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Oh, you mean Photosensitive epilepsy? That's the only way it would bother you, if you have such issues. In which case fully understandable.I mean the flashing senes
Yeah, I'll make sure to include the option the moment I get a chance to update this. Sorry.
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so Im still in chapter 1 right now but theres a few things Id suggest for working on to improve this. I realize, almost certainly, that english is not the author/dev's native language as there are just too many awkward moments in the text but please add more variety to your vocabulary.... the number of times you use 'to say the least' or 'so I say'/ 'I'll say' or 'somewhat' is tedious. Find other means to say the same thing, keep the variety going. I think this one thing alone would dramatically increase the ability of a player to get 'lost in the story' as it were. Right now I keep seeing the same phrases uses so often back to back its getting jarring and grating on my nerves. I am a picky bastard tho.
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if someone talked like this irl, Id prolly snap and slap em lmfao
Yeah, yeah. I keep telling this... I got the message loud and clear. I'll make it my priority among other things to change this coming following updates. You got my word on it.
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to say the least, amongst other things, Im really glad to hear this, Ill say
sorry man, couldnt resist
Yeah its fine, I got that one up my ass I suppose. I honestly didn't pay it that much attention but I can see how it can be annoying a bit.to say the least, amongst other things, Im really glad to hear this, Ill say
sorry man, couldnt resist
tO sAy ThE leAsT that is.
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something I do when writing a story is to do my thing until done for the day but then when I sit down the next day to keep going I read everything I wrote the previous day. This forces me to see more typos, grammar fuckups and generally better ways to word things
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thought about suggesting a drinking game of taking a shot every time 'to say the least' appeared on screen but then I realized even a hardcore drunk would die of alcohol poisoning before the prologue was done
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thought about suggesting a drinking game of taking a shot every time 'to say the least' appeared on screen but then I realized even a hardcore drunk would die of alcohol poisoning before the prologue was done
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Mmh... I'll see if I can populate it then to put it that way. Thanks for the suggestion bro.i observed another thing. Sometimes the world feels empty, especially the bar,gym,restaurant scenes. Can't see any background characters. (Most of the times this total ok because we are in that kind of places.) Anyway im curious where the story goes. Nice job Dev
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I dare you, Say one more time “to say the least” and I am becoming Samuel Jackson.That would be least of your problems, to say the least.
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? ask about Yiddish or what slag called never know about it. But Dict-cc say it is slag Yiddish.... mhhh strange and new.. sound a littel like a street slag as hey babe... LOL (baby = babe). nothing against slag or so but funny to learn more about it.. ( so i dont mean bad mouthing or so ...)
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