That was slightly weird experience for me. So, I like the setting, I like femdom content, I like the issue of racial tensions between humans and elves, but I found pacing a little bit too fast and story a little bit all over the place. Part of the problem imo is that there should be more renders during various scenes to make them look bigger and to show specific moments in greater detail instead of just talking about them via rather dry and not very arousing inner monologue in MC's mind. Femdom scenes lack intensity imo, half-friend looks like she kicks/punches with considerable strenght, but because of framing, small amount of renders, big jumps between various moments within a specific scene (which takes away the tension btw) I never felt anything. As far as the LIs are concerned they not really my type, I like half-friend's body and fiancee's face, but I hope there'll be some more choices in the future.
Overall it's not a bad starts, the quality is there, some interesting ideas and content too, but there's room for development and grow. I wish the devs luck and I'll definitely come back for the next chapter.