Also a small request to the dev: avoid using the same music everyone and their mother are using, it just gives a really tiresome/lazy dev vibe to people who play a lot of these games - the less commonly used music you chose for the game was good.
The recycled music from some well known VNs is really annoying and makes a hugely negatively impression. Much better to have no music, than to re-use the music used prominently in other people's work.
The character models are odd, in the faces and dimensions. The conversation about aliens in the opening of the game sort of sets the tone that when you see the character models, and see things are just off.
The bios says the main character is 6'1", like his landlord, while most of the female main characters ("roommates") are below 5' is also really odd. If you ignore the Patreon-friendly terms and see them as a "family", it doesn't make much sense to have midgets and tall people directly related. I'm guessing that's where the attached loli tag is supposed to fit in, but having adult looking models with bios stating they are short doesn't equate to lolis.
In fact, the majority of the tags don't apply to the game in its current shape. There are the listed tags which are supposed to apply to what is in the game: "3DCG, Male protagonist, Big tits, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism, Oral sex, Animated, Teasing, Harem, Stripping, Incest, Romance, Map, Multiple endings, POV, MILF, loli". Half maybe actually apply. Then there are the listed "
Projected genres: Vaginal sex, Squirt, Anal sex, Sex toys, BDSM, Prostitution, Spaking, Creampie, Group sex, Cosplay". Sloppy or dishonest? Either way it just looks bad and gives a negative impression.
These negatives really overshadow the positives, which for me are a promising game without any serious bugs or issues, a script that is readable and not full of errors and a humorous premise that could be fun. There is potential here, and I hope it succeeds.
