Thank you.
You had me at poor grammar. I get triggered immediately when the grammar is off consistently. I can probably stomach a sentence or two per chapter, but anything beyond that is an auto-drop.
Yeah, it is better than it was on first release but it still needs a lot of work. This developer isn't alone though, it's consistently an issue with games. I hope that the developer avails himself of the recruiting section, there are quite a few helpful people who are willing to volunteer their time and knowledge for free or for a credit. The renders are solid, the MC looks a little dopey, but otherwise the grammar is the biggest hurdle. Personally I prefer more choices and character development before the MC is fucking someone but I know I am an odd green puppet.
I wouldn't want to say that but it seems I don't have a choice... A little spoiler is coming.
I know that I could have explained better, however, I'm going to clarify the mom situation. Thanks for your comment!
Seemed that way to me, too. She gets angry with him for not doing chores around the house, so he gets pissed and leaves? Seems like a reasonable reason to get upset with your kid.
I think giving the MC a better hair cut would go a long way in making him look better. I have seen a lot of new devs that don't have many assets go with the bog standard Armani hair that comes with DAZ and they usually all change it to something else eventually because it looks dumb and there is a reason it comes free with DAZ.
mate, the art's superb played it even tho the grammar isn't great. my advice to you is that you find some of your patrons to help you proofread your work before you release it. other than that this game has potential.I wouldn't want to say that but it seems I don't have a choice... A little spoiler is coming.
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Also, I prefer more choices just like you. Therefore, you will be able to do whatever you want in the next updates. If you don't want to have sex with anyone, you will have another option. On the other hand, I know that nobody liked the MC. I'll do something regarding this issue in Episode 2.
Thanks for your comment!
I know that I could have explained better, however, I'm going to clarify the mom situation. Thanks for your comment!
I know many (including me) who would like to have a choice in this rather than be forced into a relationship or sex scene with a character the player doesn't even know/like. But going from what the dev has written, there seems to be a reason behind the compulsory sex scene. Not sure where it goes but it has been mentioned on this page.
Forcing sex scenes because the story needs it to happen is bad writing, I would say. Still I'll hold off dropping this until I see where it's headed.
I have to agree with the bucketbot, if the only way to tell a story is through a mandatory sex scene it is poorly written. On top of that by having a mandatory sex scene with a character that isn't well liked it has multiple people ready to quit the game on the first update.
