Hello All
This post is for
@Ptolemy (and all the players who can enriched my thoughts on the game)
First of all, I have just finished the game, and I really want to congratulate you. You have a serious talent in graphics and showing us spicy situations and relations. It's stunning.
I love the "role play" games daughter/father with andrea, lois lane/lex luthor, I Loooove the scene with Jessica when they re kissing all the time without separating their lips. So many pepites in this game. congratulations
(I try my best to write in english, but I'm french, so forgive my mistakes. Thanks)
That's said, maybe my "thoughts" on the game can give you ideas to improve it.
First of all, I like very much the way of concentrating on the caracters/action with a "fixed" background.
In a general manner, I love most of the graphic art in the game, with small exceptions like the office outfit of Andrea, father's office, and father itself, Mark also : He can, be handsome and a douchbag at the same time. He also can "look-like" chris, to show that Dana is searching him in Mark.
Second, I love the thoughts that Chris and Dana share this "special ability" to "read" human inclinaisons. Dana uses it in the "human ressources", and chris uses it to fuck everything
but something is missing in his live his "soul sister"
In my mind, the "worst" part is the beginning of the game. When I started the game I thought that it was just an other "meet'n'fuck" game, because you didn't introduce well the story and the caracters. It is a pity because as you play the game it becomes better and better, maybe it is because you are learning during the process of making the game.
I understand that the process of "re-working" the beginning of the game may piss off the old players, but I think it IS very important, and you will gain a lot in the long term. And as Chris has a very active sexual life, you can introduce well the story and in the same time show some intersting and spicy situations to keep the players attention. So, as you may undestand me, you can developp the story without make wait the players too much
(My thought on what may be the beginning of the game comes after)
1/ As Chris want to keep in shape for fucking every girl, he has to do sports activities. You can use this to make activities in the weekend before weekend dates are available
2/. For the game itself, I think you really need a "chapter system".
This system can provide for example a way to diversify the encounters: for example fucking in the office will evolve during chapters, and others activities also work/cafeteria/ etc
What it may be :
Chapter 0/ Prologue :
introduce Chris, his way of life, the "event" that pissed the father and Dana that managed to "save" her brother by convincing the father to give him a last chance by working in his society under her supervision.
Dana wins a year from the father to prove him that Chris can be usefull and may be his successor.
End of Prologue with the thought of Chris that maybe what he was looking for of this life was in fact his sister.
What it can be :
We see Chris fucking 2 sluts in a party in a foreign country. Pictures of that sold to a "people newspaper".
a week later Chris found that the father had blocked his bank account. Dana calls him and explain him the situation and that she had saved her beloved brother but he have to return asap , she has paid his airplane ticket and she will explain all when he'll return. In the airplane (maybe after had fucked an hostess in the toilets) sleeping in his seat in the air, he dreams of dana in the clouds ...
Chapter I / A new life :
As the airline hostess give him her phone number, Dana shows at the airport and jump in is arms. After some kissings and gropings, in the taxi she leads him to his new appartment (property of the society oh the father) and explains him that he has to trust her and follow her plan. He has to work for the company in a new department, specially created by her for him (prospective, reorganisations, new markets etc...)
The day after, she introduce him to Andrea that she had "casted" to fullfill his needs to avoid "sexual harrassment" in the office, to not have another "public event". Maybe, Chris and Dana, can bring andrea to try new outfits for him and andrea in a store. Dana playing the "mother" who buy clothes to the family and initiate the "father/daughter" with andrea and be present for the first BJ of chris by andrea in the changing room.
At the office, the first job is to make a team for this new "propective departement" ... you can imagine what you want, something like "charlie's angels" with Maria (with a great "knowledge" of everyone in the society)
at this point you understand the principle
end of Chapter I with Chris accepting her feelings for her sister
Chapter II/ builing the new "departement"
end of Chapter II with Dana accepting her feelings for her brother
Chapter III/ THE scene
end of Chapter III with Chris and Dana almost caught in the act and have to hzve a plan to hide
Chapter IV/ Hidden in plain sight
etc...
And last thing with Chapters : When a choice will end a chapter, warn the players
I was a little chocked to end the game after a weekend date without having the possibility to have the choice to choose properly the way to "hide in plain sight"
and finally make "funny" bad endings and/or achievments
3/ user interface
* have faces of the caracterer wich speaking
* have a way to disply the % of the content discovered
* have a way to "replay" discovered scenes
* separte the "text content" in a text file, that can be translated by fans in other languages
4/ For the story itself, I leave it to you
but small ideas
* Developp "Mark" and the breakup. Maybe Mark Caught them Kissing and forces Chris to investigate him to find that he is cheating
* Where are the mother and her brother ? (maybe I missed something)
* are Dana and Chris the fruit of an incestual love ?
* developp the relation Dana/Father
That's all for the moment
I hope it will help you
I think I will replay the game to see all the content
