Considering that there's a typo about ever other screen in the dialogs, that is probably a good bet.
The bad...
Spent several hours going through this last night, no clue how many weeks I went. Got to a point where it just felt like the dev's keyboard doesn't have a backspace key, they doing GAF about quality, or can't
read WTF they typed.
* "bed" spelled as "bad" -- too many times to count, as well as other completely wrong word being used
* letters reversed (such as "thier" instead of "their") -- many times
* wrong name in dialogs at least once (Lily while talking with Molly)
* repeating events as if I
didn't just do that the day before -- very many times
I can forgive actual grammar issues for non-native speakers (such as wrong case, over use of "the", lack of use of the forms of "to be") but I cannot forgive spelling errors and wrong words! Sure, machine translation can create weird grammar issues, but at least those don't
misspell words!
Oh, and if Molly was 18 when Lily was born, and Lily is the same age as the MC, who's 19, then Molly should be 37. Must be a nice "similar universe to ours" where a 37 year old looks like she's 25. A
few fine lines would've helped the visual aspects, but that
could be a limitation of tools used. I have met 25 year old "models" who looked 52 before. Not really remembering any mid-30 ones who looked 10 years younger, but maybe.
Lily's boob size seemed to change from small B to large C between some of the preview pics, the game, and even between scenes.
Molly's clothes changed in the 5 seconds between lines of dialog once.
The good-ish...
It
did keep my focus for
hours. But after feeling like I was in an endless loop so gave up. It started out with an interesting premise (which could
easily be rendered invalid by allowing name changes -- there's less unisex names than other, and that's the
core of the game's premise, although I actually don't think of "Murphy" as a feminine name. "Sean" might've been better, in retrospect).
It
was an interesting story, but given the
massive lack of care put into this by the dev, I've lost interest in continuing. This does speak to a degrading (meaning lessening, reducing) interest in the actual characters. The MC went from a "nice guy" to a rapist (missing tag) at one point. (Legally, here at least, his poolside actions towards Molly classify as Sexual Battery, Sexual Assault,
and Rape. Definitions:
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) That one scene -- which was unavoidable after going to the pool (meaning no choice not to continue) -- was the last straw.
Dev does have graphics talent. But this project has existed for too long to
still have bad verbiage.