Jinkies such an experience that even a lurker had to speak up. I tried this out based solely on how spicy the OIAL gallery was even without the broader context of the story and goddamn this is a porn masterpiece in the making. The way the previous childhood relationships with Dalia, Penny, and Nancy affect their interactions in the present create that sensation of the forbidden without having to resort to the cheap trick of making them actually be related. I know other games and movies have done it before but the scene where you have to navigate with camera flashes had me wondering if I was gonna need a change of shorts before it was over. The overall pacing of the MC's relationships feels just right, with the extra bits of side content tossed in to keep the horndogs from getting too bored.
MC is a bit of a blockhead for not being able to figure out Eternum's secret quicker, yeah it's obvious to the reader but I feel like he is just too dismissive and willing to accept the cover story, particularly when he
He's a skeptic almost to the point of absurdity but hopefully that won't be relevant anymore.
The 'Ready Player One' influences are pretty obvious, but I wonder if the author has read/watched any SAO.