole thread.)

I remember I asked the developer of Town of Passion about it in their discord, and they were like no there won't be pregnancy. I was like aw, ok, well still an amazing game. Dude was floored that I didn't whine and say he sucked lol. Just cause the game doesn't have all my kinks doesn't mean it's still not amazing and it sucks people will miss out on high quality stuff just cause it isn't tailor made for their preferences

 

[Ayhsel]

All this discussion is nice and all.... but

Is this game aboned? Somebody had to ask! I dont think I have seen it recently.

By the way.. where is humanno or whatever was his name? The thread is not the same with mout him coming and trolling some, Roman answering in a hilarious way and most of us trying to figure out what will be the next absurd comment.

 

[Cartageno]

All this discussion is nice and all.... but

Is this game aboned? Somebody had to ask! I dont think I have seen it recently.

By the way.. where is humanno or whatever was his name? The thread is not the same with mout him coming and trolling some, Roman answering in a hilarious way and most of us trying to figure out what will be the next absurd comment.

I can only repeat what I said elsewhere: dunno about the game being aboned, but neighbour's daughter may well be aboned

 

[jamdan]

Here is the latest news:


As you all know, coronavirus restrictions are being eased around the world. Especially here, in my home state of Florida-or-somewhere-like-that. And as any self-respecting Florida-man-or-something-like-that would do, I decided to get into some trouble. And that is where my issues arose and your you-know-what will not rise anytime soon.

School is out, the daugh....err neighborhood girls are all out and about. They aren't even wearing masks anymore. I say this as a moral and responsible person, totally not a perverted monster who has no sense of right or wrong...but hot damn. I need to get me some of that.

And by some of that, I mean ice-cream. Just look at those girls, who are totally of age and not minors. And by girls, I mean neighborhood girls, not my own daughe.....err you know what I mean. They love that ice-cream so much. Look as their tongues caress the soft-served vanilla cream. I wish I could give them my world-famous hard-serve cone. It's so....tasty.

And that is what I did. I, in a totally non-creepy way, approached from the bushes. The girls are innocently licking the melted vanilla from their hands. I sit across the picnic table and casually say "Hey, you girls like licking stuff?". They giggle and say " Especially our dadd...I mean our landlords soft-serve " . I then say " You know, I hear hard-served last longer" . They are fascinated as they reply "H-hard-serve? H-how hard is it? "

It all went downhill from there. I replied " You wanna see for yourself?" "Hehe, totally!" They reply. So, I abide their humble request to sample my...cone. I start to slowly unzip my pants, they ask " W-what are you doing?" "Starting up the machine, sweetie." I say. And oh boy, was my ice-cream machine rearing to go.

As we sat on that picnic table, the girls couldn't take their eyes off my....equipment. I say "You like what you see?" the girls, it totally stunned awe, reply " O-oh my....yes...". Then I give them what they've been waiting for. A huge cone of the hardest-served ice-cream ever to be erected. So hard yet so...pliable. So thick...yet creamy. So....so....good. The perfect...cone.

Then it happened. My worst nightmare. I slipped right in. I fell into the abyss. I couldn't see how to get out. I couldn't believe what had happened. And then it hit me....*sigh*. "W-whats wrong?" The girls asked, looking concerned as they slurped on my cone. "Well, girls, I'm sorry. But I didn't add any salt... your cones are melting already....it's...t-too soft..." "Hehe" The girls say, "So, that is why it's so creamy and exploded on our faces!" .

My day was ruined. My life is meaningless. And I'm salty as hell. The daughte....err neighborhood girls are happy though.

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[RomanHume]

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2021-06-04 News

You know the drill, so let's do it.

All Quiet on the Amana Front?
True, I haven't been as present as I normally am. For some strange reason these last few weeks I've been riding this creative high and I don't know when it'll stop. At this point I've learned to identify these little bouts of creative energy when they come and I take full advantage of them when they're here

That said, I've been laying down a lot of groundwork on the story. As previously mentioned I had been working ruthlessly on the script and had finished mapping out a three act story arc for each character. Well as soon as I had that done, I suddenly found myself amid a storm of ideas and have been scrambling to get them down in text.

So now for many characters I've not only got the three act plot laid down, but have also mapped out the five chapter arc for the first act. All first/rough draft story that will be the bones upon which we write our final draft.

And in the process of building out those initial chapters, I've started discovering new things about my characters. Story ideas and personality traits that were apparently waiting to be discovered. Jane in particular started to reveal some pretty interesting things to me during her initial chapter planning.

I've always had a rough idea of who Jane is, but it turns out there were parts of her personality and character that she had been waiting to reveal. And so while her and a few other characters have undergone a bit of a social redesign, rest assured that nothing you've love about her has been taken away. She's still the Jane you knew before. Now she just has some deeper thoughts, desires and motivations that you've yet to uncover. And it's these little details that help bring her and other characters to life by freeing them up from two-dimensionality.

All in all I've plotted about 30 chapters in the last couple of weeks and I have a handful more I want to get out of my head and into Scrivener before I take a break. The writing process is starting to take a bit of a toll and I can feel the exhaustion starting to creep in. That's usually the sign that I need to lay down the pen and paper for a bit and get back to running the artwork for a change of pace.

And the Streams?
Obviously streaming me generating story ideas and writing down text in scrivener isn't very riveting material. Plus it provides way too many spoilers. My goal for this next week is to finish the first five chapters that comprise Act I for each character. That gives us around 60 chapters waiting for a final draft that we can vote on and begin working toward completion. Also this week I'll probably stream my progress on finalizing character design.

My presets in Daz have gotten a bit outta whack and I need to comb through everything and make sure the surfaces are updated and everyone is ready for immediate drop into the story. I started this process the other day with a small stream and will continue it through the week so we can finish up character design. After that we'll be back to regularly streaming art work and pushing out play tests.

Oh, and I can't count!
Last report I said we had 13 possible love interests. Not sure what happened or who I forgot, but it turns out there are 14. In alphabetical order they are:

Amanda Campbell
Anne Templeton
Candice McCreary
Cassie H.......olliday!
Emily Harrington
Jane Howard
Kim Teak
Lita
Lola
Lupita Rosales
Monica Williams & Sharice Johnson
Nanami Sakamura
Raena Larson
Sarah Cartier

As we work on finalizing the character designs, I'll post up the character introduction sheets and confirm their completion.

That's it for now...
Still a lot of work to do, but the final vision of this game is coming quickly into view. All that's left is chipping away at the art and final drafts to bring it in. Can't wait to get back to work on the art with you on the live streams. Till then, Salute!

 

[Ayhsel]

My day was ruined. My life is meaningless. And I'm salty as hell. The daughte....err neighborhood girls are happy though.

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I wanna be that icecream!!

 

[K18]

Oh, and I can't count!
Last report I said we had 13 possible love interests. Not sure what happened or who I forgot, but it turns out there are 14. In alphabetical order they are:

Amanda Campbell
Anne Templeton
Candice McCreary
Cassie H.......olliday!
Emily Harrington
Jane Howard
Kim Teak
Lita
Lola
Lupita Rosales
Monica Williams & Sharice Johnson
Nanami Sakamura
Raena Larson
Sarah Cartier

As we work on finalizing the character designs, I'll post up the character introduction sheets and confirm their completion.

So are "Monica Williams & Sharice Johnson" a 2-for-1 deal, linked together? If not, wouldn't that be 15 love interests?

Have we met any of these 4 love interests already?
Anne Templeton
Candice McCreary (Is this Candy Caine? Or someone else?)
Kim Teak
Raena Larson

 

[spitfire335]

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2021-06-04 News

You know the drill, so let's do it.

All Quiet on the Amana Front?
True, I haven't been as present as I normally am. For some strange reason these last few weeks I've been riding this creative high and I don't know when it'll stop. At this point I've learned to identify these little bouts of creative energy when they come and I take full advantage of them when they're here

That said, I've been laying down a lot of groundwork on the story. As previously mentioned I had been working ruthlessly on the script and had finished mapping out a three act story arc for each character. Well as soon as I had that done, I suddenly found myself amid a storm of ideas and have been scrambling to get them down in text.

So now for many characters I've not only got the three act plot laid down, but have also mapped out the five chapter arc for the first act. All first/rough draft story that will be the bones upon which we write our final draft.

And in the process of building out those initial chapters, I've started discovering new things about my characters. Story ideas and personality traits that were apparently waiting to be discovered. Jane in particular started to reveal some pretty interesting things to me during her initial chapter planning.

I've always had a rough idea of who Jane is, but it turns out there were parts of her personality and character that she had been waiting to reveal. And so while her and a few other characters have undergone a bit of a social redesign, rest assured that nothing you've love about her has been taken away. She's still the Jane you knew before. Now she just has some deeper thoughts, desires and motivations that you've yet to uncover. And it's these little details that help bring her and other characters to life by freeing them up from two-dimensionality.

All in all I've plotted about 30 chapters in the last couple of weeks and I have a handful more I want to get out of my head and into Scrivener before I take a break. The writing process is starting to take a bit of a toll and I can feel the exhaustion starting to creep in. That's usually the sign that I need to lay down the pen and paper for a bit and get back to running the artwork for a change of pace.

And the Streams?
Obviously streaming me generating story ideas and writing down text in scrivener isn't very riveting material. Plus it provides way too many spoilers. My goal for this next week is to finish the first five chapters that comprise Act I for each character. That gives us around 60 chapters waiting for a final draft that we can vote on and begin working toward completion. Also this week I'll probably stream my progress on finalizing character design.

My presets in Daz have gotten a bit outta whack and I need to comb through everything and make sure the surfaces are updated and everyone is ready for immediate drop into the story. I started this process the other day with a small stream and will continue it through the week so we can finish up character design. After that we'll be back to regularly streaming art work and pushing out play tests.

Oh, and I can't count!
Last report I said we had 13 possible love interests. Not sure what happened or who I forgot, but it turns out there are 14. In alphabetical order they are:

Amanda Campbell
Anne Templeton
Candice McCreary
Cassie H.......olliday!
Emily Harrington
Jane Howard
Kim Teak
Lita
Lola
Lupita Rosales
Monica Williams & Sharice Johnson
Nanami Sakamura
Raena Larson
Sarah Cartier

As we work on finalizing the character designs, I'll post up the character introduction sheets and confirm their completion.

That's it for now...
Still a lot of work to do, but the final vision of this game is coming quickly into view. All that's left is chipping away at the art and final drafts to bring it in. Can't wait to get back to work on the art with you on the live streams. Till then, Salute!

Sarah looking gorgeous as always.

 

[RomanHume]

I remember a complaint to a computer games review site (I think it was IGN, and you can certainly have complaints there) about a game rating along the lines of "how can this game get a good score, it isn't even a shooter?".

That's actually an awesome idea! I'm shit canning this story and turning it into a shooter. Done deal!

We appreciate it. I've quit all but ten porn VNs in the first half-hour due to shit art, shit writing or both. The majority are so damn bad. Yours is one of only 4-5 I've played through to the end of content and only one of three I genuinely look forward to updates on. This has the potential to be the best porn VN out there IMO, as far as both the writing and art are concerned. As of now, you've got the best writing of the bunch and the best art of the Daz 3d ones if judging from the latest chapter alone. Though I know there's a lot of game left to develop.

Glad you're not listening to the "U shuld make tehm fux more and teh bobs biger" tools who give some absolute crap 5 stars on here.

Basically, keep up the great work. You're doing an amazing job.

I appreciate the feedback mate! I'm definitely getting better and faster at the art and one by one challenges on that front are being conquered. By this time next year my hope is that anything I want to do, any shot I want to compose, I'll have the tools and means to do it quickly with or without premade Daz assets. Here's to hoping mate!

Just want to say that Cassie sex sequence was hot as fuck. I quite enjoy the writing too, which I guess is one thing that adds to the scene being hot lol.

I appreciate it. For the longest time I've had a difficulty in writing good sex scenes. It was an area of improvement that I was seriously focused on and I think the Cassie scene marked a new mile stone in improvement in that direction. Hope to bring you many more like it!

All this discussion is nice and all.... but

Is this game aboned? Somebody had to ask! I dont think I have seen it recently.

By the way.. where is humanno or whatever was his name? The thread is not the same with mout him coming and trolling some, Roman answering in a hilarious way and most of us trying to figure out what will be the next absurd comment.

Here is the latest news:


As you all know, coronavirus restrictions are being eased around the world. Especially here, in my home state of Florida-or-somewhere-like-that. And as any self-respecting Florida-man-or-something-like-that would do, I decided to get into some trouble. And that is where my issues arose and your you-know-what will not rise anytime soon.

School is out, the daugh....err neighborhood girls are all out and about. They aren't even wearing masks anymore. I say this as a moral and responsible person, totally not a perverted monster who has no sense of right or wrong...but hot damn. I need to get me some of that.

And by some of that, I mean ice-cream. Just look at those girls, who are totally of age and not minors. And by girls, I mean neighborhood girls, not my own daughe.....err you know what I mean. They love that ice-cream so much. Look as their tongues caress the soft-served vanilla cream. I wish I could give them my world-famous hard-serve cone. It's so....tasty.

And that is what I did. I, in a totally non-creepy way, approached from the bushes. The girls are innocently licking the melted vanilla from their hands. I sit across the picnic table and casually say "Hey, you girls like licking stuff?". They giggle and say " Especially our dadd...I mean our landlords soft-serve " . I then say " You know, I hear hard-served last longer" . They are fascinated as they reply "H-hard-serve? H-how hard is it? "

It all went downhill from there. I replied " You wanna see for yourself?" "Hehe, totally!" They reply. So, I abide their humble request to sample my...cone. I start to slowly unzip my pants, they ask " W-what are you doing?" "Starting up the machine, sweetie." I say. And oh boy, was my ice-cream machine rearing to go.

As we sat on that picnic table, the girls couldn't take their eyes off my....equipment. I say "You like what you see?" the girls, it totally stunned awe, reply " O-oh my....yes...". Then I give them what they've been waiting for. A huge cone of the hardest-served ice-cream ever to be erected. So hard yet so...pliable. So thick...yet creamy. So....so....good. The perfect...cone.

Then it happened. My worst nightmare. I slipped right in. I fell into the abyss. I couldn't see how to get out. I couldn't believe what had happened. And then it hit me....*sigh*. "W-whats wrong?" The girls asked, looking concerned as they slurped on my cone. "Well, girls, I'm sorry. But I didn't add any salt... your cones are melting already....it's...t-too soft..." "Hehe" The girls say, "So, that is why it's so creamy and exploded on our faces!" .

My day was ruined. My life is meaningless. And I'm salty as hell. The daughte....err neighborhood girls are happy though.

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[RomanHume]

So are "Monica Williams & Sharice Johnson" a 2-for-1 deal, linked together? If not, wouldn't that be 15 love interests?

Have we met any of these 4 love interests already?
Anne Templeton
Candice McCreary (Is this Candy Caine? Or someone else?)
Kim Teak
Raena Larson

I started writing the Monica storyline with an optional Sharice three-way involved. But the more I wrote her story the more I saw how much fun these two characters were together. So while Sharice is not a main love interest, she is a potential ongoing third wheel in the Monica storyline.

Anne and Kim you have not met yet.

Candice was first mentioned here a long time ago but amid re-writes and delay's she kept getting pushed back. Now she's back on the board with her own story line. She has since gotten a new hair cut but her BBW body is still in play.

And Raena was first mentioned here but has not appeared in the story yet. Amid Nanami's updated plot structure she's seeing an earlier introduction and will also a fully romanceable character.

 

[Ayhsel]

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2021-06-04 News

You know the drill, so let's do it.

All Quiet on the Amana Front?
True, I haven't been as present as I normally am. For some strange reason these last few weeks I've been riding this creative high and I don't know when it'll stop. At this point I've learned to identify these little bouts of creative energy when they come and I take full advantage of them when they're here

That said, I've been laying down a lot of groundwork on the story. As previously mentioned I had been working ruthlessly on the script and had finished mapping out a three act story arc for each character. Well as soon as I had that done, I suddenly found myself amid a storm of ideas and have been scrambling to get them down in text.

So now for many characters I've not only got the three act plot laid down, but have also mapped out the five chapter arc for the first act. All first/rough draft story that will be the bones upon which we write our final draft.

And in the process of building out those initial chapters, I've started discovering new things about my characters. Story ideas and personality traits that were apparently waiting to be discovered. Jane in particular started to reveal some pretty interesting things to me during her initial chapter planning.

I've always had a rough idea of who Jane is, but it turns out there were parts of her personality and character that she had been waiting to reveal. And so while her and a few other characters have undergone a bit of a social redesign, rest assured that nothing you've love about her has been taken away. She's still the Jane you knew before. Now she just has some deeper thoughts, desires and motivations that you've yet to uncover. And it's these little details that help bring her and other characters to life by freeing them up from two-dimensionality.

All in all I've plotted about 30 chapters in the last couple of weeks and I have a handful more I want to get out of my head and into Scrivener before I take a break. The writing process is starting to take a bit of a toll and I can feel the exhaustion starting to creep in. That's usually the sign that I need to lay down the pen and paper for a bit and get back to running the artwork for a change of pace.

And the Streams?
Obviously streaming me generating story ideas and writing down text in scrivener isn't very riveting material. Plus it provides way too many spoilers. My goal for this next week is to finish the first five chapters that comprise Act I for each character. That gives us around 60 chapters waiting for a final draft that we can vote on and begin working toward completion. Also this week I'll probably stream my progress on finalizing character design.

My presets in Daz have gotten a bit outta whack and I need to comb through everything and make sure the surfaces are updated and everyone is ready for immediate drop into the story. I started this process the other day with a small stream and will continue it through the week so we can finish up character design. After that we'll be back to regularly streaming art work and pushing out play tests.

Oh, and I can't count!
Last report I said we had 13 possible love interests. Not sure what happened or who I forgot, but it turns out there are 14. In alphabetical order they are:

Amanda Campbell
Anne Templeton
Candice McCreary
Cassie H.......olliday!
Emily Harrington
Jane Howard
Kim Teak
Lita
Lola
Lupita Rosales
Monica Williams & Sharice Johnson
Nanami Sakamura
Raena Larson
Sarah Cartier

As we work on finalizing the character designs, I'll post up the character introduction sheets and confirm their completion.

That's it for now...
Still a lot of work to do, but the final vision of this game is coming quickly into view. All that's left is chipping away at the art and final drafts to bring it in. Can't wait to get back to work on the art with you on the live streams. Till then, Salute!

That sounds amazing!! My only worry is about... too much?

Have you run some numbers in your head in how long it will take to do 14 characters with such complex stories?

You know I have always love this novel I doubt that will ever change. I am just worry if you might have bit off more than you can chew.

14 characters with several storylines (red/blue), alternatives (pregnant/not pregnant) and intertwined (Miss Holiday and your wife will be hard to separate)... definitely seems complex.

 

[K18]

I started writing the Monica storyline with an optional Sharice three-way involved. But the more I wrote her story the more I saw how much fun these two characters were together. So while Sharice is not a main love interest, she is a potential ongoing third wheel in the Monica storyline.

Anne and Kim you have not met yet.

Candice was first mentioned here a long time ago but amid re-writes and delay's she kept getting pushed back. Now she's back on the board with her own story line. She has since gotten a new hair cut but her BBW body is still in play.

And Raena was first mentioned here but has not appeared in the story yet. Amid Nanami's updated plot structure she's seeing an earlier introduction and will also a fully romanceable character.

Cool, thanks for reminding me. I remember those faces.

Candice, oh yeah the BBW topless in overall shorts standing by a sexy big rig. The long awaited warehouse for our unlucky yet lucky MC . Now i'm curious how that new hairstyle looks.

Raena, reminds me a little bit of Nanami based on her description, sexy serious businesswoman type, maybe more intense. I'd gladly be her new man & lover, i mean i'd gladly be her best ally... with benefits .