VN Ren'Py Abandoned Experiencing Life [The prologue] [Forcion]

[Jsd16]

I reported the tag change, and I can assure that most girls will be virgins( story are based on personalities but thier history and traumas will be eventually revealed)

I don't expect all the girls to be virgin ( though it would be gud if they are ) and so they will their own history and traumas as u said . I personally would like if their history and traumas are not hardcore ( sexual abuse , rape ) and minimal as it will be hard to romance them ( I feel sympathy for them ) and it' s just a suggestion or opinion . In no way I am telling u how to do u r game . I would like U to continue the game as u see it .
I like U being upfront about the tags and I personally hate NTR but not netori where u steal girls from others which i like and this game has future Harem tag which I love .
Congrats Forcian for this game , I will try to leave a review once i finish it , downloading game now .

 

[Jsd16]

The Journey will have heavy Netori Content
I don't mind the Netori Content or even NTR scenes, sometimes the NTR scenes are much more Interesting / better than Non-NTR scenes.

U may love ur kink ( NTR ) which is great if u do but not all love that and please don't say its interesting or better than non NTR . And if u want to say like that keep it as ur personal opinion .

 

[Forcion]

I don't expect all the girls to be virgin ( though it would be gud if they are ) and so they will their own history and traumas as u said . I personally would like if their history and traumas are not hardcore ( sexual abuse , rape ) and minimal as it will be hard to romance them ( I feel sympathy for them ) and it' s just a suggestion or opinion . In no way I am telling u how to do u r game . I would like U to continue the game as u see it .
I like U being upfront about the tags and I hate NTR , not netori which i like and this garem has future Harem tag which I love .
Congrats Forcian for this game , I will try to leave a review once i finish it , downloading game now .

Great advice and I can share that they are not sexual traumas, they will be related to simple life experiences, somethings like
being treated in certain ways in social circle, witnessing something horrible, upbring and others. as an example, Anamika's eyes have a lot related to her character than just being a design feature or something quirky.

I will be waiting for your review, and hope that you will like what I have created.
and please remember sexual content is part of the journey, not the end goals so everything will have its proper course set out, and not gonna be like, " Hey, I know I just met you, and this is crazy. so here's my no. bang me baby"

 

[Zackaboy]

Is there animation planned for this game? The models look really good

 

[Forcion]

Is there animation planned for this game? The models look really good

I have many custom animations planned out, but you have to wait as I am barely able to run honey select 2 on 10-15fps, so either people can support me or have to find a way to get my parents to buy me one(which is way harder)

it was able to create these renders by making my pc lag each time I move a point on the body.
I will see if people see potential in my game and can support a few donations and I can also use some savings to upgrade and add all the animation I want, but on my own will not be possible right now

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Jsd16]

please remember sexual content is part of the journey, not the end goals so everything will have its proper course set out, and not gonna be like, " Hey, I know I just met you, and this is crazy. so here's my no. bang me baby"

Thanks for the reply Forcion ,
I don't expect things to go like that ( for that I can watch porn ) infact I personally would hate if it goes like that ( rushed romances ) . I came here for the story with romance and sex , not for sex alone in a game .

 

[PeggyBlackett]

A car you could never drive ANYwhere in what we laughingly call The Real World.

 

[Forcion]

A car you could never drive ANYwhere in what we laughingly call The Real World.

Is it some sort of philosophical quote, or sarcasm. either way I am not able to understand the meaning

 

[Forcion]

Hi Forcion, nice start!
I like setting, it's definately something original.
I also really like Renuki, she's a great character and I really hope we can see more of her.
The renders (eventhough they are Honey Select) are pretty nice, with good lighting and lots of atmosphere.

My suggestions for improvement:
- The game seems to be set in India. As most players are probably from Europe and the US, there are some cultural aspects which need to be explained better. I would also make the localisation more clear.
- Especially the male characters don't look very Indian. I know this is difficult with Honey Select, maybe you can try something.
- The MC's dick is way too large. When pissing he should be soft and much smaller.
- The netori part, given that the father of the host family is a strong figure it may be a bit strange to NTR him, depending of course how the game progresses.
- You do need a proofreader.

Good luck with the game, I'll be watching this one!

Renuka's character has the main part not just as a recurring character, I can hint to the mc uncle and parental family part and if possible I can make the second update introduce the story.

only the naming things are set in India, as I can relate to characters personalities easily, I can only think of add Indian festivals as some sort of events( haven't planned out any right now),

the problem with MC dick is that I have a solution of making it more real, but loading those assets put great stress on my pc, and editing it takes a lot more crashes. so I choose to give it up for this prologue.

I can assure you that netori content of Abhijeet is defined really well, again as a hint: it's related to Raj leaving Delhi and moving to Shimla.

I can only hope that I can get a few donations to upgrade my GPU(2gb) and ram(6gb)

 

[A.C.H.B.]

Great start so far. Will need a few more updates for content to be fleshed out, but overall this is pretty decent. Good job!

 

[Lysergic]

I can make the watersport part avoidable,
Netori NOT NTR, will you will be able to switch positions either to have h-scenes in a different locations or make the cucked husband go away.

although the h-scenes involving these parts will take 2-3 updates to come ( other scenes will be there but not these ones in the next update)

again you will NOT be sharing or swinging to any extent

My bad, I didn't realize that neotarare was a thing. I thought you meant netori but were just having trouble with the spelling or something, sorry lol

I found this definition, is this correct that they're used to describe the same situation, the only difference being the perspective it's viewed from?



Netorare. Definition: The protagonist or a love interest of the protagonist enters into a physical relationship with a third party and comes to prefer the third party over time, consequently either cheating or breaking up the original coupling.

Netori. Definition: The protagonist forces a love interest who is already in a relationship with a third party into a physical relationship, and the love interest comes to like it over time, thus either cheating or breaking up with their original partner.

 

[Forcion]

I guess I still don't really get the difference between the two.

I found this definition, is this correct that they're used to describe the same situation, the only difference being the perspective it's viewed from?

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Netorare. Definition: The protagonist or a love interest of the protagonist enters into a physical relationship with a third party and comes to prefer the third party over time, consequently either cheating or breaking up the original coupling.

Netori. Definition: The protagonist forces a love interest who is already in a relationship with a third party into a physical relationship, and the love interest comes to like it over time, thus either cheating or breaking up with their original partner.

Netori is you having a relationship with a committed person and having sex with them, while either the partner watches you or behind his back(example, while you are intimate with her call up her boyfriend and talks or husband because of health issues, can perform the act and has to let himself be cucked and decides to watch you guys.

Netorare(NTR) is you watching someone fuck your partner in front of you( a bit of emotional and consent variations)

 

[Hrk19]

how do i start the game, no matter where the mouse cursor is on the main menu its always only on quit

 

[ttsheng33]

Am i the only one meet this?

 

[Forcion]

how do i start the game, no matter where the mouse cursor is on the main menu its always only on quit

you can try to rezise the window or can show me a screenshot of it
I may have a solution but before show me the problem

 

[Hrk19]

you can try to rezise the window or can show me a screenshot of it
I may have a solution but before show me the problem

thanks that worked

 

[Forcion]

Am i the only one meet this?
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hey that was scene01 (46) image on completion corrupted out(not readable) and i didn't had the scene files for scene01 so i had two option one was to recreate it from first image of the scene initially took me 3 days of making it work or let an unimportant scene exist.
although i had edited out it but i will try to recreate the initial scene in next update anyways so please wait for the next update

 

[ttsheng33]

hey that was scene01 (46) image on completion corrupted out(not readable) and i didn't had the scene files for scene01 so i had two option one was to recreate it from first image of the scene initially took me 3 days of making it work or let an unimportant scene exist.
although i had edited out it but i will try to recreate the initial scene in next update anyways so please wait for the next update

OK thanks for the info

 

[bobdillan]

Forcion just a friendly reminder, don't forget to put netori in the genre.

Also for tagging netori thread wise, it is currently included under the cheating tag. So put cheating on the thread, and netori in genre. (when the game actually has it of course).