VN Ren'Py Eternum [v0.8.5 Public] [Caribdis]

[Mutation8888]

I mean, you might be right about this. But on the other hand, since MC now can enter Eternum freely without device and also transport other people with him in and out, she just might get a spot in the harem. Because now she probably can also be brought to reality.

Spoiler: Calypso

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[sexypeanut]

When threesome happens while Orion was fucking Nance, Nova was acknowledging the fact she likes to 'watch' and we get glimps her with Anny, Penny and Alex. Maybe it's foreseeable threesome pairing in the future? WDYT?

Really hope so!

 

[Jarulf]

All those peoples who dismiss Annie or girls like her because of their breasts size are seriously delusional. Small girls like her are such sexy little hot packages. Those small tits are so pretty, delicate and beautiful, can't be beaten.

Anyway it bother me a little to see no support for her all here. So if i have to be alone to die on that hill, to defend Annie's claim on the best tits tittle (and best girl), I WILL

Annie is amazingly sexy, I love her to bits. She is almost tied with Luna, it's sooo close, and I can't wait for those two to get really, really close.

 

[Eternamite]

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Hello everyone!
I hope you're all doing great!!!
Today I’ll be very brief, since I just have a quick question regarding future updates!
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Here's the thing:
How would you feel about having to choose between two girls (once the relationship with them both has been already established) for a lewd scene? The scenes would be mutually exclusive, meaning you can pick one or the other, but that choice wouldn’t affect the romantic path with the girl you didn’t choose. It would only impact this one scene (and maybe a few future dialogues), so future intimate moments with either girl would still be possible.
In short, something like the werewolves/vampires choice in 0.8, but featuring gallery lewd scenes instead. (Also, keep in mind the gallery would show both scenes unlocked after watching them in any playthrough in any case).
I could make it possible to view both scenes in a single playthrough, but this might affect the pacing, maybe making things feel a bit rushed. Of course, if you prefer that option, I’ll do my best to make things flow smoothly, no worries!
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And that's all I wanted to ask for now!
I’ll be sharing more details about development and a bit about myself (it's been a tough month, but we’re pushing through!) in the next post, which is finally going to be... YES! THE FIRST SNEAK PEEKS!
YOU BETTER STAY TUNNED! COMING UP IN JUST A FEW DAYS!
I truly appreciate all your support, both financially and with your kind words
I’m so grateful to have such an amazing community behind me
Thank you again for everything, and see you all very soon!
Love you,
Caribdis


Current vote count is 56-44 in favor of branching (and imo it's the better choice, it adds replayability and doesn't force Cari to somehow fit everything in one narrative arc).

Well it shall make sense in real life story but it's Eternum we don't want to get short gameplay, and one lewd scene after another is not that bad, it's harem afterall

 

[Eternamite]

When threesome happens while Orion was fucking Nance, Nova was acknowledging the fact she likes to 'watch' and we get glimps her with Anny, Penny and Alex. Maybe it's foreseeable threesome pairing in the future? WDYT?

Probably that was just a flashback of past scenes ( I hope it's true ) but we sure will get a threesome with Luna and Annie

 

[Takkatakka]

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Hello everyone!
I hope you're all doing great!!!
Today I’ll be very brief, since I just have a quick question regarding future updates!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Here's the thing:
How would you feel about having to choose between two girls (once the relationship with them both has been already established) for a lewd scene? The scenes would be mutually exclusive, meaning you can pick one or the other, but that choice wouldn’t affect the romantic path with the girl you didn’t choose. It would only impact this one scene (and maybe a few future dialogues), so future intimate moments with either girl would still be possible.
In short, something like the werewolves/vampires choice in 0.8, but featuring gallery lewd scenes instead. (Also, keep in mind the gallery would show both scenes unlocked after watching them in any playthrough in any case).
I could make it possible to view both scenes in a single playthrough, but this might affect the pacing, maybe making things feel a bit rushed. Of course, if you prefer that option, I’ll do my best to make things flow smoothly, no worries!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
And that's all I wanted to ask for now!
I’ll be sharing more details about development and a bit about myself (it's been a tough month, but we’re pushing through!) in the next post, which is finally going to be... YES! THE FIRST SNEAK PEEKS!
YOU BETTER STAY TUNNED! COMING UP IN JUST A FEW DAYS!
I truly appreciate all your support, both financially and with your kind words
I’m so grateful to have such an amazing community behind me
Thank you again for everything, and see you all very soon!
Love you,
Caribdis


Current vote count is 56-44 in favor of branching (and imo it's the better choice, it adds replayability and doesn't force Cari to somehow fit everything in one narrative arc).

Honestly, I would be against it. Make two separate scenes for different circumstances instead of artificially come up with a scenario in which Orion somehow can choose between two girls in (almost) the same situation. It means you'll have one unique scene more instead of two scenes that both can't 100% fit. Eternum just isn't the game for this.

 

[Lolicon Kami]

All those peoples who dismiss Annie or girls like her because of their breasts size are seriously delusional. Small girls like her are such sexy little hot packages. Those small tits are so pretty, delicate and beautiful, can't be beaten.

Anyway it bother me a little to see no support for her all here. So if i have to be alone to die on that hill, to defend Annie's claim on the best tits tittle (and best girl), I WILL

Also, if you look closely, Luna/Annie tits are insanely big, proportional to their body size, in sexy scenes.

They have like an A cup and during sexy time, BAM i swear it inflates to like a B cup or somethin'. I think we're just too used to unrealistic booby sizes from games

Don't believe me? I bet you most smol women in real life don't have tits this big That's IRL back pain waiting ↓↓↓↓↓↓

 

[Amnezziia]

Honestly, I would be against it. Make two separate scenes for different circumstances instead of artificially come up with a scenario in which Orion somehow can choose between two girls in (almost) the same situation. It means you'll have one unique scene more instead of two scenes that both can't 100% fit. Eternum just isn't the game for this.

Agree with this, and we already had the example with Penny/Vampires and Luna/Werewolves even if it's not a lewd scene. I find the choice useless except to add a little flavor to choose between two girls, but is that really important? iirc, Luna has a sex scene after but not Penny in this update. For me, might as well split the screen time and only do Penny/Vampires. Luna's choice shouldn't even exist since she also has screen time with her sex scene. (Well and if I'm wrong about Penny, that doesn't really change anything. Just stick with only one choice because it seems so much more practical to me)
Instead of making 200 extra renders (random number) that force you to make a choice in a harem game, you can use these renders to either add something more in the update or even release the update earlier.
All this seems more time consuming than anything else in the end.

 

[Lolicon Kami]

Honestly, I would be against it. Make two separate scenes for different circumstances instead of artificially come up with a scenario in which Orion somehow can choose between two girls in (almost) the same situation. It means you'll have one unique scene more instead of two scenes that both can't 100% fit. Eternum just isn't the game for this.

Gotta fuck em all ™ (in one route)

 

[Lilybelle]

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Hello everyone!
I hope you're all doing great!!!
Today I’ll be very brief, since I just have a quick question regarding future updates!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Here's the thing:
How would you feel about having to choose between two girls (once the relationship with them both has been already established) for a lewd scene? The scenes would be mutually exclusive, meaning you can pick one or the other, but that choice wouldn’t affect the romantic path with the girl you didn’t choose. It would only impact this one scene (and maybe a few future dialogues), so future intimate moments with either girl would still be possible.
In short, something like the werewolves/vampires choice in 0.8, but featuring gallery lewd scenes instead. (Also, keep in mind the gallery would show both scenes unlocked after watching them in any playthrough in any case).
I could make it possible to view both scenes in a single playthrough, but this might affect the pacing, maybe making things feel a bit rushed. Of course, if you prefer that option, I’ll do my best to make things flow smoothly, no worries!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
And that's all I wanted to ask for now!
I’ll be sharing more details about development and a bit about myself (it's been a tough month, but we’re pushing through!) in the next post, which is finally going to be... YES! THE FIRST SNEAK PEEKS!
YOU BETTER STAY TUNNED! COMING UP IN JUST A FEW DAYS!
I truly appreciate all your support, both financially and with your kind words
I’m so grateful to have such an amazing community behind me
Thank you again for everything, and see you all very soon!
Love you,
Caribdis


Current vote count is 56-44 in favor of branching (and imo it's the better choice, it adds replayability and doesn't force Cari to somehow fit everything in one narrative arc).

A scene split opens up a lot of flexibility for increase in scenes without much sacrifice to any progression. For example, what if we have a movie night at the Carter house and afterward we decide to show up at one of their rooms for some midnight fun. This could conveniently allow space for up to 4 different scenes. The story pacing would basically be unaffected since it is one night of time progression. The romantic progression of the girls will not go down because they were just going to sleep anyway which means they would not see it as rejecting them for another girl. Sounds like a win to me!

 

[Takkatakka]

A scene split opens up a lot of flexibility for increase in scenes without much sacrifice to any progression. For example, what if we have a movie night at the Carter house and afterward we decide to show up at one of their rooms for some midnight fun. This could conveniently allow space for up to 4 different scenes. The story pacing would basically be unaffected since it is one night of time progression. The romantic progression of the girls will not go down because they were just going to sleep anyway which means they would not see it as rejecting them for another girl. Sounds like a win to me!

It only means more permutations without having any advantage for it. It is actually objectively a loss and a waste of development time.

Edit: Another big point is that it contradicts the premise of the story, because now Orion will HAVE to choose one girl over the other, meaning not all of them are equal anymore.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

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Hello everyone!
I hope you're all doing great!!!
Today I’ll be very brief, since I just have a quick question regarding future updates!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Here's the thing:
How would you feel about having to choose between two girls (once the relationship with them both has been already established) for a lewd scene? The scenes would be mutually exclusive, meaning you can pick one or the other, but that choice wouldn’t affect the romantic path with the girl you didn’t choose. It would only impact this one scene (and maybe a few future dialogues), so future intimate moments with either girl would still be possible.
In short, something like the werewolves/vampires choice in 0.8, but featuring gallery lewd scenes instead. (Also, keep in mind the gallery would show both scenes unlocked after watching them in any playthrough in any case).
I could make it possible to view both scenes in a single playthrough, but this might affect the pacing, maybe making things feel a bit rushed. Of course, if you prefer that option, I’ll do my best to make things flow smoothly, no worries!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
And that's all I wanted to ask for now!
I’ll be sharing more details about development and a bit about myself (it's been a tough month, but we’re pushing through!) in the next post, which is finally going to be... YES! THE FIRST SNEAK PEEKS!
YOU BETTER STAY TUNNED! COMING UP IN JUST A FEW DAYS!
I truly appreciate all your support, both financially and with your kind words
I’m so grateful to have such an amazing community behind me
Thank you again for everything, and see you all very soon!
Love you,
Caribdis


Current vote count is 56-44 in favor of branching (and imo it's the better choice, it adds replayability and doesn't force Cari to somehow fit everything in one narrative arc).

Tsk-tsk Caribdis

 

[Jarulf]

Tsk-tsk Caribdis View attachment 4618940

The off screen green button says "fuck Luna and Annie".

 

[Lilybelle]

It only means more permutations without having any advantage for it. It is actually objectively a loss and a waste of development time.

I think whether it is a gain or loss depends on what the goal is:
If the goal is more story progression on a shorter timeline, but still meeting a minimum scene count, then I think having the split makes sense.
If the goal is to have unique scenes personalized for each girl, then I think having the split does not make sense.

I do agree that narratively I would find it sad that after all the effort that has gone into attending all the girl's activities (like attending Luna's party, the Halloween party, and then Nancy's office all in a row) we finally have a situation where we have to pick between them. It's not unreasonable; just sad

 

[Crush#r]

The off screen green button says "fuck Luna and Annie".

Nah gotta get solo Luna scene before we get a threesome with Annie

 

[Lolicon Kami]

Tsk-tsk Caribdis

Noooo

(Luna = Annie) > (Nancy = Dalia = Alex = Calypso) > Pen > Nova > Side Charas

I think whether it is a gain or loss depends on what the goal is:

Nice banner taste

 

[whatone]

Personally, I think branching is an awful idea.
Dev has to spend extra time creating scenes that lots of players won't even see, unless they now create separate saves for each girl.
Which then means players have to play each update x amount of times just to see all scenes, whereas before they only had to play once to see everything.
It's a "harem" game, let us see all the relevant girls' scenes.

As Takkatakka said:

Edit: Another big point is that it contradicts the premise of the story, because now Orion will HAVE to choose one girl over the other, meaning not all of them are equal anymore.

 

[Jarulf]

Nah gotta get solo Luna scene before we get a threesome with Annie

Oh, I agree. So next update we first make sweet love to Luna, then to Annie and then both.

 

[Crush#r]

Oh, I agree. So next update we first make sweet love to Luna, then to Annie and then both.

I like your thinking!

 

[Krytax123]

Agree with this, and we already had the example with Penny/Vampires and Luna/Werewolves even if it's not a lewd scene. I find the choice useless except to add a little flavor to choose between two girls, but is that really important? iirc, Luna has a sex scene after but not Penny in this update. For me, might as well split the screen time and only do Penny/Vampires. Luna's choice shouldn't even exist since she also has screen time with her sex scene. (Well and if I'm wrong about Penny, that doesn't really change anything. Just stick with only one choice because it seems so much more practical to me)
Instead of making 200 extra renders (random number) that force you to make a choice in a harem game, you can use these renders to either add something more in the update or even release the update earlier.
All this seems more time consuming than anything else in the end.

I feel the same despite me usually prefering branching stories over harems BUT if you go the harem route already than branching in the harem is just kinda annoying.

Even less as it imo (!) kinda felt logical and even canon to follow penny, firstly is luna simply was more experienced and stronger in eternum and secondly the whole "giving penny the dance orion owed her" felt very great and fitting and like a important step in the orion/penny relationship while the Luna trip was more on the comedic site and youre not really missing out much not taking it.