VN Ren'Py Abandoned Faded Bonds [v0.3] [Whispering Studios]

[YogSothoth1982]

Weak premise for a story. The MC is a gullible fool; there's no way someone this dumb could have built a successful business.
1. He happily lets his gold digging daughters walk all over him

It seems to me that in this incest game it is best to avoid incest.

2. His wife is out of the picture but he doesn't get a divorce - in spite of being milked for her "vacations"

Maybe it's better that she doesn't show up, so she can't disappoint us more than the daughters and sister.

3. He suspects his business partner of undermining him, yet he happily hires a secretary on his recommendation, without even interviewing her

Yes, the whore secretary to whom I have said no and to whom under any circumstances I'm going to say yes. In my opinion she should go to the same place I want to send the sister and the slut daughters.

4. He can't even say no to sloppy seconds with his sister

In my opinion we should be able to tell the sister to fuck off and avoid that scene.

 

[ThaDude1977]

LOL you got to be kidding me with this story? Really? We have gold digging bitches and sloppy seconds from the MC father and possible cheating wife? And this is suppose to be a Incest/Harem game? LOL Dev what are you thinking? I see either a complete rewrite or a abandoned tag in the future.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

LOL you got to be kidding me with this story? Really? We have gold digging bitches and sloppy seconds from the MC father and possible cheating wife? And this is suppose to be a Incest/Harem game? LOL Dev what are you thinking? I see either a complete rewrite or a abandoned tag in the future.

The other option is to sell the company and spend part of the money to buy an island and fill it exclusively with young, non-lesbian women and establish permanent residence there. And leave his wife and his daughters without money. And fire the whore secretary before go to the island. And prohibit all of them and the MC's sister from entering the island.

 

[LionBear]

Thanks for sharing this

 

[WalterHomes]

Thanks for the upload.

 

[Mibera]

but still people really nead to chill about NTR/sharing

 

[TKdropemoff]

I understand...I guess it didn't work out or we didn't know how to adapt it correctly.

Any other opinions?

Hmm, how about doing some research on the target audience you are trying to get? IMPORTANT btw.

Suppose an incest harem game, but Lis are gold digging whores, And you're showing them fucking others, etc. Like, what are you going for here? You legit shot yourself in the foot, bro. I don't even know if this is salvageable for people who already played, And who already put it on ignore. But maybe you can save it by doing a complete REWRITE of the love interest and more. Need to rewrite it all, including the MC to have a spine. But like I said, i don't even know if this is salvageable man. And I do not recommend you asking for votes for fetishes to be in the game, for crying out loud. That's a shit storm a brewing more than this one. Just be upfront about the contents in the game, or what you plan to have in it. But man, this is a MAJOR NOPE for the harem/incest crowd, as you can see.

For me, the game is already going to the bin, and for others too.. You already killed the most important LOVE INTERESTS when it comes to incest... AKA THE FAMILY.

And this is why, folks, KNOW YOUR TARGET AUDIENCE…

 

[rai1230]

I have Milfylicious in my ignore list for some time now but from what I have heard, that one is going downhill as well. has some nice renders though aint gonna lie.

what are you talking about??? its litraly one of the best games with 4.5 rating

 

[BTLD]

wait...
hold up....
he wants people to pay him for .... this "VN" ?

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[Beast Within]

what are you talking about??? its litraly one of the best games with 4.5 rating

thats why I said "last time I heard"

also

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[TKdropemoff]

Wow tons of snow flakes in here that want to turn it into a cookie cutter game that been done a dozen times so they can come back and complain that it is just like all the rest. Do you remember that game that the snowflakes harnessed the dev into changing their games. I don't either cause they all died. Just stop trying to force the story you want and if it is not for you just move on. No everything has to be for snowflakes.

Always a simp for a dev coming into the play every time people are giving VALID criticism.
Legit dev got vanilla tags which in fact WILL ATTRACT THAT CROWD, but too bad it's a NTR crap fest in disguise with
all the elements there waiting as a surprise.

 

[Mibera]

what are you talking about??? its litraly one of the best games with 4.5 rating

you mean that great game that ripped a erotica novel for the story and once it reached the end of the novel the story took a nosedive, that game?

 

[NiteStorm]

TEXT COLOR NEEDS TO BE CHANGED IT BLENDS IN MAKING IT HARD IF NOT IMPOSSIBILE TO READ WHAT I DO NOT GET IS THE PEOPLE THAT BASH THE GAMEAFTER ALL IT'S JUST A GAME
IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT MOVE ON FIND ONE YOU DO LIKE

 

[rai1230]

you mean that great game that ripped a erotica novel for the story and once it reached the end of the novel the story took a nosedive, that game?

wait im confused what happend again ?

 

[InTheWoods]

TEXT COLOR NEEDS TO BE CHANGED IT BLENDS IN MAKING IT HARD IF NOT IMPOSSIBILE TO READ WHAT I DO NOT GET IS THE PEOPLE THAT BASH THE GAMEAFTER ALL IT'S JUST A GAME
IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT MOVE ON FIND ONE YOU DO LIKE

Hilarious. In the same ill-composed message, you've said "Why all the complaints?" and also complained about something. LOL.

 

[NiteStorm]

Hilarious. In the same ill-composed message, you've said "Why all the complaints?" and also complained about something. LOL.

WASN'T BASHING THE GAME JUST TELLING THE DEV ABOUT THE TEXT PROBLEM

 

[Mr.Blackwell]

Ok the dev doing 2 games,this and Milfy Summer,at the same time.I bet he'll get burnt out and both games will be abandon shortly,just like other devolopers that doing two more games at the same time.

 

[zeus04]

:Amore:

 

[ShadowLover]

Wow talk about a very different VN!!! This looks very promising! Love the fact one of the girls is a redhead!! Wonder if at the end you end up pick which girl will get it all or will your split it evenly....

 

[ghosthog]

If hoping they will right this ship, I wouldn't hold your breath. NTR folks might be happy though. This just posted recently on their Patreon:

Faded Bonds 0.2 Notice

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As planned, version 0.2 will be released on February 10th but we would like to say a few things

1.-We are NOT going to change the story we have already done, we will only add options to avoid certain content and we will add some extra content in 0.1 to give a little more context to the scenes.

2.-We will upload previews and Full HD renders that will be in version 0.2 in these days but the more "Uncensored" content will be in the discord, For those who are paying members they will simply have to join the discord and they will have access to its benefits.

As many of you know English is not my native language so if anyone would like to help me to check that all the game dialog is ok you can join the discord and open DM to "WHS".
Whoever helps us with this little problem will have access to one of the patreon levels and its rewards like having the new versions before everyone else and others.

And finally thank you for the support and help you are giving us as we did not expect to have so many interactions.