I was going to wait for final release for day 15-17, but urge to get my Ecchi dose grew too much and I played beta release.
i found one typo, I think it was during Aki's photoshoot.
Matsu
And that's coming from you of all peopel? Who was making out
with Jasmine not long ago?
Not sure if this is typo or meant to be like that, but when Matsu gets home with Mao in day 17 he greets Hiriko: Hallo, sweetie. instead of hello.
And age of hobogirl was mentioned to be 12. I'm quite sure she was mentioned to be 15 during earlier days. I remember that, because I thought even that to be too low, because she looks like an 18 years old.
What comes to content, I liked it. One scene with Kotori teared me up a bit (manly tears, so no calling me softy), so good job.
I was bit disappointed about not seeing Matsu's sister visiting yet, but..