No, he is just absurdly fast.Oh I thought he could slow down time and even managed to stab her.
No, he is just absurdly fast.Oh I thought he could slow down time and even managed to stab her.
Second part of what you said I can't. I'd replied dozen times on this so far, believe it or not. I have went back updates back already, I've increased the font size into oblivion, I've striked the letters with underline, and hit them with additional BOLD. To ensure that people take note that they only change first name, which is Eliot. Not his full name.
And my friend, I'll be damned if that isn't enough. I absolutely refuse to take responsibility after that, for anyone who ''doesn't see'' or ''didn't read''.
Sorry, its too small. Can't see it or read it.
And once again, I'm sorry about that.Dang, none of my old saves works. have to start all over again
you had me rollin'One would think if a person has been a mod before, they'd have the maturity to well....... not act in such a way,
I will begin from start again, more easy.Traceback isn't gonna help me. I've went through it again and again, and for life of me I cannot comprehend the issue.
I will be extremely cautious going forward however, and make "SAVE HERE" spots. Or something, I need to ask someone with more experience than me.
Sorry for the trouble, again.I will begin from start again, more easy.
But i will wait for a more advanced version in the future, maybe a nine or ten version with more new content to play again, meanwhile i will keep my 0.6 version and saves on my porn games pc library.
Have lots of other games to play and advance meanwhile. ; )
Thx the replies.
Doesn't matter at that stage.who do i send send to scout lyria or yanna
I do the best I can, so does the editor, and I firmly believe that.Firstly, all in all I like the game. Just played through what was available now. Will be keeping an eye on this.
Interesting characters with real stories behind them, and some pretty good fantasy building IMO.
One thing that could do with some serious thought though, is the dialogue - It seems like the writing is intentionally trying to sound much fancier than it really is at times, with the (hopefully unintended) consequence of making it hard to follow from time to time. If the issue comes down to language skills, I'd personally prefer to see simpler language that carries the story forward, over complex writing that ends up working against it.
I understand, and I appreciate it. I'll try to improve writing further, or, struggle? But I'll keep at it nonetheless. Best as time and ability allows me anyhow.Well, like I said - I do still like the game, and will be following the progress. It's not a deal breaker for me at least, just more like constructive criticism.
I find these kinds of comments confusing. In my understanding, VN means "Visual Novel". In 99% of cases (disregarding the 1% that are "Choose-your-own-adventure"), a novel is written in a linear fashion and it's on the reader to interpret in whichever way they see fit....since it is not a VN?
You're not alone with that take, although some are choose you own Adventure, to tell them apart , the ones wher your choices doesn't really matter are tagged with "linear Novel"I find these kinds of comments confusing. In my understanding, VN means "Visual Novel". In 99% of cases (disregarding the 1% that are "Choose-your-own-adventure"), a novel is written in a linear fashion and it's on the reader to interpret in whichever way they see fit.
Therefore, wouldn't a visual novel simply be a novel with pictures?
Please excuse my ignorance, I'm not trying to start something, simply understand.
It should be, yes. This is what it is.You're not alone with that take, although some are choose you own Adventure, to tell them apart , the ones wher your choices doesn't really matter are tagged with "linear Novel"
I personally see it like you described.
Nice to hear as that's the type I'm in the process of writing. Technically there will be two; I've written the first about 95% and it'll be a prologue of the 2nd (set roughly 15 years apart). Just daz fucking me around at this stage; I've only done about 2% of the visuals.You're not alone with that take, although some are choose you own Adventure, to tell them apart , the ones wher your choices doesn't really matter are tagged with "linear Novel"
I personally see it like you described.
This sounds so familiar.Such as I don't know, pick who visits Eliot's bed at night.
This is game is more into the category of Kinetic Novel in terms of story outcome. The war table doesnt seem that it will affect the ending for now. Basically if the ending is predetermined it will fall to KN category.I find these kinds of comments confusing. In my understanding, VN means "Visual Novel". In 99% of cases (disregarding the 1% that are "Choose-your-own-adventure"), a novel is written in a linear fashion and it's on the reader to interpret in whichever way they see fit.
Therefore, wouldn't a visual novel simply be a novel with pictures?
Please excuse my ignorance, I'm not trying to start something, simply understand.